Global Shelter Game

The front part looks like it was written by a human, but the back part smells too strong of AI.

Judging from the opinions of most book friends so far, the poisonous point is that pig's feet cannot do business. When buying other people's things, they don't bargain or even buy them at a premium. . Even put yourself in someone else's shoes to comfort yourself. . . Could you please the author to check how many people are complaining in the comments, revise them appropriately, and don't be immersed in your own world. Just this one poisonous point will dissuade many people. If you don't know how to write transactions, you can even skip it vaguely. . . For those who want to read, if you don't care about this, please read without thinking. Everything else is acceptable so far.

Well, I personally feel that some book friends always think the protagonist is stupid because the author is not very good at writing about transactions. Because most readers are not very familiar with the details of the transaction, they cannot judge whether it is a loss or a profit. They all rely on the author's nonsense. For example, one green accessory is exchanged for a hundred white accessories. The author describes this transaction as a small profit, and readers feel that it is a profit. The author describes it as a loss of blood, which makes the readers feel cheated. So many book friends think that the reason why the protagonist is pitted is because the author keeps using words such as "a bit of a loss", "no way" and "bought at a premium". This makes the protagonist look stupid. If the author writes like this: "Exchanging raw materials for raw materials will make you vomit blood, then there is no other way but to use industrial products to exchange for raw materials. Let them experience what it means to crush an industrial refuge." "He would have to thank us." If you talk more like this, no matter what the transaction is, you have to say that I will never lose money. In this case, readers will feel that the protagonist is very sexy. As for the drawings, there is no such thing as a premium. Especially the weapon blueprints, which are considered the core blueprints of the Wasteland game. Not only does it represent "security" worth tens of thousands of dollars, it is also a golden chicken that constantly lays golden eggs. Theoretically, no matter how much money you have, you have to buy it. When everyone gets rich, the price of such drawings will skyrocket. Not to mention buying it at a premium, it doesn't hurt to call him "adopted father". If you buy it, you will earn money.

If you go too far, if the risk goes from 0.001% To 0.01%, You won't dare to send it out. You will have to pay a huge premium to get the green item. Once you get it, it will be useless and you won't dare to use it. How can other passers-by live with at least 25% risk. Your android will either come back intact or die, and you can't accept the risk of losing some durability, and it's still very low.

I have a question. Just because you have a water purifier doesn't mean you have water. Where does your water come from?

First of all, the author is as bad at math as ever, and the data in many places makes my head spin! Secondly, I have never had a clear understanding of the value of items, which is reflected in the text by always being taken advantage of, buying high and selling low (these things can be seen in the free chapters). But the author seems to have never been aware of these problems. Furthermore, the upgrade setting of the shelter and the protagonist's skills are not easy to evaluate! What is the use of establishing so many branch bases? If the bases cannot quickly maneuver with each other, it will be a burden. Who is a good person who wants to open a small base for survival in the apocalypse? Spread combat power and resources? Isn't it expanding, expanding, and expanding again? The setting of doubling the time for each expansion is even more impressive! The external setting is really the real world, and the shelter-related pure game data is too fragmented! In the previous chapter, we were talking about checking the motorcycle's fuel tank, but when we arrived at the shelter, it turned into a tram. Earlier I was talking about the game setting that firearms do not consume ammunition, and during the recruitment process we talked about ammunition. Even if the player is a prosthetic body and consumes core upgrades, the recruited members directly consume parts to upgrade? ! There are too many flaws, not rigorous enough, and too fragmented. I hope the author will polish it well, and his settings still need to be self-consistent; he also needs to learn to proofread the article carefully to avoid inconsistency. The mountains are high and the roads are far, we are destined to meet again!

Could the author be more serious in his writing? If I can't remember, can you make a list and write it down? The data you just wrote in the last chapter changes immediately in the next chapter. Can you be a little more responsible?

The protagonist's business "genius" + Holy Mother + Self-comfort + 94% probability does not dare to try, can't stand it anymore and slips away

It is possible to use a 100% formula to spread huge amounts of materials? In the end, I only made a little money to offset the price! Bad brain? Spread out the 100% white formula! Isn't it much better than buying a little bit of the cost of production? This stupid game doesn't have to pay to read posts, right? Just by looking at a white object once, you can earn millions or tens of millions of white goods. Then you tell me how much you earned?

