Heavens, Start by Guarding the Light at Night

To be honest, Zheng Shaoqiu did not play the role of Master well.

I hope there will be a scene where the master is tortured severely. In these novels written by fancy authors, the protagonists all deserve to be tortured. It seems that they are starting out as subordinates, but in fact, all kinds of superiors and superiors are combined together.

Didn't I forget why the protagonist is here? What is the main line? Tiantianwei is safe? No matter what he does? Grandson? The soul of the time traveler is just passing through. Fuck him. Just like a real grandson. You were fighting against Haotian, but you just followed the plot and had fun? You don't dare to appear in front of Sangsang. . . I still want to kill Ning Que. . . What do you think

The biggest failure is Weiping

I hope the author won't write too much about Wei Ping'an, which is a bit overwhelming.

When readers complain about Weiping, the author keeps explaining how reasonable this is. Is this what the readers want? If the author likes his son, then he should make his son the protagonist, and by the way, change Wei Guangming's character label to the male supporting role.

Many people like the characters of Confucius Academy, but I am different. I prefer the character of Guanzhu 🪖

There are not many novels about Jiang Ye. This one is undoubtedly the best among them. The characters are well portrayed. Jiang Ye is originally a world of cannibals. The author describes this aspect vividly.

This should be the best Shoye fan I've ever seen. It has its own ideas and doesn't follow the same routines. But I hope the author can learn the essence of Mao Ni and make the plot have an eye-catching twist. Currently, it's still far behind. The original characters are not charming enough. There is resonance, but the sense of substitution is poor. The original character did not rewrite a certain person, which resulted in a bit scattered. The role of the protagonist is not specific enough, and there is no detailed plot advancement. It gives me the feeling of a behind-the-scenes group text. I still hope not to write like this. The writing is still a bit overwhelming.

One thing to say, the author's writing style is quite good. He writes about the time traveler's heart very naturally. He doesn't kneel down and lick the protagonist. He writes all the characters vividly and not mentally retarded. I hope it won't turn into a novice in the future. Come on!

The main character is a good person, basically he talks about his descendants. Don't tell me about narrative techniques or anything like that. Just watch TV with you and there are no leading or secondary male characters.

Can you please stop writing about peace? It's really annoying.

Can't you write a younger person as a time traveler? Do you have to write about an old man? We are all young people watching, right?

To be honest, it's too procrastinating. Do I need to watch the TV series again, or Zhutian novels?

The more I read, the more I feel that the people in the Glossy Palace are like scoundrels, which is a bit annoying to watch. I don't know what you book friends think.

Thoughts after reading: The author wanted to use a deep tone to show off, but readers pointed out many word order errors. If you fail to show off, you will be...

The author's writing is still good, but it's too slow and creates too many characters and scenes.

Change the title, right? Zhutianliu should change it to single wear, right? You will be able to attract traffic.

What does Yan Se look like in the eyes of book friends? You can write both praise and criticism, but don't raise your altitude

Don't want to say anything. The protagonist was shocked.

If your eyes are not on the protagonist, there is no protagonist in the book, and there is no desire to read it.

The author's writing is quite good. It's the only Shoye fanfic I've read carefully. The description of the characters in the original drama is also relatively objective. Many people say that the protagonist rarely appears, and the novel is biased towards layout and flow. It only needs to promote the development of the situation as a whole. Which big shot keeps fighting on the spot in person? The most important thing is not to follow the master and quarrel with the sky and the earth. With the master in the academy, everything is available. It doesn't matter whether there are others or not. The master doesn't need anyone to help him.

It has the flavor of the original work. The one whose character has changed the most is Wei Guangming, who is a bit shameless and interesting.

It was amazing in the early stage, collapsed in the middle stage, and completely collapsed in the later stage. Summary: For a novel of about one million words to be written like this, it shows that the author is not good at writing!

If there is no distinctive group portrait, who will look at it?

I am an old double-labeled dog. I think of Tang Shenwang, who rebelled against his master and protected his shortcomings. As long as he is a family dog, he must have a braid. Master went to Xiling for his junior brother, saying that indiscriminate killing is not right for ordinary people at least. You went to Tang Dynasty and killed thousands of ordinary people at will for your own personal use. You used public weapons for private use and built the Temple of Light as your own back garden. It is extremely hypocritical.

With this update speed and this advancement speed, I can write a few sentences, one chapter, and one event in one week, unlimited streaming? Authors are not allowed to write about a world for two or three years. It slipped away.

That is to say, update quickly

The protagonist, this couple of bitches, go to hell.

Don't show off when traveling through time, you'll be struck by lightning