Sui Dynasty: Mount and Blade

I'm sick of it 🤮, utterly disgusting. Who surrenders only to have their lord meet them at the city walls? Are they just sitting ducks? They enter the city and don't harm a thing, just slaughter the wealthy and spread rumors around. If you continue to help the Sui dogs rebel, this is the end result. Who do you think you are? A bandit who only controls a prefecture.

I'm not familiar with history, but Luo Shixin is supposedly a highly skilled warrior, a capable commander, loyal, and doesn't cause trouble. Why kill him? Even Emperor Taizong (Li Er) was always thinking about him, yet the protagonist just picked a kid from the refugees, trained him for a few months, and then directly captured and killed him? Are top-tier generals really that worthless?

You're getting married before the game even starts, getting too attached to powerful families, and even wanting them to join the military. What's your military's ideology? You're a transmigrator; how can you conquer the world without establishing a belief system? You're not Li Yuan, who was born into a powerful family.

You need to explain why you differed from other rebel kings to claim you defeated Zhang Xutuo. You clearly had many advantages, but you didn't mention them at all. What's the point? If you said you had the courage of a hegemon and turned the tide of battle to kill him, that would be plausible. Or, if you made your fortune selling salt and didn't lack supplies, that would also work.

Haha, a modern person transmigrating to ancient times, struggling to get enough to eat and wear, without any special abilities, how many people would consider joining a rebel army? Even if you wrote that the way to activate the "golden finger" is to join a certain faction, and given the vast and powerful Sui Dynasty, it's difficult for a commoner like the protagonist to join, it would be more…

Holy crap, 7 points in Strength is more powerful than Qin Shubao? If an average person's Strength is 5 points, then Qin Shubao would need at least 18 points to wear heavy armor and wield a weapon weighing tens of kilograms without any resistance. And you only have 7 points? How is the strength system even structured?

Historical and military fiction for beginners; reading it will lower your IQ.

The book is good, but the readers aren't very good; their historical knowledge is too limited, which is a pity.

The more I read, the less interesting it became. Chapter 30 was supposed to be about purging internal traitors, but instead of doing so, he came up with a bunch of reasons to find powerful family connections to support him. Honestly, if you think Liu Xiu's Eastern Han Dynasty was so great, why bother learning from Zhu Yuanzhang?

The author is definitely not as good as Li Shimin, and the protagonist's abilities are definitely not as good either. Only with cheat codes do people feel that the victory is reasonable. Without cheat codes, would the author have the writing skills to describe a protagonist who is stronger than Li Er?