Beginning with the Blue-Ringed Octopus

Lovecraft's family tree, which means that Mr. Luo himself is really a descendant of the old days 😏 Q: What should a writer do if he travels through the book and enters the terrifying world in his own novel? Lovecraft gave us the answer! Answer: Give yourself an awesome background! 😁

I feel that it would be more comfortable to watch if the protagonist or the investigator's perspective is removed ( Whether it's the giant octopus fighting other giant beasts or the middle-aged investigator destroying the conspiracy, it's all interesting, but mixed together it's a bit messy This problem can be solved with more updates. Jpg

From free to subscription, it feels like the main plot is dragging. The protagonist sleeps all day long, and a lot of sub-shots are made up of supporting characters. Supporting characters are used to promote the plot. Seven of the ten chapters are supported by supporting characters. The protagonist wakes up in one chapter, does tasks in one chapter, and sleeps in another chapter. It feels like there is no distinction between priorities. Let's see you next time. I will retreat first this time.

The White Worm Lulim, the Great Old One, lives in the great iceberg Igils. Has the ability to be severely cold and frozen, but is weak during the new moon and falls into a deep sleep. No religious order worships Him. He will select some magicians as servants and promise supreme knowledge, but this is a lie. He will devour the magicians after they are attuned to their own bodies. Finally, he was killed by the mage Avager with a sword during the new moon.

The Dark Young is a creature in the Cthulhu Mythos created by the American novelist Howard Philip Lovecraft. The body of this creature is a huge mass with black whip-like tentacles growing on it. There is a huge mouth around the mass, and green mucus is dripping from the mouth. There are huge hooves underneath the body to help it stand. The outline of their bodies resembles that of some kind of tree: their stubby legs are the trunks, and their bodies covered with tentacles are like the canopy. Its height ranges from 12 to 20 feet. Their name "Black Goat Babies" refers to the "seed" in Shub Nicholas's title "The Black Goat of the Forest that Breeds Thousands of Seeds". There is a very close relationship between black goat cubs and Shub Nicholas, and they can only be seen in areas where Shub Nicholas is worshiped. The young black goats act as agents of Shub Nicholas, accepting sacrifices offered to her, being worshiped by believers in her place, and eating those who do not worship her, spreading the mother's gospel throughout the world. Fortunately, they are quite rare.

One of the problems with this book is the author's style of writing, and the other is that the plot line is as loose as the Holy Roman Empire. First of all, let me say that I only read about fifty chapters before I couldn't stand it anymore, and I didn't read any further. Firstly, when you write about the Imperial Port Massacre, the beginning of this paragraph is not written together with the sequel. Instead, it is suddenly included in a chapter in the story of the protagonist passing through the script. I don't know what the purpose of this is besides cutting off the originally integrated dungeon plot. The following sentence is followed by "Lin Kenan did not know that the tragedy occurred." What I want to say is that the readers do not know what the tragedy was about, because you did not explain the relationship between the case and the existing plot in that chapter, leaving the readers completely confused. The characters in this chapter appear in order of priority and not in formality. The police sergeant who has no egg function is mentioned in a big book. The container possessed by the core character is mentioned briefly, and nothing is explained except the name. Giving Western names to a bunch of minions not only makes it difficult to remember, but also distracts attention from the main characters, causing readers to not understand which characters are important and which are insignificant. The perspective jump is too random, for example, in the plot of the temple designer, you just finished talking about designing the temple, and then jumped to the designer's perspective. What's humorous is that you didn't reveal even the slightest possibility that this person is the temple designer. For example, when a normal person writes about my teacher XXX, it means what kind of person my teacher xxx is, but when you write it, it means what kind of person xxx is and he is my teacher. In short, your writing style is like that of Fornac. The scenes keep changing, the characters' perspectives wander, and everyone is gibbering like a psychotic person. The plot line is roughly divided into two parts, one is the protagonist's copy and the other is the indigenous cult. If there is no communication between the two, it is at least better than nothing. Did the protagonist's dungeon experience have any impact on the Order? It seems that there is, but it is not written about the dependents, but it is not written at all. Has the development of the sect had any impact on the protagonist? It seems that there is, after all, it gnawed the white worm. However, the white worm was summoned by another group of cultists, and the ones who attacked the white worm were a group of police. The cult did nothing except shake the protagonist awake, which can only be said to be crucial but insignificant. Double-line designs are very common, but designing two parallel lines is less common. They should be entangled together, right?

No one should read what you write like this. What are you writing about? It's so boring. It's getting worse and worse than when you started.

