Naruto: the Diary Is Exposed, but He Is Chased by the Kunoichi

Okay, okay, a series of games such as Rise of ○ clan will be followed by articles.

Rich Woman

The opening is a bit big and can easily crash, but if handled well it can be very impressive, it depends on the author's skill 😃😃😃

Damn it, I eat expired R food every day, so your body is fine, right?

Grandma has a diary, but the three Yunyin sisters don't have one?

Just tell them that they like married women and ask them to find someone to marry before they come back 🤓

The subject matter is quite good and I'm quite interested in it, but the occasionally outrageous dialogues are a bit too strong. The rest is okay. Let's check it out again (ಥ_ಥ)

Diary flow: Naruto is shopping 😎

Although, the diary writing part is great

Sunset Red

After reading ten chapters, I felt a little bit addicted. I didn't know the experience value when I first started the system (then I wrote a few dozen words, maybe to educate readers who don't understand the experience value?), And then the most unbearable thing was when Hinata asked Hinata to treat you to dinner, but you were not polite and ordered dozens of strings (if it weren't for the diary copy, why would the person treat you, I thought Because he's handsome?), And then asked others to help guide him, and he was distracted in turn, and he made sure that he didn't lose his mind, and the result was as polite as farting. Do you know the difference between an orphan whose parents died and couldn't even learn the three body skills, and Princess Hyuga of Konoha? , The most important thing is that the protagonists of this kind of diary flow do not know that others have copies of the diary, so they seek death inexplicably), and even told Neji that he could break his fate, and even used Naruto and Obito as examples (I tested, even if a person does not have Kyuubi, his father is Hokage, and his mother is Uzumaki, his achievements will not be bad, and one is Uchiha , In other words, Kakashi is called the tail of the crane, you really think he is the tail of the crane, no matter how much you fish, he is better than the civilians. If the guide ninja does not teach, the civilian ninja will only know a few ninjutsu in his life.) In this world of blood and destiny, you want to break destiny, cannon fodder who can't even learn the three body arts without a system, how dare you say that? (This is what Hinata said at someone else's house: It's not invincible if you have a system. You jump here before you have developed). Also, Neji is one year older than Hinata. Neji actually knows the protagonist's bastard in the same class. You know him in the same class. He has graduated as a genin by this time (in the anime, Neji knew Naruto, the bastard, during the chunin exam). After reading several diaries, there are a few bad things that I just won't change. The first one is that the protagonist is inexplicably afraid of death when he doesn't know that others have a copy of the diary. 2. The female character will definitely fall in love with the protagonist for no reason.

1 I barely read Chapter 40. The overall feeling is that it is an urban novel with a Naruto shell. No, it is an urban Naruto fanfic with the name of the Naruto character. The character's personality has completely changed, right? 2 Chiyo? And Chiyo and Ebizo? Author, are you serious? 3 The author is proficient in water escape 4 Diary article What is a diary, brother? Write once every half month? Or write once a month? I wrote four diaries with more than a hundred chapters, which are also great 5 It depends on the situation. Is the author in the palace?

Sunset Red

I really can't stand this kind of protagonist. I usually don't talk about the protagonist in comments. You told Neji in Bloodline that hard work can change your destiny. You don't have a diary and you can't even master the three bodies. How do you have the nerve to say this seriously?

Won the Easter match? Or is it a fake corpse?