Douluo Dalu: My Martial Soul Comes with a Soul Ring

This soul power is really awesome. He was born with full soul power. He was promoted to level 5 in 3 years, 666.

It's another attempt to suppress the protagonist's level. It's really disgusting. It took three years for such a powerful martial soul to have full soul power and reach level five. The writing is really rubbish.

The protagonist comes with a soul ring. Can the soul bone be exploded if the protagonist is killed?😁

The breath of female videos has overflowed the screen

Generally speaking, it can be considered average. There is nothing outstanding, and there is no big criticism. However, there are still some problems with the settings. One: The protagonist's grandfather seems to be banned at least, and he also goes to a civilian college like Tang Wulin. Two: Let's just consider it a personal preference. Gu Yuena is not good if she is separated. If she needs to be fused later, it will appear that the protagonist is incompetent. Without fusion, she is not Gu Yuena. Three: It seems to be following the original work. The original work is not very good and can easily collapse. For now, these are the three points. I won't list the others in detail.

Please read on patiently. This review took me a long time and is full of my dissatisfaction with the unsatisfactory results after investing in reading the book. My feelings: I have been enduring all kinds of typos and watching the plot that is almost the same as the original work, just hoping that the author can avoid the poisonous points of the original work, such as the disgusting plot of Gu Yue against the protagonist or the protagonist (does the protagonist need a fanfic to write???) And various small poisonous points. In the end, I did not avoid them all, because the protagonist does not know the plot of Dou 3 at all, he is Wulin changing his skin. Summary: I can only say that the contradictions in this book are just a bunch of shit code added to the original work. The contradictions in the original work make people feel uncomfortable, and this book is even more torturous. 1: The author does not dare to go against the original work and start a new main plot (the branch plot does not count), but just blindly creates additional second creations. Even if he finds that his second creation is inconsistent with the main plot, he will eventually compromise and return to the main plot. For example, in the classic when Shrek was admitted to school, he scolded Mr. Su for pretending to be a big boy and said how big his identity was, but in the end he compromised and entered Shrek, euphemistically called Shi I want both Lake and the Spirit Transferring Pagoda, but the author doesn't know how to write without the template of the original work after leaving Shrek. The chapter until Na'er's return is still almost the same as the original work, except that the protagonist has been changed, the encounter process is exactly the same, Na'er's words are exactly the same, and the protagonist is just Wulin's stand-in. It must be easy for the author to copy and paste when writing. . . Two: The author is completely unprofessional and has no humility in writing. Putting aside the aforementioned copying of the original work, the author does not deserve to receive income just for typos. As long as he is willing to take the time to read it himself after writing, there will not be so many typos. I can guarantee that there will be no typos in any chapter without correction by readers. What's more, if someone makes seven or eight mistakes in a row, the error correction is limited to only two words. Three: Gender is vaguely defined, Wulin is feminine, the protagonist is feminine, and even no longer played in the future, women's clothing, and the beautiful sister are all dressed up. I don't understand who's XP is satisfied. Four: The author does not understand the Douluo setting and insists that it is a new setting. This phenomenon is especially obvious in the early stage. For example, the biggest poisonous point in the early stage is that the beast martial spirit should not have control soul skills. I don't know whether the author really doesn't know the setting or what, but it still hasn't changed. The Titan Ape's gravity squeeze is not a control soul skill? Isn't the sonic vibration of the bat-like soul beast a control-type soul skill? Why do you think that the protagonist Qilin Wuhun is said to be a control soul master because of a coercive soul skill, and everyone around him is surprised. Secondly, for example, in the Star Dou Forest in Dou San, there is only a small circle of ferocious beasts, but the protagonist is still being chased by various hundred-year-old soul beasts in the Star Dou Forest. Some readers questioned it, and the author commented that it was a new setting. . . There are also various time issues that frequently make scandals, and the author has not systematically studied the amount of federal coins. It seems that after all, he does not even have time to read it again after writing to correct typos. How can he pay attention to time, money and other amount issues. Five: Finally, clarify your position. What you are writing is a fanfic. The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists in the original work are not the author's capital to show off. I can say responsibly that the relationship between Gu Yuena and the male protagonist in the later period of the original work has been distorted. This is the failure of the third young master. The main conflict between Gu Yuena's love and mission is good, but It was the third young master who wrote the distorted image of Gu Yuena in order to maintain this contradiction. For example, the plot where Gu Yuena created a dream for Qiangu Zhangting and asked Qiangu Zhangting to bully Gu Yuena in the first person in the dream should not have happened. This plot was written entirely because the third young master's wife died and was mentally ill. The plot has completely sentenced Gu Yuena's image to death. I remind you again and again that if the author of this book cannot distinguish the combat power setting, he must also understand that Gu Yuena's image in the original book collapsed because of those things, and don't follow in the same footsteps! ! ! ! ! I haven't caught up yet, but after a brief look at the catalog, the fact that Qiangu Zhangting, the biggest poisonous point, is still alive has made me lack the courage to trust the author to really understand how to let Gu Yuena handle the relationship. The plot of Gu Yue's inseparability that tortures readers appears again in fan fiction like a bolt from the blue. The author is asked to respect the time and money spent by readers in reading the book. The investment in the early stage should not be rewarded with the same poisonous plot as the original work in the later stage! ! !

It's quite baffling. The protagonist was clearly given a powerful martial spirit, but the author also imposed restrictions, giving people the feeling that he was about to pull it out, but then retracted it inexplicably. Later, the level is forced to be suppressed. It is completely illogical to write like this. Is it necessary to suppress the protagonist? The premise for you to suppress the protagonist is to have a reasonable reason, rather than suppressing the protagonist if the setting is too strong.

The pressure to level up is too ridiculous. Level 3 and 5 are really useless. After all, they are also innately full of soul power.

The content is getting more and more outrageous and I've read it. It's a chaotic world and the protagonist is still being tortured.

The latest few pictures were poorly written. When he first entered the Spiritual Ascension Platform, it was written that all the staff recognized him. However, when they met the Man-Faced Demon Spider and the spiritual beast later, they acted as if they didn't recognize him.