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I have exhausted all my talents. I can sew everything and don't have anything of my own to glue it together. It's just a piece of chocolate crispy water cake.

I just came from Rupifagu Taoist Heart, and I felt that the book was well written. I am also an old reader of Zha Yue, so I stopped by to read the author's new book. My current feelings after reading the chapters are as follows: 1. The first 50 chapters are actually not very good. I feel that I can read it, but it is not exciting enough. I am basically sure that this book will not be as popular as the first one on the list. As of now. 2. Some poisonous points are really discouraging. For example, the protagonist ate the witch's meat and fingers in order to gain time. Even if her meat has this effect, because she will definitely become the heroine, at least only the protagonist cannot eat it, because it is really a bit irritating, and she will become the heroine after all. People in the harem, think about this female character who will become the harem of the male protagonist in the future. She often has her fingers and flesh eaten by the male protagonist. This is already extremely poisonous, not to mention that in most online novel environments today, the protagonist who eats human flesh is already poisonous, and the food she eats is from the harem, so she took it. At this point, all I can say is that I hope the author can change the setting later, for example, so that the heroine can already control the power and directly give time, without the need to eat human flesh, or if it is a little more astringent, she can now give time by exploding a meal. It is really too poisonous. 3. As for the previous reader's comment about the little boy and girl and the male and female souls of Lei, since what I saw is the changed plot, I will not comment. As far as the current plot is changed, it is indifferent to this character and will not offend people. 4. To be honest, I persisted until more than seventy chapters only because I am an old fan who has a different view of the world (eating human flesh). In short, in my opinion, this book really started to get better. It was after the appearance of the female character Second Princess based on the Valkyrie in more than fifty chapters that it started to be written in a decent way. Many of the previous ones were a bit, well, in short, not exciting enough I still hope that the author will work hard. I hope that this time the author can have the same feeling as the two books of Rupi Fagu Taoist Heart and Dragon Master.

Chapter 4 begins with a whole chapter of random conversations with a witch, bragging, and trash talk, which is enough to persuade many people.

Witch

On the shelves, you can't even see the possibility of the undead army, there are no movies, and there isn't even much plot about the necromancer. The necromancer openly announces his identity but no one cares. Do you know what a necromancer is? Everyone the necromancer pulls up is other people's parents, children, and their loved ones are pulled up by others to work for others after their death. This is an behavior that is impossible to accept in any culture. The result is that the necromancer is upright and upright in your case? Do you know what you are writing?

I came to see the natural disaster of the undead. I came to see one person fight against the whole world Not to see the harem, not to see love and love

Let's talk about some shortcomings of this book so far. The first one is that I feel that the protagonist talks too much nonsense, is verbose, and has some conflicts in outlook. The second thing is that man and woman. I just saw it, but I haven't watched it since. Does anyone really like this kind of thing? The third is about the issue of cannibalism, which is a bit perverted The fourth is that you are so ridiculous about a legendary field, but the result is a magic-like spell that does not feel very powerful, and there is a limit on the number of times.

Are there any people who stand by Zhu Zhiyue in the fandom area now?

Author, why don't you return to being a fan?

There is no hint of familiarity with the plot in the back, but the plot before it is released shows a little bit, and when playing the Undead Catastrophe style, I don't know where to get powerful corpses... I don't know much about the plot later. To offend a top force for someone who may not be the eighth-ringed person and may be an enemy, saying that he needs her power... I remember that the protagonist can also get the eighth-ringed bone dragon, right? Even if they are inferior in strength, they are still better than those with calculations, right? Do you have to add that woman? If it really doesn't work, why don't you call the teacher? What did the teacher use it for?

After the disaster is over, I have undergone a great change!

Whenever I see an author writing about necromancers, I think that no matter how awesome the novel is, in reality I can't even stand the smell of corpses.

If you want to make money, why don't you write well? What junk food.

The author really wants to give readers something private.

I guess I'm going to pounce. Between the lines, you can see that the relationship between men and women is still written in that old-fashioned way, which is very verbose.

A witch with the ability to travel through time? Go, it's so scary. Since such a high-level ability user has been captured by the protagonist, tsk tsk tsk, get out of here. You said that the witch has the ability to be reborn after death. I still dare to read it. Now, in the first chapter, a minor supporting character may have the ability to travel through time. I really don't dare to read it. The rest of it will be unbelievable.

There is a bug in this book that cannot be solved. This book will definitely collapse. A god who has fallen in history has unlimited energy to power his war machine. What about the other way around? How did your enemy beat your god to death? Another point is that in this book, the Dark Moon God is not even one of the nine righteous gods, and the authority of the Dark Moon God is still secondary to the authority of the righteous gods. You, a secondary god, can use infinite energy, so what about the nine righteous gods? The conflict is too great

I couldn't find a good-looking picture of Marlenia, so I'll put a picture of my wife first

This is bad. The power system, chapter rhythm, and protagonist's power grew too fast and collapsed, so it could only be ended hastily. I can only say that the book is good, and the author's writing is not bad, but he has no control over it and has too little experience.

Is the protagonist dark? Regardless of whether a necromancer is a virgin or a normal person, a necromancer should kill people whenever he sees them. If he can't kill them, he should kill them if he has the chance. They should all be trained to become undead brothers, causing natural disasters of the undead and destroying all living beings. For such a great profession as the necromancer, there is no novel in which the protagonist triggers a natural disaster of the undead. Is there such a book? Beg on your knees.

It gives me the feeling that it is trying to pretend to be very deep, but the writing power is not enough, and the pretense is a bit weak. I want to write about a deep political struggle, but it is still too shallow, and even a little random to strengthen the enemy camp and force the protagonist to have trouble. In fact, if you change the subject, your writing power should be enough.

Is this book the first book in Zha Yueqidian?

Good guy, I've been reading Zhu Zhiyue's books since elementary school, and I'm still reading them now that I'm in college.

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

Is this eunuch or is it over?

I have read chapter 182 so far. The protagonist is already at level 6. It is known that the highest level for mortals is level 9. The next step may be to ascend to the gods or not far away. The author in the book review area seems to be a Majia number. How many words does he usually write in a book?

The protagonist's game has reached the fifth version. The final boss of the fourth version is level 100. So the protagonist should be at level 80 or 90. How come the protagonist doesn't know many of the spells and abilities he encounters? He has to rely on others to explain to him

The author's writing is very good, and it is definitely worth reading and subscribing. Recommend a book to kill decisively, sharply and happily, "Old man picks up rags in time and lives by making bad movies"

The author didn't change the platform! Why is his profile picture gone?