Cultivating by Communing with the Wind

I found a good subject and made a lot of money back then. Do I really think I am a great person? With such a good start, if you don't settle down and write well, you always want to become a god with one book? Is there such a good thing in the world? Is he still working and writing novels?

Just cut the book and delete the comments. If the problem is pointed out, your defense will be broken. Tsk tsk tsk tsk

How should I put it? After reading a few chapters, the writing is fine, and the settings are also very detailed and logical. However, after reading about ten chapters, I still feel unsatisfied. I don't know if I am right to make two superficial opinions here. 1. I feel that the narration describes too much and the author's subjective thoughts and explanations are too much. Sometimes when there are too many of these things, it becomes unsatisfying. It feels like the author is trying to educate readers. Writing novels is to advance the story line, not to teach. 2. That's it. It feels very "bland" and it's obviously not the kind of story-telling story. The fights and plots are too detailed. Maybe it's because the author writes out what the actors and protagonists are going to do and why they do it in advance. It doesn't have the ups and downs of a story. I'm not a professional reviewer, nor can I write a book. As a reader, I feel this way after reading it, and I don't know if it's right or not.

No, did you break it off so casually?

Can you recommend this now? It is indeed a "daily introduction to poison"

The ability to communicate with the wind is not as good as becoming it after traveling through time. The innate divine wind can be used as a heel. If you cultivate into an adult, you yourself will be the wind.

When the author writes about Feng, he simply says in the introduction that there has never been a master of Feng Dao. . . Traffic is exploding, why do you still need to cut books?

I still feel that the author should go back to writing mythology or fantasy + history + heavenly novels. Your book Xian Qin is so well written and the results are very good, why do you have to write in a genre that you are not familiar with! I believe that if you write a book about Xian Qin, it will definitely become a hit and you will become a great god. I would trade my good brother's 20 years of life for it 🤫!

There is a sense of mystery between the lines. How did you imitate his awkward word choice and sentence making so closely?

Isn't this okay if it's not written well?