See the first chapter of Retreat on the shelves! To be honest, the idea of ​​this book is quite attractive to me, but the author's IQ is flawed, and the trading data is like shit. If it's free, I think I can read it, but if I pay to read it, I feel resentful.

Forget it, the more I read, the more annoying I am. Every time I sell something, I always sell it at a low price, and every time I buy something, I always buy it at a high price. Sometimes I have no idea. Why do I have to sell at the bottom when there are so many people?

Chapter 8: Death from poison 💀 I can't bear it anymore

The author really doesn't know how to do business and is not sensitive to data. Take the initial trading product. If the failure rate is 25%, the cost for others to make one is almost 27 white. If you sell 30, can't others sell it? Don't always pursue a zero failure rate, pay attention to cost-effectiveness

When your weapons are the top and rarest, you don't need to sell them cheaply. I sell them to you to save face, not to give you any discount. . . And you can't produce much, and you are facing a market of 100 million people. . . . . But then again. . . With so many people there, there was no grouping. . .

Isn't it going to be another forum where everyone chats and hugs each other and beats up Japan? I've seen a lot of people's stories that follow this routine. The author is crazy about himself and talks about a people's crisis. As a result, everyone has the strength to fight against Japan, but they don't push the main story...

Brother, you are not in industrial production. In terms of productivity, it is no different from a manual workshop, and the time cost does not count at all.

There is only one bad point at the moment, which is the transaction of green pistols. I can accept not bargaining at the beginning, but you agreed to buy it at the original market price, which is really a bit impatient.

Those who can read the first ten chapters are all big guys. 👍 Although I want to read this kind of subject, I really can't bear the first few chapters 🙂

1. In the early stage, "Business and Transaction Production" will always occupy your own time and electricity 2. The message is one part at a low price. "One hundred million people" only earn 10,000 people. When the news spreads, you also earn 10,000 parts, and you can also earn "fame". 3. "Real low-price news" and "good reputation" can make you like a fish in water among 100 million people. Not to mention 99% less open and covert targeting, at least 90% less, right? 4. Just by relying on a 100% success rate, how many parts can be saved by 100 million people? How much energy would be wasted by 100 million people? How much would the survival rate of 100 million people increase? How much do you earn? 5. Would you buy a construction plan with a 100% success rate that can be purchased with just one part? 6. If two people have the same goal, one only sells news and the other only sells finished products. I dare say that the one who sells news can defeat the one who sells finished products in one sentence. It's not on the same level at all. So the author, your book fell into disgrace from the beginning.

In fact, it is more cost-effective to use 4 green parts to produce a pistol with a success rate of 96, but adding a green part with a success rate of 100 is a loss.

The initial formula of green body armor is 2 green and 15 white, with a success rate of 65% and a single unit cost of 330 white. The protagonist sells it for 300 bucks. Isn't this forcing others to die? !

Holy Virgin, those who watch the Dark series can be persuaded to quit.

The profit margin is not even 50%. You have to know that you have a system to see the success rate. If others sell according to your price, they will lose everything. If you open a hangar every day and there is not enough materials, there will be no one.

I think the most criticized economic problem is the smallest one. It's understandable even if the author wants to control the growth rate. What's most incomprehensible is that the shelter novel doesn't describe the feeling of the shelter, so it loses points. It's too game-like. The construction of the shelter is completely lacking in life.

Did this change to AI after it was put on the shelves? I can't even stand the free one.

It can be said that the author has no business sense. Do you know how big the market of 100 million people is? When you make a water purifier, you can add parts to make it 100% complete. These are your production materials. If the production materials are fed to your mouth, you won't eat them? Do you assemble the finished products one by one yourself and sell them? You earn 5-6 parts for a finished product, but only 4-500 parts after four or five days? It's so funny. You just go to the chat room and shout that you have a 100% formula and the price is 1-2 parts. A lot of people come to you for information. You suppress the formula for two hours and get tens of thousands of parts easily. Then you publish it directly to the public, making money and fame. You don't know how to write, or even bargain. You can't even understand the seller's market for a house, and you just come up and make a deal. Isn't this just screening readers? I can't bear it