Marvel's Paper Talk About Funerals

Advantages: The writing is good, the rhythm in the early stage is okay, it is a typical slow-paced beginning I can't say the other advantages and disadvantages. You might say it's because of the slow pace. At this pace, it doesn't add to the setting or the worldview. Apart from the beginning background, it's just a small branch line that has little to do with the protagonist, and it hasn't been finished yet. The proportion of daily life and emotional lines, especially the emotional line, is too long, especially the emotional writing. Although it is not bad for male videos, it cannot be called excellent. It's a genre that wouldn't make you abandon the book if it's longer, but it's a type that you can't read just as a romance novel. If the author doesn't introduce the story line first, it would be difficult to understand the length of the story. Putting aside the issue of plot arrangement, the author prefers to add scenes directly in the text as the author, which does not affect the perception and immersion. However, due to the slow progress, it seems more abrupt and meaningless Looking at the current progress as a whole, I have expectations for the future of this book. Although the recommendation is slow, the tone is still relatively solid. However, if the focus is on romance, the emotional part is not qualified for this type of novel.

Be decisive in killing, don't care about the protagonist or not, and don't lick the protagonist group. Now Marvel books have to do the opposite. Look at the better ones now, basically they have nothing to do with the protagonist group, and they all have grievances. Except for Eunuch Mi's, basically all of his are eunuchs. In the future, the protagonist can develop into a dimensional demon, leading the underworld and heaven to come to Marvel and devour the Marvel world.

When I came up and saw a woman, I couldn't walk. It was disgusting.

You don't know Marvel, you only know a little about it. Have you never read the setting collection? MCU has comics to complete the setting. It is a derivative comic of MCU and is used to complete the setting. It is not the kind of 616 you understand, it is a derivative of the movie.

I endured two volumes with nearly 60 chapters, and I'm sorry that I can't stand it anymore. At first, I came here for Marvel, but then I read the introduction and said it was slow to gain steam, and Marvel was in its mid-to-late stage. Then I read the first three chapters and thought it was okay. I wanted to say it was slow to gain steam, so let's just treat it as folklore. Then, I found out that only the first three chapters were interesting? It doesn't matter if you write something original about the world of fandom, as long as the plot is exciting, or if you write about daily life, it's okay. I really like watching interesting daily life of fans. But has the author ever considered a question: Who reads fan fiction to see the daily life of the protagonist and a bunch of original characters? How much of the nearly sixty chapters are occupied by daily life? How much space does it take up, including various over-and-over-explained settings and inexplicable psychological activities? In addition, the portrayal of the protagonist before time travel is a bit interesting. After time travel, he is a young aborigine and a female ghost has made him unable to speak? Don't talk about how a wife suddenly appeared and was at a loss. Even if you say that he felt guilty towards the female ghost because he was forced into a ghost marriage to save his life, wouldn't it be more reasonable? Isn't it realistic that he lived as an orphan for so many years in his previous life? No matter how much love you lack, you will become so humble? I read in the comment section that they didn't react when being targeted by Braised Eggs later. Are you feeling aggrieved by all the conspiracies and schemes? I won't comment on the rest of it until I see it. As far as the current summary is concerned, the author's control of the rhythm of the plot is just like the control of the priority of each chapter. He has completely failed to grasp the key points. He clearly has good writing skills, but after writing it, it is like a running account, giving people a feeling of eating but eating. The feeling of the air, it is said that folklore does not have the atmosphere of folklore, and that Marvel does not have the refreshing feeling of Marvel. When I look at the protagonist's character every day, he shrinks like a licking dog. The whole story is also filled with all kinds of completely unnecessary explanations and repeated psychological descriptions, and other small things will not be mentioned. Although I haven't read it, I hope the author can work hard. His writing skills are good. I suggest you look at those who are not as good at writing as you but have good grades and learn about their rhythm control and character creation. You are not a slow-burner, you are just weak.

