Bleach: My Zanpakuto Is a Chainsaw Demon

Disgusting, the main point of this book is that the main character is a chainsaw demon. Now what, Aizen is a dominating demon? Is Balegang the devil representing death? I really don't know what the author thinks about this plot of sending cheat codes to other people? Visit all the poisonous spots?

The writing is quite good, and it can be seen that there are some thoughts. Add it to your bookshelf and keep it. But Brother, I beg you not to write that miserable smile of yours, especially the chapter about the graduation exam. The corners of the protagonist's mouth "raised" and then turned into a "wry smile". I feel better than this even if you wrote it as if the upper body suddenly convulsed and laughed wildly. There is also a small logic error in the clearing scene at the beginning of the chapter. The left hand thrown ended up being the right hand 🙂

Let me ask you this, if you traveled to the world of Death for a while, would you wear underwear or a crotch cloth every day? Are underwear highly technical?

I bit the bullet and finished reading it. It was quite interesting at first, but it started to feel boring until the plot of Balegang and other demons appeared. I originally thought that the Chainsaw Demon was a plug-in for the protagonist, but if it is not the only one, it would definitely be a bit less fun. And later on, some original plots of Chainsaw Man were forcibly inserted into the world of Death, which felt super messy and specious. Isn't it just that the fandom just gives the protagonist plug-ins, and then relies on the well-known plot to make trouble? Now everyone knows about the whole Future Demon, and then it feels like the only point of interest in this book is gone.

Chainsaw Man is just a cheat. If you haven't seen it, it won't affect you. I'll make do with the cover and character settings first, and change them later when I have time. If you have any setting problems or poisonous points, please point them out. The author has not saved the manuscript (head held high and proud). If there are any problems, I will humbly accept your suggestions.

It can be seen that I want to write well, but I want to follow the plot but I can't understand clearly. Hinamori Momo's mistakes caused me to lose control. The plot of the Riddler conspiracy gives people a sense of frustration that there is no brain, no strength, and the plot is confused.

The plot before Bailegang was quite interesting... If the protagonist was a demon alone, it would be fun to use the immortal body to leverage the Reiatsu rules of the God of Death, but when other demons are mixed in, it feels like the forced insertion is very unsmooth.

The characters are awesome OOC. . . I haven't seen Chainsaw Man and I don't have any feelings about it.

Aizen plus Ms. Ma, this high-end game can be played

Didn't Rukia have Bengyoku in her body only after she gave her power to Ichigo?

All I can say is interesting! This is the biggest advantage. But the further I read, the more chaotic it becomes. The author's way of handling the layout of the protagonist makes me feel confused and like an idiot. It would be fine if it feels like a mystery article, but it is not at all. It is a mess and out of the control of the reader. You must know that the reader's perspective is a God's perspective, but it feels like it is difficult to see the plot arrangement from the God's perspective. The arrangements for the protagonist are all revealed and then written. The protagonist arranged the story. This uncontrollable feeling makes the reader from a God's perspective feel terrible. If it were interesting, there would be no such feeling. There are also various female characters. Currently, there are three people who have expressed their relationship, but only one has confirmed the relationship. I don't understand the meaning of the other two characters. There is no mention of whether the relationship is physical or emotional. It is not mentioned at all, which is too white. There is also the most serious writing problem. It seems that the sentences are smooth, but in fact there is always a feeling that the upper and lower sentences are not connected well. As a result, I have to read every sentence carefully in the early stage, otherwise I will not know why this is happening. This is the most serious problem.

The protagonist you write like this is like a clown. Others are adding more characters, but the protagonist is only a chainsaw demon. You will beat Aizen on the head later...

Well, that's it... Is there any possibility~ Although Death's world view background is spoken and written in Japanese, it is actually not on Earth, let alone Japan. The relationship between Karakura and Japan is like the relationship between Nanzhanbuzhou in Journey to the West and our Tang Dynasty/Asia. Or to use a more popular metaphor, that is the relationship between the "inner circle" of the fox demon matchmaker and our world.

Everyone else has demons, so what's the use of your plug-in?

Haru, Harribel, Nellie, Unohana Retsu, Yoruichi, Broken Peak, Matsumoto Rangiku, the First Gotei 13th Division (female)... Etc.

It should be the best Bleach fanfic in terms of plot layout. It seems a bit messy to add more Chainsaw Man elements, but it brings new possibilities and directions to the plot development and deduction. From the back, it seems that the author has managed it very well. Unfortunately, it seems that the recognition is not high and the results are not very good. What a pity.

The integration of the world is okay. The problem now is that the daily updates are a bit sparse and not enough to watch.

Aizen is just a little Karami in this situation. Now the two worldviews are so tightly intertwined that no one knows what is going on with the Soul King. It is equivalent to the plot going crazy. He no longer has to worry about the plot and can only think of ways to be a bad guy to increase his own combat power. Now even how to ensure that he can survive is unknown. It was actually quite fun to write, as it was carried out in multiple threads.

No more writing? Don't have to watch anymore? So long