Resurrection of Spiritual Energy: We Are Back from the World of Cultivation

You said the eleven o'clock update, how could you sleep at such a young age?

The novel is very interesting, keep up the good work! Asking for more refinement

I have read more than 260 chapters of this novel. At first, I expected the author to gradually correct his shortcomings as he accumulated creative experience; but as of now, there is no substantial improvement in many aspects. Now, the outstanding problems existing in this work are summarized as follows. First, there is a serious disconnect between the character's mental age and experience. The characters in the book may be monks who have practiced for hundreds of years in the world of immortality, or they may be top figures in the political or business circles who have been ups and downs for many years. However, their words and deeds lack the due prudence and sophistication, and their behavior is frivolous and childish, just like students who have not yet stepped out of school. Moreover, the Taoist heart is fragile and will fall into depression and decadence when encountering slight setbacks or temptations. This is in sharp contrast to the long experience in its setting and is unconvincing. Secondly, Internet vocabulary and Internet memes are abused and severely separated from the personality. I am not entirely opposed to the introduction of such expressions in novels, but the current frequency of use is too high, and it has taken over the main role. What's particularly critical is that these vocabulary words are extremely inconsistent with the identity of the characters - a group of time-travelers who have lived in the world of immortality (the social atmosphere of which is actually an ancient feudal society) for more than three hundred years. After returning to the real world, they can use modern Internet terms proficiently without any obstacles. Is there a communication generation gap? Obviously, the author's setting did not provide a reasonable explanation for this. A lot of early characterization and plot preparation were ruined by this improper handling. Thirdly, the worldview structure and character lineup are too complex, and the author's ambition far exceeds his current ability to control it. As a new author, this work covers multiple difficult themes such as the world of immortality, the real world, group travel between two worlds, the virtual world, campus essays, group portrait essays, etc. Its complexity is no less than creating a "Lord of the Rings" level work. However, the author's actual writing skills and control of details are far from Tolkien's level. Therefore, although the setting of the work is eye-catching, the daily reading experience is extremely confusing, rough and difficult to immerse. To sum up, I have lost the patience to continue reading this book. At the same time, I sincerely hope that the author can deeply reflect on this - I do not mean to suggest that the author hastily finish the book and start a new book, but I hope that the author can face up to and effectively avoid the above serious problems in future creations, and truly mature in character creation, language style and narrative control.

No, I want to complain. I saw chapter 74 and skipped a few chapters in the middle. Author, you really need to streamline the text and plot. I understand that you want to use various small branches to reflect the reflection and integration improvement progress of various aspects of society in the era of economic recovery. I also like the various official thoughts written by the author. Even the fact that both parents practice cultivation has surpassed many people. But! But! It's so long-winded, my dear author. I didn't want to read it several times but couldn't bear to part with such a setting that conforms to my ideal. 1. In terms of parents' cultivation, although the author later explained why the protagonist did not practice with him, your explanation was too late! This explanation is too late! As a result, although I agree with it, I always feel aggrieved and unhappy. 2. That wild dog clone, to be honest, I understand that you want to use the fight between wild dogs and the official to reflect the official's progress in "cultivation, rule of law and harmonious society", but is it necessary to think carefully? There are still two chapters left, which made me really impatient. Seeing this from the resentment of my parents who were late to explain their cultivation, my resentment can feed ten evil cult gods. The amazing thing is that after the author explained the arrangements for the dogs, I suddenly felt relieved. I could accept this explanation and even raised my hands to agree with it. Very good, the resentment from my parents' cultivation was superimposed on the resentment of the dog plot, so I had to express it. The author, your explanations are very reasonable and I like it, but I am really resentful of this rhythm (a big sigh).

I dislike this kind of writing about government less and less, because Shuangwen is inherently selfish to the extreme and must become No. 1. But if you become a government official, you will be downgraded to a lower level. At most, you will be an enthusiastic citizen.

