Guide to Immortal Cultivation Family

Is this just about the Zhang family, or will it become another family later? I'm a little confused by your introduction.

Yes, it means that after each family is destroyed, will it leave a mark and give them a copy of the achievements of their family's development when they are qualified by fate?

The setting of this book is okay, but the author's writing skills are not good, and there is no explanation for everyone's participation, which makes the readers confused and unclear. Including when introducing Gold Finger and how Zhang Jinyang knows the ability of Gold Finger, there is no explanation. He needs to use spirit stones to open Gold Finger and Gold Finger needs spirit stones and spiritual objects. But why Zhang Jinyang knows it and how he finds it is not explained. It's a pity that the setting is OK. It's a pity that it can't be read. It's far worse than Xuanjian.

In recent chapters, maybe because there are not many readers, the author is obviously anxious to change the scene. It feels like there are a lot of names, but few of them are memorable. Zhang Jinyang, as the first person book owner, does not leave a particularly deep impression on people. He has more bad impressions. He said that his children have forgotten their ancestors, but practicing magic is not much better. The author should polish the plot, at least the system is creative.

Good looking

I think the writing is really good. Everyone has their own character. There are no taboos in cultivating immortals.

I think we can let Zhang Jinyang lead one line, Zhang Huowang and Zhang Huodao, which correspond to the three lines in the introduction.

It's so well written, cheers for the author!

Will the protagonist become stronger and grow?

If you can write it well, it should be regarded as top grade. Currently, it is comparable to the True Immortal Yu Hao. If we keep up our efforts, there will be top quality products!

The characters are well drawn, good👍

Liu Tianxia, ​​Li Bantian, and Zhang are gods in heaven

Are you going to stop updating? Why haven't you updated yet? Do you want to join the palace as a eunuch?

Send one to Ao Zu, ε=(´ο｀*))) Oh

If you don't love your family and cultivate too much, your name can be written in 1 million words.

Does anyone know the name of this author?

Xuan Jian's fanfic is finally here

Come on, brother, I'm going to start a business. I'll change my track and keep working hard.