Return to 85 to Catch up with the King of the Mountain

I sacrificed my brother-in-law to the Queen and I became the god of driving mountains 🙂

Dogs are so unreasonable. It only costs a few dozen yuan to kill a wild boar, and more than a hundred yuan to buy a few dogs. I read other novels where the most a dog costs is 20 yuan.

With this start, what's the point of your rebirth? If you feed readers at the beginning, it's surprising that the results will be good. Brother-in-law sacrifices to heaven, I no longer have the desire to watch anymore

Is the protagonist's brother-in-law an idiot? The wild boar is so immobile that he asks his brother-in-law to stab it with a knife. Isn't this gun just a decoration? And the protagonist is a pair of idiots. The author is also awesome, allowing the protagonist to be reborn just after his brother-in-law died, and he directly sacrificed himself to heaven. Hold

First of all, I would like to declare that I have not read this book. I just like to read rural pastoral novels, but there are not many books on the bookshelf that I can read, so I would like to make some suggestions and hope that this book can be completed smoothly. The first thing to do when making money is to have a certain amount of money. Rural areas with money are pure land, and rural areas without money are pure land. Money is still very important. Personally, I think the most important thing is to use cheats to open up a stable source of funds. It is best to break away from cheats and still not be affected. This can free the protagonist from busy work and enjoy life. Don't be endless about making money, wishing you could be the richest man in the world, and reading about farming is not just to see the protagonist become the richest man in the world. Secondly, do not use the Virgin Mary. Many authors themselves are not aware of this. To put it simply, the protagonist can provide a channel for friends and villagers to make money, but remember that it is just a channel and not a direct gift of money! Just lead them to make a fortune. No matter how rich we are, we can't be fools. The third pet is limited. There are only a few selling points in farming articles. Many authors like to add smart and rare animals when they have nothing to write about. But don't make your home feel like a zoo. The fourth trivial matter in life, rural novels are not about conquering other worlds, there are not so many fights and killings, they are basically trivial and ordinary things. As the protagonist is lucky enough to often encounter special situations, it is normal, but as a realistic novel, if special events are encountered continuously (to create excitement), it will feel nonsense. In cultivation novels, it is normal to encounter special situations in each chapter, but this rule does not apply in native novels. Slow down the pace and intersperse daily stories to reduce the sense of violation of special events. The Fifth Weird Relative, please write less about this. Although everyone has shortcomings, in the world of novels, no one's eyes can tolerate a grain of sand. Although the novel is more realistic, it certainly cannot copy reality. Write less nonsense, and don't play with character reversals of abandoning evil and doing good - unless your writing is very good. Sixth, most of us read local literature to relax our body and mind, and to imagine in novels a life that we cannot live in reality. Children's education, adult work, and medical care for the elderly all force us to stay in the city. We can only yearn for rural life through videos and novels. Of course, the rural areas in reality are not very interesting, and they will become boring after staying there for a long time. Don't praise the rural areas endlessly. I hope the author can write more interesting things. When Aldehyde writes novels, he often alternates between urban and rural areas to adjust the rhythm appropriately. Seventh, don't do things that are inconsistent with your personality. For example, a sixty-year-old man is reborn as a twenty-year-old man. As a result, he feels like his hair has not grown even when he talks or does things. Another example is that you can't even tell the difference between Codonopsis and Platycodon, but you dare to treat people and prescribe medicine. Overnight, you become an all-around master, proficient in everything. If the protagonist has not studied for a long time or has relevant experience in the past life, it is not recommended to pretend to be a master in a certain field. It would be embarrassing to pretend to be 13 in the professional field. It reminds me of a certain novel where the protagonist becomes a famous doctor overnight by using a cheat, without any preparation or common sense. Let me talk about some novels of the same type that I like. "Carrying a Fountain with You" ranks first in my opinion without any shortcomings. "The Mysterious Island" is too hands-on. "Robinson Crusoe" is a world-famous novel. "Mountain Pasture" is good except for feelings and occasional misconceptions. "Little Rich Peasant in the Mountain Valley" also has emotional problems. Many places are unreasonable, but