I'm here to comment just to support the author and tell me my feelings. I'm sorry if I'm wrong. First of all, the background is drawn from the spiritual energy recovery and time travel. I think this is quite innovative in itself. Generally speaking, it is the return of the Dragon King to pretend to be a big b. Instead, this is a group time travel back to build and face the upcoming world of war. Many authors have written different changes in this kind of recovery, but it is nothing more than the protagonist's one-handed dominance, and will not focus too much on the places other than the protagonist, although this may be more suitable for the film. I only like to see the protagonist become stronger, but I think this book talks about the changes of various groups, and the writing is good. I think this requires writing strength and courage. After all, one bad thing is a bad point, and which group may be discouraged if the writing is not good, and the writing may not be in the taste of book lovers, but I think the author has written very well so far. I can see the effort the author has put in, and he has that kind of thinking. Then I saw a lot of book reviews about the low combat effectiveness of the power system, and why the character of the protagonist is so stable after fighting for three hundred years. I think stability is a more mature approach, and striving for everything is more like a young man. Of course, I have not lived past three hundred years, so I can only say that it is in line with my own views. I think whether this is radical or not is actually just a choice. The key point is how to write it. The protagonist is not the kind of pure dog who wants to avoid all risks. The protagonist has considerations about whether to take risks. I think this is thoughtful. Finally, I think the author's description of family and relatives, the loneliness of the traveler in another world, the alienation after traveling back, etc. I think these are all remarkable. I hope book friends can read it and maybe like it. I think killing and recuperation can enrich the content of the work and are necessary. What the author writes is indeed worth reading.         ，，，， As for whether I am a sailor or not, you can tell without me having to prove it myself. If I am getting any benefits, it may be that the author's reply is quite sincere. I am happy to accept this. No matter what, I still sincerely recommend it to everyone. If you have different ideas, you are welcome to discuss it.

The poor performance of this book is not only due to the update speed, but also to the layout. This is not about the layout of the protagonist, but the layout of the author. For several days, I have been messing around with a few student dolls. How much can be written about the integration of the two worlds? I just fell into the school flow. I'm tired of watching this stuff already. Who wants to watch it anymore? If the protagonist has a golden finger about teaching students, it would be fine to write more about school. That would be the main plot, but what is the main plot of this book? Author, do you have an outline?

The protagonist is not like Lao Deng, who has traveled hundreds of years. He is a character with a simple understanding of high school students and unclear meaning.

A medium-quality grass that is neither superior nor inferior. Worth watching. The following is an objective evaluation 1/The author has carefully searched and checked, so he has a complete logical system for acupuncture and herbal medicine. But, because of this, I read Doze, and this is the problem with the written word. 2/The plot is bland and belongs to the starting state of a top boss's life. This means that there is no need to deliberately set up plot formulas for conflicts and conflicts. This is my personal preference. 3/ It's a bit scattered. The main plot is revealed in a new chapter, but the entire rhythm of the previous article is too scattered and the main focus is not clear enough. It is not advisable to have both. If there is no stickiness, you will suffer a big loss. Of course, dispersion also means the completeness of the world environment, and readers can think of it as modern people. 4/ It is recommended to shift the focus from theoretical knowledge to plot polishing. That is to say, don't worry about the professional knowledge, just let me, oh, he will understand, oh, they will not know, this is the purpose. Instead of telling how it grows and operates, it tells how cultivating immortals is basically useless after the wandering mind. 5/ It is inevitable that there will be many pitfalls in the early stage, but the good thing about this book is that it does not step on the pitfalls twice and gradually grows. I am looking forward to the story after the main plot is revealed now. I hope the author will work hard, because expectation means there is a line of measurement. 6/Why I wrote this post is because I want to see the progress and changes in the future. I hope my writing will get better and better. The author just needs to be himself. Anyone and every word are just a road scene. You drive there and you are on your way to the end. Finally, don't delete my posts. Every post I write is written with care, not just for show. (An author previously thought that I was just pretending to be someone else. Defining me with my own vulgar taste made me sick for a long time). 7/Hurry up and update!

Long-winded, long-winded, non-stop explanations, sometimes the entire film is compiled to explain the settings. Readers are here to read the book, not to learn how to cultivate immortality from you.

As a joke, thousands of time-travelers have returned with a lot of old monsters who have formed the elixir and Yuanying, bringing their souls with them? Still under the control of the state, I am a cow and a horse 🙂. Isn't this time traveling in vain? So many old monsters are all following the rules 🙂

It's obviously an interesting subject matter, but why does it seem so boring from the beginning? It's all a routine, hiding here and there, hiding clumsiness here and hiding clumsiness there. The classic version of me is very cool but I hide it. The classic version of me is very cool but I just don't let you know who I am. I refused while saying, "I know the value of the power of a whole country." It's boring to look at the routine too much.

