The Wizard Starts with Awakening the Consciousness Factor

The cover of the book looks like an old friend I have known for a long time.

Not bad, not bad. I like to watch the genre of academic masters and geniuses, rather than the genre of useless and reckless people, who get a cheat and rely on mechanical gods to solve the gap in strength.

Advantages 1 The writing is smooth 2 The logic is not bad 3 The plug-ins and settings are very good 4 The world view is very good 5 The main characters are currently well-designed 6 The main line process is well arranged Let's talk about the shortcomings 1 The routine is too old and rubbish, which makes the plot seem to be completely forced to create conflicts, which will be very discouraging, even if the logic is well written and explained. Suggestion: Don't write these old plots , write something new, and explain the plot. At least explain it clearly first instead of finishing the plot, and then explain it later 2 The supporting characters and ordinary people are too witty, and everyone is very jumpy 3 The protagonist is more inclined to be a good person, not Speaking of being heinous, the protagonist of the wizard novel suggested that it is better to put profit first, otherwise most people who read the wizard novel will not like it Complaint: Many settings want to please both sides, and both salty tofu and sweet tofu will be offended

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There are a lot of scenes with this male supporting actor Lun En. It's quite annoying to jump up and down all day long, and he also looks so self-righteous.

Xifit is a disciple of a level 2 strong man. If you want to investigate a person, it's not a matter of just one sentence. You didn't write it down at all. The power

. . . How should I put it? The writing is good, but can you not write some routines from the last century? They are very boring. Aren't you tired of explaining these routines one by one? It is completely unnecessary. The writing is quite good in other aspects. This aspect seriously drags down the quality of this book.

Look at the cover, little Heizi, your chicken feet are exposed, right?

It's so strong before I'm even a mid-level apprentice. It depends on the author's ability to grasp it later, but it's still pretty good-looking, logical, and natural and smooth.

It looks good. The main character is talented and capable, instead of the main character being a useless loser with no golden fingers. It would be better if the main character is more handsome.

The cover is very attractive. . . .

The protagonist is a bit like a free man

Author, please tell me about your state of mind. It's so uncomfortable to watch.

It's probably because it's gone. I haven't read it too much. I'm often first and second. I feel like this book is a pity. The author will learn from his mistakes in the next book and write an original plot instead of writing the clichés of the last century. The results should be very good. After all, the writing is creative and creative. So far, except for the problem of old clichés, everything else is good, so be it.

Why isn't this book popular? I think it's pretty good. Although there are some inexplicable villains who get close to each other, they are basically sent away by the protagonist. It's just that I'm a little confused about half-elves. Is it possible that you are poisonous because at first Lun En mocked her face to face, but then fortunately the relationship between the protagonists was still good? Personally, I think the protagonist ignored him at all. It was just Lunn who opened the attack unilaterally. The protagonist didn't take the attack, so it was still acceptable.

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It's okay, but the update is a bit slow

I'm super, it turns out it's you, Master Yise

The writing is very good, but typos and missing words have increased in recent chapters. I suggest you check it more after you finish writing!

Yes, he has the appearance of a wizard who is in charge

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Well! It's cut again, but I don't know when we'll see each other again!