Notes on the End of the Myth

It's different from traditional online writing. It's not a routine upgrade flow, which is very good. It's very similar to Dragon Clan, both in terms of writing and background. But I think there are still a few design issues that are not very good. First of all, the problem with the protagonist is that he starts too high. The protagonist is invincible at the beginning, but he is too far away from the upper limit of the gods. As a result, the plot is like a child who is left to play next to an ant nest by adults. It is less than the top and more than the bottom. In several conflicts, it seems that the protagonist has not exerted his full strength, and a large number of supporting characters have died first to forcibly heighten the atmosphere. The plot is conflicting. I felt it was a little awkward at first, but the better thing about Dragon Clan is that although it also features a fantasy-oriented character like Principal Chu Zihang and Caesar, the protagonist is a bad kid like Lu Mingfei, and the description of realistic details is also easy to resonate, which gives this earth-based fantasy a realistic anchor point, so that the background setting and the plot are not out of touch. Secondly, the supporting characters. After dozens of chapters, only one captain can be called a supporting character. This has also led to rigidity and stereotypes. Both the protagonist and the captain are like "skeletons" with an obsession and a skeleton supported by an obsession. They are not flesh and blood enough. In Dragon Clan, the principal also wants to slay dragons, but in real life, he also looks at swimsuits and tells jokes, and the character's layering is obviously much richer. In terms of environment and atmosphere, after reading the previous chapters of the author, I felt that there was too much focus on the description of big scenes, such as the divine owl and hound talking next to it. This kind of stream-of-consciousness description lacks the support of realistic details, and it feels too flashy rather than flesh-and-blood. The battle with nuclear bombs and thermal weapons is difficult to write about. I wrote about Oak before as a hand-to-hand fight, but it was also easily overcome with one or two punches. Generally speaking, the writing is more quality than most novices, but sometimes it feels a bit like an apocalypse forecast, a bit too literary.

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The whole story feels a bit messy, and I also learned the earthy flavor of Jiangnan. Fortunately, the choice of words and sentences is full of epic feeling, and it does have the flavor of a heroic epic.

There is a sense of epicness and poetry hidden between the lines. The imagery is complex and poignant, and it is identified as fairy grass. I think the author is quite a great person😏

It was just an ordinary night. As a fan of fantasy, I wanted to look through fantasy, which has become a fanfiction category, to see if there is anything interesting to pass the time. By chance, I came across this book "Notes on the End of the Myth" among a bunch of books with titles like Wizards, Lords, Hogwarts, Coiling Dragon, and Game of Thrones. I looked at the introduction and found it interesting. I also looked at a bunch of platinum-earning books in book circles. What the hell? It's just 60,000 words and it's just a way to kill time. Originally... That's what I thought, but I didn't expect it to be out of control. After reading it, my heart trembled and my body trembled. I'm afraid this book will become popular. You don't have to start tipping to get familiar with it. Later, when it becomes popular, you can also say "Shenyou, the fantasy master, you know, I am the first to follow his fans." ps. Create a group early, and there will be double monthly tickets on the 28th. The monthly tickets will be saved for you first. Come on, author, starting fantasy may not have a place for you! ps2. Let Rome be great here! (´▽｀)ノ

If you look closely, you will see that the Curse of Slaanesh, the Birdman of Tzeentch, and the Dog-Head of Khorne are all three evil gods serving the protagonist. This blessing could not be smaller.

Brother, I'm serious. I've read the novels Jiangnan Kyushu and Dragon Clan, as well as Tomb Raider Notes and so on. As for online writing, I've read it from junior high school to college. This novel of yours is very interesting, very literary and youthful, and directly touches the souls of middle-aged and middle-aged teenagers. If you keep it up, it will be popular, and the viewing experience is not bad. At present, although it is not possible to become a god with just these dozen or so pictures, it is still on the level of last year's Xuanjian. Come on.

I would like to give you a suggestion: knives are necessary, and there should be no problem with your mentality. When writing a novel, you are most afraid that the plot will follow your mentality. Previously, the author was a little distracted. The new chapter was not well written, and it was completely unfinished.

The author writes so deeply. The visual experience it brings me is better than watching Homer's epics such as the Iliad. I can really use this book to film an American TV series.

The flavor of literary youth is too strong. Literary youth can do it, but they have to tell the story clearly. What needs to be explained is what needs to be explained.

It is best not to include the Chinese mythology system in this book. If it does, it will feel too fragmented.

It's really good. It's a Warhammer-like novel written in an epic way. The real protagonist is an alternative emperor, gods, and great spirits, much like the subspace Chaos Gods and Great Demons. It's really well written. Let's just say that this book is at least a masterpiece.

I feel like some things have changed since I got off the ship. I still like the style at the beginning. The subsequent events like the Lord of Rome and other events have no sense of immersion.

Come, let us witness the arrival of a great moment of existence, Platinum,

"There are no ghosts and gods among the stars, there are no supernatural phenomena, and there is no magic and witchcraft. Everything can be interpreted through scientific means. Human beings can defeat everything with the light of reason. Nothing should be worshiped. The backward concept of religion needs to be completely eliminated in the rational galaxy." ——Empire Truth

It seems to be written really well, with a bit of a dragon feel.

It is indeed a very pure fantasy, giving people the feeling of reading an epic. If the pace is slower and the length is a little longer, even if it ends later, I can definitely leave my name in the online literature world. This time I really found the ghost in the new book🤓🤓🤓

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All monthly votes have been cast. Author, you have to be strong and stop.

The monthly ticket is full, you have to survive ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )~

I feel like I'm really amazed when I'm watching an American TV series... To be honest, this script could really make an American TV series. Of course, just add some details 🙂

If Roman epic prose describes a grand myth between the lines and throws it into the reader's mind, a flower of thought unique to the author blooms in the desert of novels.

Aren't there more than 140 chapters on the shelves?

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It's been a long time since I updated. No industry is letting people go on weekends.

What, your gods are all Greek?

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It feels like a mythical epic when I see it. Can anyone tell me whether the content is consistent with Shen Nong?