Well written, but your introduction does not match the content you wrote. What you wrote in your introduction is that you are ahead of others and are strong alone. Things that you don't use can become something that the country values. It shows that you have gone too far, and now what you write is about cooperation with the country.

The settings are all piled up at the front, which means we don't get to the main topic until chapter 25. The first part is all explanatory text, and it's not very clear. It's just boring and makes you want to skip. It would be much better to walk through the plot more and write the settings in the plot. It would be much better to have less explanations. If the setting is fine, just repeat a few simple words - people are forgetful 🤓 There is nothing poisonous in the whole. It is much better than those bloody scenes that are shockingly poisonous. Whether it can be exciting depends on how the plot is arranged.

There is really a lot of nonsense. There is almost no progress in the plot of more than 100 chapters. If you don't know how to write, you can just write it in one stroke. Don't waste the number of words in areas that you are not good at. And if your relative is funny, just write the name. I don't know who it is. If the supporting character has no sense of existence, don't write it. You just write the name and you don't know what this thing is. It's a waste of my subscription. Give up.

I really like it. There are many books with similar themes, but I still like this one, but you always pretended to be dead 😭 before. I thought you were dead, but today I found out that you have successfully renewed your life when I visited your grave. I like single women, pure love, daily life, modern peace and the romance of immortals, so will the author write another book? Want to see 😟

Those who were scolded had no choice but to do the demining themselves. First, the content before it is put on the shelf is unsatisfactory and unpleasant. The male protagonist assesses the situation and makes decisions according to changes in the general trend. It is an invincible novel, but it can be understood as the return of the immortal king with a mortal character. Second, the early content is more focused on shaping the social cultivation system. A group of people fabricated a society with zero cultivation system and poor people. The real advantage of being invincible is when it is put on the shelves. The bedding is longer. Three, the comments are polarized. Readers who prefer to watch Gou or enjoy it directly do not need to click on it. Because the exploration period is really not that exciting. Fourth, Lingfu is an introduction, not the final framework. The focus of the plot description is from "Back to the World of Cultivation". There are many plots at the back of this book, involving double penetration, cross penetration, and mixed penetration. It is a book with a strong setting. So it wasn't exciting at the beginning. This may cause some readers who have a preset plot in mind to come in and feel that it does not meet their needs, and then start to scold it, so do some demining in advance. ps: This book is a long-term book, so it was relatively slow to pick up at the beginning. There were many people who criticized the character design of time travelers in the early stage, but the development of the portrayal of groups and individuals of time travelers was in the first climax plot when it was released. This book is a group portrait, but the group is not about characters, but about story lines and career lines. In the end, love and hate have the same cause. Readers who like this book and readers who hate it are often for the same reason. If you hate this book, don't hesitate to fork it. But if you like this book, don't doubt yourself, because the first 200,000 words of this slow book also passed 4 rounds of PK at that time. Moreover, I have refined it twice, and I personally feel that the plot after it is released is getting better and better the more I write it. It's cool and clear, and there are quite a few settings that are quite interesting. The most important thing~ There are too many good books in Qidian. If this book is not your cup of tea, forget it. I hope everyone can find good books.

One thing to say, before the world of cultivation was involved, the writing was very good. It felt like a big boss returning to reality with a bunch of younger brothers who traveled through time together. However, in the later stages, it lost its meaning at all, and the protagonist became a saint savior.

Does the author know why many protagonists in Qidian novels start in Qidian Orphanage? Because most readers don't like to read things about parents' shortcomings, but the author likes to write about the seven aunts and eight grandma to improve the word count. I suggest the author change the title of the book to travel back in time and lead the family to cultivate immortality together. This name may help you attract some readers who like these plots.

I don't want to complain about current novels, they are too restrictive.

There is no sense that these people in the forum have lived in another world for 300 years. Even if these people traveled through time in their 40s, the modern life of the first 40 years will have been diluted in 300 years. For example, the demonic monk who landed and was hunted down must have been on the run for 300 years, so he would do anything to survive and avoid being killed, but his speech was as if these 300 years of suffering had passed by gently.

This author contradicts himself 1 He said that he is the only one who has mastered his skills for thousands of years, others may not be so good, and it can cause the whole continent to start a war with his sect to steal his skills 2. He clearly said that he did not want to expose his identity because he was afraid that others would steal his skills, but he took the initiative to reveal his identity on earth 3. He clearly wants to be a holy mother, and everything will be made public. Blessed lands and everything are given to others, and they are not given to the leadership of official organizations, but they use their own brains to distribute benefits to the whole world 4. Regardless of others, personal or official, the standpoint is the Holy Mother, and it is still cultivating immortality, just like a mixed kindergarten, too lazy to say it 5. Cultivation of immortality is the same as daily writing, cultivating immortality but not cultivating immortality, happy writing and unhappy writing, what is the core of your writing?