It can only be said that the bull's head is wrong and the horse's mouth is wrong. Are you really writing about Marvel? After reading it all, it seems that it has nothing to do with what is happening in Marvel, and then the power system does not match up. If it is this kind of setting, the early writing must be linked to the original plot to make it not feel blunt. It has been written for so long and is completely irrelevant. After watching it all, I feel like I can't find the main mission. What is the final goal? I interacted with my family and chatted with NPCs in Novice Village throughout the whole process. The writing is mediocre and not a novice, but you can't say it's good. Can't find a professional counterpart. Your writing method should focus more on the scope of Eastern cultivation, not the Western side. It's like you read a book about architecture and then you come to stir-fry. This method means that you know the basic principles of stir-fry, but the food you stir-fry will never be delicious. Your writing style reminds me of the books written by Wu Jiu when I was studying. Maybe you don't know him, but he wrote about the Shixiu Immortal style. My suggestions are twofold. First, write about folklore ghosts. A little Taoist is a bit more cliche. The goal of upgrading is to become a great monk. The story is a bit old-fashioned, but the method is not afraid of being old, and the most important thing is that some people will suffer. Second, write Hong Kong mystery novels. Your writing style is very consistent with this. There are few people writing about Hong Kong variety shows, but many people take advantage of this opportunity to reap a lot of dividends. Now it's saturated. But I found that there are not many articles about Hong Kong. Not to mention well-written. The simplest thing is that you can follow the plot of the movie, as long as you don't be stupid and touch the poisonous points, such as giving away the girl, writing a dead date, and everyone will die. Because there are so few articles about Hong Kong, readers can tolerate you even if your writing skills are not that good. Recommend the second one

Not to mention the three golden chapters, the "past life" and multi-perspective plots in the first seven chapters can be deleted. The past life is very unattractive. What most readers click here to see is the oriental-colored paper craftsman in the Marvel world. This is not a female channel that does not like a life experience introduction or prequel of a grudge with deep suffering and a long length. The correct answer is to go straight to the topic. In the follow-up, you can briefly introduce the past life in the article to shape the protagonist. Because of the former reason, to be honest, I read the first few chapters at a glance, but I also found that after reading for a long time, I couldn't find out who the protagonist is, what his name is, what he can do, and what he wants to do...

Although I haven't read this book yet, the 800-word introduction doesn't even mention a single word about the book's content. This is the first time I've seen it.

Wen Qingbing at the beginning 😒

The writing style is good, but the subject matter is inappropriate. Marvel is not suitable for combining too deeply with Chinese elements. It feels a bit nondescript. People who like to watch Marvel and Chinese supernatural people will not like to watch it. Such a good writing style, please write something else as soon as possible. I sincerely recommend, maybe it will become popular.

How can I put it this way? I felt weird reading this book. If the protagonist was in an American horror or other comprehensive horror film, it would feel right and professional! But the main character, a paper maker, actually went to Marvel. No matter how you look at it, it's weird, or maybe it's just my own taste! This book is quite good in terms of writing and content, but it's not suitable for me. I still like the protagonist to go into the world of horror movies!

I feel like it's a romance novel, but when it comes to Marvel, it's like selling sheep over dogs. I was fooled by the title 😡

Scenes that should be serious are mixed with too much playful content Places that should be relaxed are inexplicably written very seriously

It started out okay, but after ten chapters it took a turn for the worse. I hope you can write a masterpiece when we meet again in the next book. Goodbye.

I was quite persuaded to give up. After reading the third volume, the protagonist is really useless and has no brains. He is led by the nose. The author's writing style is good, but the characterization of the characters is too ordinary, which makes it difficult for people to have the desire to read.

So it has nothing to do with Marvel. What Marvel name did you choose? Selling dog meat for sale?

It took me 15 chapters of the second volume to meet the protagonist. Your foreshadowing is really awesome! ! It's so outrageous, I don't even know how to watch it. .

The book is a good book and the writing is very good, but it is too detailed, which is a bit inappropriate in today's high-pressure, fast-paced society.

