Awakening the Mind Energy, Join the Chat Group at the Beginning

Look at the comments section to see what kind of private organization has been established, don't be ridiculous. You don't have money for research institutions, can you? And for research institutions, you need force. Do you have a certificate? Don't you know the four major elements of cultivating immortality? Resources, intelligence and labor are indispensable. Can you beat the official? Where did it explode? You can see a satellite movement at a glance. You still have to inquire slowly. How long do you want to inquire?

Advantages: It is like the if line of the original seeker, but also has elements of a journey to dimensionality, including science fiction and two-dimensional infinity. Non-toxic, the male protagonist is more cautious and prominent, not overshadowed by the theme of the chat group, and does not fall into clichés. The ability is fun and immediate, which is quite unique. The previous rhythms are somewhat similar to the original Seeker, and the original work is used as a reference, so the plot rhythm is okay. Disadvantages: The progress of ability strength and weakness is a bit messy because the chat group feels a little out of control and becomes complicated. This is a dangerous symbol. It will not be easy to write later. It still needs to be integrated. In addition: A slightly harsh point: the author's side-on plot descriptions are there and there are conflicts, but it is not very inspiring in itself. It may be related to the writing style habits, but in short, it only has the excitement brought by the interesting ability and lacks side reflections, which is still a bit less interesting for online novels. That's it, overall it's quite interesting, above.

To be honest, author, having one more group leader is superfluous. The main reason is that this group leader has no role at all. Firstly, the protagonist of the plot knows about the group members. Secondly, the technology in the interstellar era is advanced enough and can be replaced by recruiting group members from the high-tech world. Such a group leader is very important to the protagonist. It is of no use at all. On the contrary, it has the effect of suppressing the protagonist and makes people uncomfortable. The group leader alone has to make the protagonist lower his head and coax him in a good voice. To put it simply, the role of this group leader is dispensable, but her existence makes the protagonist brought in by the readers feel inferior. ps: The most important thing is that your group leader is original, but what you write is a fan novel. It is normal for people not to buy it. If you change the plot character to be the group leader, even if you don't buy it, you won't be disgusted. For example, if you let Aqua be the group leader, the protagonist will coax the reader a little and think that Aqua is really easy to handle. But if you change it to an original one, then the readers will think that your protagonist is so annoying.

There are too many pretentious research contents by the protagonist, and the chat group has almost no sense of existence. It is almost all a routine. The protagonist travels to the past to erode control, and then nothing else. . . This is an obscene novel. . .

The protagonist wondered what was going on, but after trying it out, it turned out to be exactly what happened. This is the protagonist's golden finger, right?

The protagonists are somewhat similar, cautious and suspicious in character, and powerful in telekinesis. It integrates mental suggestion, control, and auxiliary energy absorption. It has a large range and long-lasting influence. It can influence across borders. It is very awesome. The cleaning force has strong abilities. With the help of other worlds, it has already entered the first gradient (it should be) just a few days after awakening.

What do you call martial arts? You are obviously practicing Qi skills

Can you stop doing so much nonsense like Immortal Emperors and Reborns? There are so many chat groups and there are so many worlds that aren't enough for you? It would be good if the main world serves as a development base.

Before writing a lot of specious theories, can you sort out the logic of your words first...

Generally speaking, although the writing is not bad, it is not the type of research on the Ascension genre that I thought. The protagonist is also in the style of a fantasy protagonist. Although the author's writing is good, I feel that the combination of the style and style does not match.

The author is very talented, and this book really gives people an experience of scientific research and discovery of the unknown. But the problem is not without it, that is, the main plot is very general, so that the fun points are too scattered, and there is always a sense of randomness in writing wherever you think.

Hurry up and control everyone. Why don't you control it and keep it for fun?

Have you noticed that in all chat groups in the heavens, there will be Yue Buqun?

What? First of all, the protagonist should be a time traveler. There is still no golden finger researcher. This world has been recovering for a while. Your protagonist is a person who mixes resources under others. How can you compare with national institutions? No matter how talented you are, you can't do research without resources. When this spiritual stone appears, it will not be controlled by major institutions. You will have private geniuses to study it. There are also reborn people in the protagonist's world, which makes me even more speechless. The protagonist has a chat group. Is the past a new future or an old past? There are still world rules that haven't been explained. The Demon Slayer World has breathing methods, Yue Buqun has internal power, Zhanmei has dangerous species, etc. These are unique to each world and do not appear in other worlds. This means that there are world rules. This is equivalent to all living things on the earth, but there are differences between species. However, in general, people cannot have the rebirth of a gecko's severed limbs, the camouflage of a chameleon, etc. So, will the characteristics of different worlds, such as skills, aura, etc., Be figured out? Could it be that the treasures of this world are the poisons of other worlds? All other novel chat groups have point learning, which solves the bug in the world rules. There is also the attitude of the protagonist. First of all, the protagonist is too self-centered in his own world. When others come to ask for spiritual stones, the protagonist's attitude is that no one can touch my things. Isn't this the three hundred taels of silver that are unavailable here? Tell others clearly that there is a secret here, and that the spiritual stone was provided by the institute, but it turned out to be a public weapon for personal use. The protagonist's behavior is probably the mentality of the protagonist in "Super Out of Control". There is also the protagonist's attitude towards the chat group. It is normal to have doubts about the group members. After all, Liu's Dark Forest Law is quite good, but the protagonist is on guard against others and does something dirty himself. Are you not taking the initiative to expose your position? After all, there are chat groups, so the will of the world may also exist. If you directly transmit your thoughts to others, aren't you afraid of being caught by the will of the world? Finally, what is the significance of the existence of this chat group? The protagonist feels that he is following the research flow, but it turns out that the two members of the group at the beginning are school girls, one is a hypocrite, and the other is a fighting maniac. They can only provide experimental materials that are not available in their own world, but can you complete the research alone? Are you a person like Tony who is cursed by knowledge?

It feels weird. The purple energy of the sun is ultraviolet light. This is a bit outrageous... It feels like it was specially set for the protagonist and his group to cheat.

It looks pretty good. The effect of the mind field, the patterns of inner energy, and the exponential jump increase brought about by scientific research on extraordinary things all seem reasonable and amazing. The plot is also very interesting, and I feel that every chapter is refreshing.

I still feel that Allen's one is too outrageous! Just a native of the world😅

Didn't anyone watch it? It shouldn't be. It's very well written, but the story about being a nanny in a strange world is not very good. It's too boring.

That Divine Punishment Organization seems like a joke. I wrote a lot of scientific research, just because I was thinking. It's not science fiction, it's not fantasy, it's not fantasy. That national organization is purely watery.

This book feels too dirty. How can you defeat a powerful reincarnated protagonist? The cognitive gap in knowledge alone is ridiculously large.

There are too many settings, and they are not explained clearly. It feels like we already know a lot of things by default, and it feels like we are in the clouds.

If you write a bad book, there will be no one left.

The setting is very good, and the writing is readable, but don't be too self-indulgent. I suggest you read it again every 30 minutes after finishing writing to sort out the logic.

Why do I feel like the more I write, the more metaphysical it becomes?

It's a cool article. It's so cool to read. Isn't it a eunuch?

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

Nowadays, ordinary people in society do more than work, eat, drink and have fun, and novels are one of them. I feel that people have a sense of crisis in life. I study Buddhism, and the six paths of reincarnation are reversed from life to life. How can I be liberated? I think I need to accumulate merit and recite classics.

Why are you so watery? Why don't you even write about eating, drinking and having diarrhea?