I really like the leisurely and comfortable flavor. The 500,000-word "Forest of Two" is almost daily life and is more readable than the 2 million words of an ordinary novel. If you want to write about food, you can seriously read this book. However, this book has a lot of noodles, the taste is sweet, and there are very few spicy ones. Moreover, it is difficult for me to accept that the stewed meat is not boiled to remove the fishy smell! ! ! She only eats a little bit every day due to physical exertion. This is the limitation of a female author! ! ! If the author has time, he can play "Dream Garden" and "Dream Home", and directly download the cheat version. It is too difficult and will force you to spend money, but the garden inside is really beautiful. I guess 99% of people want to have a home like that, with fountains, trees, ponds, swings, and bonfire camps. The land and fishing hut are simply perfect. I hope it can provide some ideas to the author. The other thing is the game Stardew Valley. If you don't have time to play it, just watch the short video. As the top three players in the farming game, it's really fun. Even if it doesn't help writing novels, it won't be a waste of time. If you are interested in the old house renovation video, you can also check it out. Rural houses actually have many shortcomings, especially bathrooms and kitchens. If the protagonist is rich, he can still improve his living conditions. Don't still use dry toilets when he is rich. I can't guarantee whether the wilderness construction video will be helpful in writing novels, but it's definitely fun to watch. Provide some keywords for the author to broaden his thinking, apples, cherries, pears, plums, plums and apricots, various vegetables, flowers, wild peaches, herbs, lotus root, wild lily, honeysuckle, crab, eel, loach, snail, water bird, river shrimp, wild boar, pheasant, turtledove, cuckoo, home Swallow, owl, wasp, honey, raspberry, wild strawberry, pecan, wild grape, birch sap, maple syrup, matsutake, Hericium, fungus, shiitake mushroom, sheep bacilli, pine fungus, bamboo shoots, wild onion, wild garlic, toon, tangerine root and other wild vegetables, pickles, bacon, fish Ponds, vegetable fields, gardens, greenhouses, reservoirs, septic tanks, cellars, wine cellars, wells, spring firewood sheds, tool rooms, utility rooms, livestock sheds, chicken and duck pens, cat houses, kennels, power distribution rooms, hydroelectric power generation, wind power generation (household use), building houses, foundations, sewage drainage, Decoration, fire pit, fireplace, green tiles and white walls, modern decoration, modern bathroom, grape trellis, pavilion, stonemason, carpenter, bricklayer, bamboo fencer, hunting, trap, dog training, eagle cooker, crossbow, hunting cabin, shack, lookout, camping, bonfire, hot spring, snow mountain. Slightly changing the background may not necessarily completely refer to reality, as that would make it impossible to write a lot of things. Dog training base, this is an idea that I personally think is very suitable for rural pastoral novels. Many novels contain ways to unlock intelligence for animals, so training new dog breeds is very suitable, solving economic problems, and driving other villagers and friends to get rich. Military dogs, police dogs, search and rescue dogs, drug detection dogs, guide dogs, hunting dogs, fighting dogs, shepherd dogs, guard dogs, ornamental dogs. Dog raising can be a high-value-added industry. It is no longer as tiring as growing vegetables, nor is it as dependent on the external environment as raising cattle and sheep. It not only earns hard money, but also is not easy to be replaced by others. The threshold is not low. As long as the breed is well trained and a dog can be sold for tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands, it is not a problem. Use golden fingers to raise a few good dogs and then breed them into new breeds. Later, you can completely develop without golden fingers. There is a lot of potential. There are too many points to write about. I hope an author will write about it. It feels like the more I talk about it, the more confusing it becomes. Anyway, I hope this book can be written well. I hope this book will sell well and become a god! ! ! ! Please do not comment on any suggestions that are wrong or inappropriate for the context of this book, thank you.

I finally resisted the first chapter, but in the end you wanted to be a eunuch

A eunuch? It's a pity that it slipped away, but actually there were still people watching.

Oh, my friend, please keep this style, such good writing

Let me ask, does the protagonist have a golden finger? Was he a loser before he was reborn? After he was reborn, he was able to become a great critic even without a golden finger.

This short paragraph of a dozen words is probably too much. It's very repetitive and affects the reading experience. Moreover, the consecutive names of the protagonists become the subject, which makes me feel that it was written by AI.

After being reborn, I still want to write my brother-in-law to death. I am speechless.

Update, I learned a lot from Lao Li