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Brother, your way of writing is not very suitable for online writing. It is the same as another book I have read called Lady Zombie: Motionless. The only difference is that your writing style is worse. I can't see the development of your plot at the moment, but I'll analyze it from the existing four chapters: the plot is seriously fragmented, the main line cannot be seen, and there is insufficient emotional preparation before the conflict. I don't know if you want to write a thriller. If so, pay attention to the emotional foreshadowing in the follow-up. It feels a bit like the main god's space. If possible, don't say so many riddles. The subject matter is okay. I look forward to your follow-up.

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After reading 404, I came back to read old books and found that there were no online articles in the old books.

That's awesome. My brother is still writing.

Why is this book limited exemption but I don't see it in the Qidian column? I thought all the eight books in the Qidian column were exempt for the time limit. Will such a limited exemption help promote the book? If I hadn't seen it on the bookshelf, I wouldn't have known that this book had been exempted. Or is this a problem because I didn't update the Qidian software?

Some are big or small, and you still travel through them. Damn it, are you here? As a single person, my heart went cold when I looked at this thing.

Oh oh oh, the excitement is about to begin. The biggest motivation for raising a book is the author's continuous progress that can be seen with the naked eye. I hope that this book can lay a world view base and become a well-known IP. It can compete with the super popular genres such as Infinite Horror, Jiujiu Ryu, Chat Group, etc. So far, the plot and settings are very good and stable, and the updates are also very stable The characterization is also very clear. To be honest, the female protagonist has been so clean and clear in recent years. I can't remember the rest and it's hard to leave an impression in my mind. It is a good portrayal of a girl who is truly self-strong in rationality and sensibility. The contradiction between external social interaction and self-emotion is even more delicate. To put it bluntly, in the eyes of many straight men, a character must first have basic value (specifically, willpower and other characteristics that can be shown in the article) before they can be noticed. This is also the reason why the male protagonist's combat power or other abilities must be outstanding. Anyway, the author, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, you will become a new great god.

I admit that you wrote the emotional line very well, but this is too awkward. It feels like watching an American TV series. The conditions are reasonable and the process seems reasonable. The result is a bit outrageous. It would be more appropriate to put Xiao He as the protagonist in a male channel. This should be included in a female channel.

Although, why is the heroine only 140? What normal adult woman is only 140?