Swallowed Star: Starting with My Transmigration as Bolan

If you want to write this, don't get involved with Luo Feng. Don't get involved with Luo Feng's experience in the original Tomato book. Is it possible that you have to practice in the same dungeon with Luo Feng to become a true god? Can't you create a better character for Bolan? He was originally the number one genius, but Tomato didn't mention it when he wrote that he became an immortal in the end. Since you have traveled through time, you should shape it well, write some new experience scenes, and polish this character's character. Luo Feng can have a role, but don't write Luo Feng so mentally retarded, okay? I have to give you some tips to know that the Blood Luo Crystal can be integrated with the Golden Horn clone. Polish the character of Bo Lan and imagine some new experience scenes and opportunities to write. Your story will become a good work. Don't come to suppress Luo Feng to prove that you, the protagonist, pretend to be 13

As the protagonist, can you stop being "Li Luo" and "Bo Lan" for a while? It's too dramatic. If you travel through time and walk the world as "Bo Lan", don't let this name appear again.

Li Luo is your own name as the author, right? If you don't change your stubborn nature, you will be Li Luo and Bo Lan for a while. You can enjoy yourself and delete the book.

It's a bit like another movie Swallowing the Starry Sky. Luo Feng fuses the Bloodfall Crystal, and you fuse too. Luo Feng has a mechanical treasure, and the latest chapter also has it. There must be components in the back. Blind guessing is definitely stronger than Luo Feng's wings, because the protagonist of this book has to be stronger than Luo Feng in everything. I can basically guess the subsequent plot.

Will writing the word "Bolan" mean death or something? Is your name Li Luo? Do you recognize these two words?

I was tired of watching many earth-based openings, but I found that it was quite interesting and new to see a book that traveled back in time to an alien genius like Bolan. But at present, it seems that the protagonist's psychology, performance and personality have not been able to establish a more charming image, and even seem a bit arrogant and frivolous. To be honest, I don't object to the protagonist having a harem, but emotional scenes are inherently difficult for Swallowing Starry Sky to handle. The author's current writing doesn't seem to be that effective, so would it be better to use strengths and avoid weaknesses and reduce the length? And now it seems that the character and character are not as good as the original Bolan. Bolan at least values ​​​​cultivation, determination and hard work. I personally think that cultivation and protection are the main themes of Devour. I don't know if it's because I haven't watched enough of it, but it was the first time I saw a relationship develop into the bedroom in Chaos City. Whether it is the description of Bolan's experience or the guidance of Qianshui Aichen to the current secret method, the protagonist's arrogant attitude towards the original characters as a time traveler has been fully reflected. Of course, I know that the protagonist, as a time traveler, knows the plot and has cheats and has such an attitude. Friendly discussion, I hope the author can write better.

In the continent of origin, a normal life should be a true god when he reaches adulthood.

I remember there was a novel called Swallowing the Starry Sky: Destroying the Tongtian Bridge at the Beginning, but later it was renamed: Swallowing the Starry Sky: I am the Holy King. The protagonist also has a clone in the origin continent. Then the protagonist only has a few thousand years to become the master of the universe. Then the clone was also in the Origin Continent and directly became a disciple of a god king.

Does the word "Li Luo" mean that money can be added and cannot be changed?

I've read a lot of fics, but none of them have worn the body of the golden-horned beast whose body was taken away by Luo Feng. It's so interesting to have two souls in one body 🙂, and it can also be compared to the original work.