Comprehensive Comic: Dimensional Journey Starting from Fulian

The main reason is that the whole text follows the original plot. I am talking about the plot of the anime. I probably haven't read the original novel. In the original comic, I touched one head when I was in a hurry, and then I touched it a few times before it was overturned. This good feeling came out of nowhere, or if it was difficult to conquer, I just used it as an excuse for my future self to have conquered it, so I started directly. These are all okay, mainly It is The language, plot or the original work are too different, and there are those who completely follow the original text, or just hang up at a location, and then the stallion story. You said that you brought a group of people with you, and it melted into your blood. As a result, when you time travel, it is like hanging up, and the heroine in your body is as dead. So what is the point of bringing it with you?

No, author, have you violated the rules of heaven? The comment section is basically full of curses. Actually, the author's writing is okay, there's nothing big wrong with it The innocence of the male protagonist shows that the author is probably a virgin ()(*´◐∀◐`*) There's nothing wrong with the writing, there's still some room for improvement in the writing style, the writing is too bland, I could have more fun, maybe

👴The whole system is pooping and peeing on its head, and there are mandatory tasks, whether they are the protagonist's time travel or the system's time travel.

Speechless, even Aqua can do it. All my group friends are saying that there is no one who can masturbate to Aqua, right? ! Unexpectedly, I still underestimated it! I can laugh for the rest of my life! Ha ha ha ha

The male protagonist is not very well portrayed. The female characters have not collapsed yet because they have the original templates of the anime, but it is also a matter of time. It is a pity.

I came here for Fulilian, but it was gone after five chapters... Then you just opened a comprehensive comic world and started a harem? Feeling cheated

I miss the days when I used to watch variety shows.

There was actually Fulilian chasing after her!

It's a simple novel with no plot. I can write more than a dozen or dozens of chapters just by chatting all day long.

It doesn't matter if the writing is plain, the character's OOC is too serious 😅

The good news is that there are many stitches, but the bad news is that there are not enough stitches.

The world view setting is really bad. The existence of demons is unreasonable. Demons have no emotions. Aren't they the enemies of perfect humans? What is this concept? That means fighting to the death. Unless one party is completely exterminated, there will be no peace. And are the demons too weak? Hundreds of years of studying magic can only reach that level. Is this species incapable of creativity? The settings for using the magic shield are too outrageous, with a continuous cycle of instantaneous on and off. Not to mention what to do if you make a mistake and get injured. This kind of high-intensity operation is very energy-consuming no matter how you think about it. As a result, the author only cares about saving magic power? The use of shields and magic is too primitive. What kind of shield is good against magic, but has poor protection against matter? No one knows how to mix magic? Is it really unique? While manipulating material attacks, wouldn't it be possible to mix attacks with normal magic hidden in them? Or the other way around? Normal shields have multiple layers and different structures, so this theory cannot be used for magic shields? Wouldn't multi-layered composite shields work? It can also reserve part of the magic power, which is long-lasting, and can also increase the scope of shield protection. During the exam, the middle-aged man who controlled the earth was a fool. The magic shield couldn't withstand the large amount of water pressure, so you couldn't use earth to defend yourself? Use quality to fight quality? To catch a bird in the exam, the setting of the bird is also very unreasonable. Such a powerful species is completely inconsistent with the ecological environment. It is also unreasonable to be able to burst out with such a large amount of force instantly when the foot is caught by an ice block. Even if it is fast, it takes time to accelerate. How can it have such a strong explosive power? If it is so powerful, then it is impossible for them to catch this kind of bird. Even if the birdcage can withstand it, it can still fly into the sky with the person and the birdcage. It's unreasonable to copy other people, but Fulian can make unlimited copies? If there was such a thing, if it had been taken out earlier, all the demons would have died. In the final analysis, the clones should be stronger than Fulilian. Fulilian has long been accustomed to hiding her clumsiness. Even if she attacks with all her strength, she is worried about affecting others. Replicants don't know how to use any cruel magic or any method without worrying about the consequences, but Fulian is different? Why can they fight back and forth? That little warrior is unreasonable. When he was practicing, he was able to split a mountain, and he split more than one mountain. What is this? Sword energy? Later, this trick was never used in actual combat. It has always been unreasonable. I can only say that the female author is not very logical in her writing, but the emotional creation of the characters is quite good.

I want to say that I also like picking up girls, but please respect the character of the original heroine and respect it when you are going through the strategy.

There is no content but only dialogue. It is only the second base of writing now. What I said must have an emotional foundation, MD. After months of getting along with each other on the premise of mutual affection, you still have to put up this whole extreme thing, right? Did I come here to watch you press the gun? ! I have almost finished sifting through it now. If I don't get some useful information, those who have desires will have no desire at all. Keep writing and don't get into trouble with Schrödinger. The heroine in the back is nowhere in sight, Tathagata! I want to see Sese's teeth!

Such a retro theme, but it's a pity that misogyny is now popular in Qidian

This book is mainly about female protagonists in anime. All the settings, plots and powers are to serve them. I'm sorry if you don't like reading it!

Whose child is this?

At the beginning, Thor and the male protagonist were so devoted to each other even though the female protagonist was strong and the male was weak. This relationship was very difficult to handle. I had no idea how Thor would accept the male protagonist and start a harem with his non-OOC character. I guess it will be forced to accept Thor later, right? When I think about what happens next, I find it very difficult to accept it! Thor should not have appeared so early. It should have been in the middle and late stages. After the protagonist's harem was formed, a certain woman in the harem rescued Thor and let him compete with the male protagonist for a female protagonist. This way of handling it feels reasonable. . Again, there is a big problem with the way the male protagonist is written. What the male protagonist did when he met his senior schoolmate made me feel like he was reversing the cause, because she will definitely be a member of the harem in the end, so she will definitely accept the interaction initiated by the male protagonist. This is simply Indian thinking!

To become a god, you have to rely on other people's fragments of godhead, and you have to pay back a hundred fragments. What era is this?

Yoshino has already taken action, but it has to be you, author 😏

Come to Zhang Village Girl

Seven Sins, Big and Small

Not all received. Very uncomfortable for an OCD person. Especially someone like Ram who didn't get it. Rem accepted them all. But overall it's a good book.

Is there Alice behind?

"Comprehensive Comics: From Lords to Gods" There are 100,000 words in the manuscript, Gods Struggle for Hegemony in the Universe + Comprehensive Comics. Obtain resources from the anime world, bring them back to the main world to build territory, and compete for hegemony and become a god. It can be regarded as a semi-old comprehensive comic novel. Currently, I plan to travel through "College Apocalypse", "Oda Nobuna", "Battle", "God Killer" "Devil High School" and so on, and then "Hakoba" will definitely be there. The current plan is to make half the plot of the main world and half of the plot of the comprehensive comic, which will be adjusted later. The protagonist is not impotent, but also a shady character, and the description... Everyone knows that he is stuck in the review every day 😭 Please support me.

Everything is good, but there are too many female leads

Author Jiayue Shefei and the four sisters of Zhuqueyuan