B'Moth is one of the incarnations of Cthulhu, appearing as an icy cloud glowing with blue, green or yellow fluorescence. It is the embodiment of Cthulhu's spiritual power. It has powerful spiritual abilities and can influence humans through dreams and telepathy. It can transmit horrific nightmares to any corner of the world and is an important medium for Cthulhu to spread his thoughts. It has the ability to control thoughts and can read the thoughts of any animal and human being at will. The former will be easily controlled, and the latter can use its own will to resist this influence. If the influence fails, Beamon will wrap the victim in layers of clouds and gradually devour his consciousness, causing his consciousness to be completely lost and controlled by himself.

Chorazin is one of the incarnations of Cthulhu. It is the self-like will of Cthulhu in his sleep, and is the most accessible part of Cthulhu's mind. Its true form is the same as the majestic Cthulhu, but as blurry and distorted as in a dream, composed of flickering lines, static snowflakes and shining green arcs. It will appear as Cthulhu in dreams, and will only appear in the real world under very rare circumstances, but it can still appear from electronic screens or other areas with high-density psychic and electrical energy. Krasin is used by Cthulhu to influence artists or those who are psionically sensitive in their dreams and is part of his will. So anyone who encounters Cthulhu in a dream has almost certainly been exposed to Krasin

Mi-Go is a type of creature in the Cthulhu Mythos created by American novelist Howard Philip Lovecraft. They are metaplanar creatures, originating from far outside the space-time continuum. Mi-Go possesses science and technology that far exceeds that of humans, and they can travel through the ether with their huge wings. During the Jurassic Era, a group of Mi-Go descended on Earth and fought against the Ancient Ones.

The Deep Ones, the Spawn of Cthulhu

I saw that before it was put on the shelf, book friends who wanted to read the copy could withdraw. Before it was put on the shelf, there were two copies, and each copy ended with two or three chapters. If you want to see the protagonist, just read the first twenty or thirty chapters. The rest will be from the perspective of supporting characters, and the protagonist only appears at the end of each plot. If you don't like the possession flow and memory modification, you can withdraw. The protagonist will possess you and modify your memory. As for the writing style, the writing style is average. The atmosphere is a bit fragmented. The protagonist and the dungeon are both relaxed, but the supporting characters' perspectives are all serious. In terms of plot, the dungeon is all about completing the mission, but the plot from the perspective of the supporting characters is a bit messy. The most uncomfortable thing is that the characters and the plot are not clearly explained (this paragraph contains spoilers), just like the dwarf perspective. I watched it for so long and I really didn't know that there was such a person, but he suddenly appeared as the protagonist of that plot. There are also those five writers. How did they get together? The protagonist doesn't know why. The leader saw Dagon Xin in a dream, but wasn't that the first time the protagonist fell into a dream? Dagon hadn't been created at that time, right? This made me feel so uncomfortable. That's all for now.

To be honest, what is Ke's position? I feel that besides the three pillars of God, the one I am most familiar with is Mr. Ke, but he is always in a sluggish and funny state. He is an important supporting role in the Ke series. Without him, Mr. Ke would not be the same. How different is he from other old people?

Baoht Z'uqqa-Mogg is a god in the Cthulhu Mythology, created by Thomas M. K. Stratman, who first appeared in "Mysterious Manuscripts".        ·-，(Shaggai) When Ghroth attempted to destroy the place, he followed a portion of the Shargai zerg that escaped the dying world and arrived on Earth hundreds of years ago.        ·-，

In a novel about exotic beasts, someone asked me how many female protagonists there are... Are you serious?

The content is not as interesting as the introduction you wrote.

When I see the blue-ringed octopus, I think of the disaster of the ocean. It is said that the disaster of the ocean has killed several blue rings.

A ghoul is a cannibalistic humanoid monster with elastic skin like rubber. They have hooves-like feet, dog-like faces, and pointed claws, and speak in a rapid, cry-like voice. Because they often forage in graves, their bodies are mostly covered with fungi that grow in graves. The ghouls portrayed by Lovecraft are terrifying creatures that live in the network of underground tunnels in various cities; they make pacts with witches and sometimes attack humans. After a long period of time, humans may become ghouls. Ghouls are as intelligent as humans.

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The further you go, the more water you get. I really can't stand it.

The protagonist has the power of the old days, and can also eat the old days and their relatives, so... The protagonist is a new god?

The protagonist develops too quickly and too slowly. It's almost 200 chapters, and nothing about the world background has been explained When I was sleepwalking, I was so tough on the ancient gods, why was I so embarrassed when I woke up and fought against the fleet. Mental pollution in the game will make you crazy at a glance, but it will plant the seeds at a glance, right? Write less about this b human line. The double line in the novel about reincarnation as a spider is so exciting. You have to write one chapter a day and it's smelly and long. It's not fun at all. Players have less roles than NPCs, which is quite funny Earlier I thought it was a joke when I saw Big Gun, but now it seems that I am going to write a Cthulhu prequel? What are you going to do, author! You have an outline and you still play like this!

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It's not difficult to be first

Will the killer whales be eaten by the fishmen?