Royal Card: Compass of Destiny

Author, your world view can slowly unfold along with the plot. It is a waste of pen and ink and the reader's patience to explain everything clearly without starting. After all, there are various data concepts as soon as they come in, which is not good for the readers. It is okay to read it for free. If it is really put on the shelf, it will affect the data. It is good if you intersperse it left and right when writing the plot. For example, when the protagonist gets the card at the beginning, he introduces the level of the card through his deskmate or teacher, or writes about buying materials in some kind of store. When looking at the materials in the store, the protagonist is thinking about what he needs. At this time, you can slightly intersperse the levels of some materials, and then compare them with each other, so that the sense is slightly better. Authors who are new to the book can read more about what their peers write, and then read the feedback from readers. Try to build a certain worldview first, and if possible, you can also build a good outline. It is more expensive to start directly with trial and error. If it doesn't work, you can use the expert method and let readers give more feedback. It is good for you to explore slowly.

The first 3 cards are all auxiliary cards. Do you want no attack at all? Can we still go to the secret realm just like this?

It's written like a diary, and the protagonist is Liu Cheng, right? Your supporting role is too outstanding.

Liu Zhedu's writing is better than that of the protagonist. The protagonist's beast control is neither systematic nor too cheating. An army attack is like a massacre, and there is no sense of expectation.

I didn't want to post it at first, but when I saw there were so few comments, I just took it as a comment. I have similar opinions to everyone else. First, you have too many supporting roles. Second, you didn't introduce how many cards can be contracted in one stage. Or I missed it because I didn't read it carefully. And the main one. It doesn't matter if you are strong at the end of the stage, after all, you have a problem, but a legion card of your best friend is also promoted. Why are there so many big guys who have no juniors in your age group, and they are so awesome that they don't even take the college entrance examination, and they still can't even take out an awesome legion card 🙂

Real water, the protagonist is just like a passerby

There is still some creativity. In terms of the plot, it was originally a good book, but the writing style and the sluggish rhythm caused by the writing style can only be said to be a straw. This writing style... The author does not need to polish this issue. He may need to look at the internal video teaching materials of the previous training class to learn from it. There is really a lot lacking in the use of language. It can be seen that the author really writes with care. Because he writes with great care and strives for excellence, the description of many scenes is too detailed and seems very dull. The evaluation of scene description by "sixth grade composition level" is probably like this. If the author is not writing full-time, it is recommended to imitate the writing methods of some great masters first. I hope I can write better and better in the future!

There are many things that are new in this new work and I don't understand and write poorly. I hope everyone can give me more suggestions. Good suggestions will be actively adopted by the author.

Why didn't the label give a beast-control style? What is the purpose of putting a pet there?

Can you change the paragraphs of the article? Don't put so many words into one paragraph. It looks very laborious. The content is still good.

How come updates become once a day?

Not many card games can last until the end, and most of them have been cut off 😥

Destiny Trap is a classic masterpiece

You've written fifty or sixty chapters for this assessment. Hurry up and advance the plot.