Please, Designer, Let Me Earn Another 100 Million Yuan

I completely don't understand why the author would forcibly reduce the intelligence of the protagonist, making him look like a fool...

The first chapter is very good, but the second and third chapters are long-winded. Firstly, the progress is slow, and secondly, one thing repeatedly emphasizes an obsessive-compulsive disorder, which is unscientific in itself. If it were you, would you play a game that you are not interested in at all for several hours? Obsessive-compulsive disorder is not so forced. Although the three golden chapters are no longer as golden as they used to be, they are very important and if there are fewer chapters, you must not divide them into chapters without emotional arousal, which is not conducive to follow-up reading. It is recommended to condense chapters two and three into one chapter and add discovery points. For example, set the time to half an hour, and after half an hour of swiping and swiping, I found that there was nothing new, so I remembered that I didn't spend any money. I continued to force the game with the idea of ​​​​guessing the creator, and swishing and swiping went to the end of the chapter to leave room for imagination, such as Hey, is this? For example, the golden finger for deduction questions

Seeing that Yuanshen was persuaded to quit, it's not that I don't like Yuanshen, but that I feel disgusted. It's purely a coincidence. Because of this thing, more than half of Welfare Ji's original colorful COS are the same. It's not that I don't like to see Bai Huahua's Welfare, but the exact same COS is really boring, which makes my taste more and more serious now. Genshin Impact must bear a large part of the responsibility. I have been quitting for a while now, and I have sex with my friends every day to see if I can reduce the taste a little bit. After all, I am really worried that one day I will become a pervert.

This protagonist has no plans at all, no personality charm at all, and is full of ideas to plunder the system. He has no logic of normal people's thinking. Purely relying on the author to fill him with talents and push the plot, it makes people feel that any ordinary person with a normal IQ can do better than him. I can only say that the more I watch it, the more I feel my brain has been insulted.

It's not very good. It's purely about limiting the protagonist's ability to survive or not, and whether he or she has the ability. The games I made were not very good, and there was still a lot of water. It's fine as casual writing, but it's better to have a free app to read this kind of thing….

The setting of Goldfinger is unclear, the plot advances too slowly, the text is wrong, the conflicts are unclear, and what annoys me the most! The puppet protagonist controlled by Goldfinger! ! ! The description here of the recharge system is really good! What do you want to express? Are you forgetting your righteousness just for the sake of harvesting wool?

Let me take a guess. This is a studio novel. In the 8 years I have been reading, there are very few books that can be published within 50 chapters and 300,000 words.

I read the synopsis of your book. It's too poisonous. I only play Shutu no Bin. It's a niche one, but the others are outdated. Genshin Impact is extremely poisonous. You're crazy for putting this kind of poison in it.

Abandoned, another dog-licking protagonist. I can't stand the sluggish pace and unclear priorities of the previous article. I insist on writing about a female reader, and I think the results are too good.

After reading Chapter 23, forget about the protagonist starting a business. Even if it is a desert and a blue ocean, where will the protagonist get the capital to do takeout? Is someone else out of money? Or do you want to accept investment from others later? The plot here will only show how naive the protagonist is (somewhat harshly called brainless). I can only say that I have time to change it. There is no need to spend space on these plots, and they will only disgust the readers.

Water in the water, 20 chapters are written around that garbage game. My evaluation is that you can just write a little bit more. I don't even want to think about how this game is, so I keep mentioning it. The twist in it is very blunt. This rubbish game is purely for intelligence. I like it when I put an objection to charging money at the back, right? There are no krypton gold games in your background, and the few background games that appear are not played by children. Who are you mocking with the whole child charging money game?

It's a bit outrageous, and it was even praised by krypton gold games.

Chapter 19 I left, just because that girl was right and because of him. There was no foreshadowing and no forcible addition. It was really abrupt. The dialogue there was also very retarded. The first part was very good, but it became like a primary school student's composition. I left, and I didn't read the rest. If any girl stopped paying attention to me, I would come back and continue.

It seems so annoying. Is your system a rebate or a loss? As far as I can see now, the system can help you play the game well. How much money you charge for the game will be how much money you can get. The front is fine, but Stickman is particularly illogical, and the system does not limit the number of people who can recharge? It only limits how many people and how long you play before it can give you money for you to recharge and cash out. So why do you suppress game krypton gold? I don't understand, and where does the money come from for making games and running daily operations? Just rely on the money from the first time? And I just want to ask who restricted the protagonist from opening up krypton gold? There is no system, right? There are no restrictions in market rules, right? The protagonist himself doesn't say that he loves games. He wants to keep the game pure and thinks it's best if he doesn't make money, so it sucks.

Saw more than 20 pictures. The first is the system. The system is a Shenhao system, and it does not require you not to recharge money to others. As long as you recharge money yourself, you can get cash back. So why do you keep suppressing recharging money to others? Who would think too much money? , I have always wanted to make a fortune and start a business. If I start a business with more than one million yuan, I can start a business with more than 2 million or more. Which one is more stable? To sum up, I am crazy.

The introduction really made me laugh. Isn't the author just because the games he named are very interesting?

If we had charged money for the game the protagonist made, he would have already earned 1 million. The system is rubbish.

It's best not to read it. 99% Of the content of the book has nothing to do with the introduction. Then the characters' names are written randomly. It's pure studio writing.

I don't know if the author is a newbie or a studio The starting point of the book is good, but the pace is too slow. Forcibly reducing the intelligence of the protagonist to lengthen the pace is not interesting To write a good story, you have to remember the core. White is no problem. The pace and coolness have to be kept up. Even if the pace is too fast, it can be finished early to accumulate fans. It is also feasible to write a few hundred chapters to satisfy a wave of readers. The next basic book will be coming soon.

The author came out and said, is he a living person? If you don't come out and show your head, the studio post will be finished in seconds.