The ratio of the number of chapters to the number of comments and posts is 6:1, I dare not read it. Generally speaking, 1:1 is barely watchable, 2:1 is basically 💩, 6:1...🥵

How can I put it? It is actually very well written, but there is too much daily life and not enough excitement. What is the starting point now? What everyone wants to read is a river of blood. There is also a daily seasoning, but it cannot dominate. At present, when I read this book, I skip it every day and basically just go straight to the main story. And the author does not plan to do a wave of courtyards, so there is no need. I came here for this title because I hope to see the cultural conflict between the East and the West, or to watch Lu Bu fight Qin Qiong. I really don't want to insert a plot about a courtyard in it.

This novel is good, but the shortcoming is that it has not touched the main storyline of Marvel so far. Advantages The story itself is very interesting.

The first few chapters are good, they kill decisively, but what the hell happens after rebirth? She is both a sister and a wife, and the emotions are written in a mess. I couldn't see any more, so I gave up.

I was quite satisfied with the chapters in my previous life, but there was a strange smell after my rebirth. To be honest, I don't know how old the author is. From the author's words, it seems that he still has a wife, so I don't understand it at all. The most basic ability of any adult to stand up is not reflected at all in the protagonist in your novel, just like a child. Even a man who has never communicated with women cannot be as overwhelmed as a teenager when facing women. This confusion should be reflected in details, such as ignorance about the differences between men and women or emotional interactions. How can you get into a relationship with a woman you don't know well but have a relationship with? At this time, she is just an intimate stranger to you, and she doesn't know how to speak to strangers? But you will soon treat each other like guests again, which proves that you know how normal people should behave. So what the hell was your embarrassment in the previous chapters? Something to disgust readers? If you don't change the first few chapters after rebirth, any new reader will be in a mess. If you have strong tolerance, just skip these chapters if you get a chance. If you have weak tolerance, see you directly.

Keep writing, author, and put it on the shelves quickly. With your current data, I can't even give you a monthly vote, and I won't vote for you after two votes. Come on, I'm optimistic about you. Don't care what others say, just follow your current thoughts. Trust me, if you write it down, it will definitely become popular. Blood Book is not afraid of a slow pace, as long as it doesn't mess up the flow. The master over there in the history area only has more than 100 words of plot in a 3,000-word article. It's all nonsense. If you don't still make the list there, you are much better than him.

The book is a good book. After reading more than ten chapters, it flows smoothly and the characters are full. The author's plot connection is also very comfortable. But I just couldn't pass what I thought was a big setting, and I felt uncomfortable. Marvel can't follow the traditional ghost theory, because Marvel has set it up from beginning to end. Even the Master and Kunlun are set. At first I thought it would bring skills and the like into Marvel, which would be equivalent to additional plug-ins and be compatible with the settings. But just follow the traditional ghosts and gods (where there are ghosts and gods, there are immortals and gods). Then it will be difficult to get in. The first generation of Marvel's Avengers were the Sorcerer Supreme and Odin five thousand years ago, which is equivalent to setting the overall framework of the Marvel Universe (the Celestials created the earth to incubate Thiam). So the above is the hurdle in my heart that I can't overcome. This book is really good, but I can't stand it. Withdrawn

Okay. The introduction is very clear, so I won't ask for trouble. Goodbye.

Hail Mary, everyone killed because of pig's feet is a bad person! So the pig's foot is a holy mother! After all, people who kill people don't care about the quality of others. Apart from black and white, most of the world is exquisite gray.

Before I saw it on the shelves, I wanted to ask, don't you know how to summon spirits? If you recruit the hero's father and ask him, won't you know everything? I still have to listen to others and be blackmailed. I really force the plot just for the sake of writing. And why there is nothing said from the second to the fourth level. This makes me feel like I am watching a pirated version, skipping so much.

All I can say is that my eyes dropped to the floor when it came to the second set...

I think it's okay... At least I didn't fall into Marvel's routine... I wrote something new