The World Begins with Shooting the Condor: Starting with the Foster Father Hong Qi!

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This introduction is not attractive. I don't want to read it after reading the introduction.

The author should have all the beauties liking the protagonist. All the beauties would live happily with the protagonist.

I found it online, so it shouldn't be an infringement, right? Hahaha

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Write well and at least complete one book

I feel like the description of the realm is very dissuasive. Third-rate is a curse word and it should not be the realm of martial arts. For example, when two martial arts people have a conflict, they say, 'How dare you, a low-class guy, mess with me? Don't you know I'm a third-rate expert? ' Third-rate, second-rate, etc., It's very... Emmmmmmm... Ordinary martial arts people don't have any realm, right? They are all described in terms of years of skill. A first-class reputation is usually achieved by others and praised by other martial arts people. Otherwise, when you have a conflict with others, you won't be able to write martial arts novels about how you feel about the other party's profound skills and how many years of inner strength you have.

The result of accepting one by one of the heroines is to completely wipe out the personality charm of the original characters. Not to mention becoming the vassal of the pig's feet, they are even worse than objects. Objects, weapons and the like are still used from time to time. The consequence of accepting one by one is that the heroines have become disposable items. In Zhutianwen, as long as you don't have an affair with the other party, even if the other party is left alone, then even if you don't accept it, it's not a poisonous point!

Huang Laoxie's disciples are all artificially disabled

I'll go, Han Xiaoying, won't you let the pig's feet go?

This dialogue was written by 😥 The author is a woman, right? 😒 If it was a man, it would be disgusting 😰

I'm not opposed to having more heroines, but there are too many. There are only so many in this world. Is it necessary to at least strengthen the harem in the later stage? There are so many heroines, but the length of the heroines cannot be full. There are always neglected heroines, and this book has flaws.

Characters without souls are the same and taste the same.

'It's all the same, everyone writes about Shooting Condor and Tianlong in exactly the same way, without any charm at all. This means that the writing style is not good, so find another way to write the word "cool". Obviously there are no very evil people in these books. Why not write Shujian, Lian Chengjue, and Flying Fox? In these books, killing more evil people can still achieve some results.

Are you writing about Mr. Corpse Exorcist, The Magic Phone, The Third Part of A Chinese Ghost Story, and The Luminous Cup? In the magical mobile phone world and the Luminous God Cup world, you can easily obtain immortal cultivation techniques. How about Kindaichi and Tianji in Mr. Corpse Exorcist, and the Fu sisters in the third part of A Chinese Ghost Story as the heroines?

Just put it on the shelves after returning to reality. Author, you are so unimaginable.

Without any foreshadowing, without any treatment, the ending will directly return to reality, say goodbye, bye.