I have been following this book since it first opened. Due to practical reasons, the author has been updating intermittently, so I have been following it intermittently. Sometimes I subscribe to Qidian and sometimes I subscribe to QRead. I see today that the crisis of Chao Xia in the integration of the two worlds has been solved by the unity of the protagonist, Yuan Xiu, Second Cultivator and Third Cultivator, and everyone who worked hard for it, and the earth is even more prosperous. The marriage line with the young master of Xianxuan Changsheng is also complete. The description between Xu Lingshuang and Shen Zhou is actually too little. There is only a brief moment of the past and the fusion of the two worlds of Breakthrough God... But it is beautiful. From the figure in the heart when he first traveled back through time to the depiction of the past when he was about to travel back in time, the two worlds merged and the soul first separated without knowing the background, but it was not abrupt or smooth. The environment is strange, the plot is wonderful, and the characters are beautiful. This is my evaluation of the author's book. For Shen Zhou and Xu Lingshuang after the two worlds have completely merged, I am very dull and envious, but more of a blessing. I also wish that all the loving people in the world can work together and live their own wonderful world in the era of turbulent undercurrents. Next, he should fly to the New Territory and stay with the other party for a longer time, with an open ending? After seeing and commenting on this, I have a lot of emotions, so I wrote a limerick to express my emotions arising from this book:                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Book Friends When I look back at this book, I feel like I am in a trance, integrating the general trend towards immortality and mystery. The vitality begins to plan the crisis, and all living beings share the same fate! Title: Everyone is practicing in the world of mortals, fighting for what they want, and becoming a part of the world of mortals. This is true in novels, and it is true in reality. We are all cultivating the mortal world in the mortal world. First couplet: Whenever I look back on the past, I almost always feel in a trance. The time has passed so fast that I haven't had time to keep him in the future, and the time has passed too slowly because the future is still out of reach... The first couplet: The wheels of the times are rolling forward, no matter where you are, there are still undercurrents, and you still have to live even if you are at a disadvantage this time, just like in the book, the Xianxuan Sect will still give money to its members even if it has a net loss! Neck Lian: There are many opportunities in life that may not be as obvious as spiritual energy recovery, but when you encounter them, seize them. In the book, the martial arts department can completely transfer the Xianxuan sect, but is it better? Maybe not? Tail couplet: Reminiscent of the last two words of Su Shi's poem "Don't listen to the sound of beating leaves in the forest, why not scream and walk slowly". The protagonist Xu Lingshuang, the heroine of Shenzhou, and the sentient beings respectively correspond to the earth's martial arts club, the sect of the fairy world and ordinary people who are not high-level people. They also have the meaning of being destined to walk on the road of spiritual energy with all sentient beings.

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This book is really good to read, but I feel like the results are not very good. It brings peace of mind to the people around me, please give me a lot of support, the author

So far, this book seems to be quite good. Many of the author's settings are quite interesting. It can be seen that the writing is very serious, but it is a bit bland and too short. Come on.

I have seen more than 60 pictures, and overall the color is acceptable. But the paragraphs of text are still a bit too long. There are often a long paragraph. In fast-food online articles, few people will read it carefully. Also, the settings are roughly the same as those of the mainstream, but some are private settings (you need to accept whose settings you read, and if they don't suit you, it means the book is not suitable for you).                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           but the main character is rather dull (personal opinion)

The writing is really good, the pace is very relaxed, very suitable for daily reading, the imagination is good, and the plot is very coherent. It is definitely in the top 10% of the starting point It can score 86 points or above

I just saw it on the shelves. It suits my taste so far. This is called invincible and refreshing writing. Those ants crawling up are not invincible writing. But after reading the post, it seems that the direction of the writing is a bit unsatisfactory. Don't write me down as an ant crawling up after the invincible boss. First give me a few monthly tickets as a tribute, but if you don't like it later, don't be surprised if you abandon the book and open a Shennong post.

It's okay. I'll give you a monthly pass first, and I'll give you a small reward by the way. Work hard slowly, the author keeps writing steadily, and this book will probably become popular slowly.