The Devil on the Throne

The author's writing is very good and there should be a complete setting. I would like to make a suggestion about the reader's sense of immersion. My problem is that it is difficult to enter Dimon's perspective when reading. I think the reason is that the psychological activity of the protagonist is relatively poor. Even after kissing the heroine, there is no psychological reaction. More psychological activities can be added to add drama to the protagonist. The author gave Dimon the identity of a time traveler, but there is no psychological description that matches the identity. Read Instead, he is like an aborigine from another world, which allows him to react to things in the other world as a time traveler; the guilt when it affects others later is a good psychological description, but it is still missing. In the process of advancing the plot, more descriptions of the protagonist's thoughts can be made. The above are some analyzes I made based on my personal reading preferences. A protagonist with a vivid image and rich psychological activities is more attractive. In short, I think the poor description of psychological activities is an important factor affecting the sense of substitution.

There are too few gimmicks. I have read nine out of ten books about this kind of bitter struggle for hegemony. I am not very optimistic about it. I suggest you think about it carefully for the next one.

The title of this book gave me the same feeling as "The Man at the Top of the Food Chain". This was the first thought I had when I scanned the book and found you.

As suggested, the first few chapters of the book have been revised! If you have any other ideas, please mention them! Both good and bad are fine, please read it, thank you! ! ( '▿ ' )