Type-Moon: Pledging Allegiance to the Lion King from the Start

Whether the protagonist wants to accomplish something, there will be a large group of people who will stop him, whether they recognize him or not. Do you have to be deflated?

​​Seeing that this is the end of the second chapter, I feel that the author has not written his own content in this fanfic. From a plot point of view, it feels like there is no difference at all whether there is a protagonist or not, and the important nodes are completely copied from FGO, so what's the point of watching the fanfic? Here, I would like to put forward some of my personal thoughts: In terms of setting, the protagonist is a heterogeneous existence that is not accepted by human beings. It is clear that he can only follow the path of an animal, so the author should not hesitate. It is more reasonable for each chapter to advance to a growth stage. In addition, you must have a beastly style in terms of force, and you cannot overturn or be in trouble when you fight a small boss. You must know that every beast has at least planet-level combat power and grows very fast. The protagonist's battle with the boss of the original work should be the most exciting part of this book. In terms of depth, the author should explore the protagonist's struggle between human and beast. Just like the definition of beast, it shows its claws on the current peace for the sake of a better long-term future. The protagonist's excessive growth in force leads to a deviation from Ritsuka in the perspective of looking at the problem. From the protagonist's point of view, surviving and ensuring that human history can continue to move forward is the top priority. As long as the ending is good, the local pain in the process is acceptable, and even cold-blooded measures can be taken to avoid risks when necessary. Ritsuka is a human being who lives in the present. Because she is weak, she cannot see the so-called way forward, and cannot confirm the future described by the protagonist from the perspective of the protagonist. All she can be sure of is everyone and everything she comes into contact with at the moment, and she will do her best for it. Therefore, at a certain special node, the protagonist and Ritsuka are completely opposite, and after experiencing various events, the protagonist is awakened by Ritsuka: the way of being human that he so-called insists on has actually seriously deviated from the human position. Because humans themselves are weak, they are confused, timid, etc.; But also because of their weakness, humans have unimaginable tenacity. They fight to survive and burn themselves to strive for the future. But because of the so-called "future" he saw, he felt superior and denied the meaning of human beings. As a result, the protagonist fully awakens and makes his own decision as a human at key points. Just like "Fufu" used the principle of comparison to save Mashu, the protagonist can also use his own beast principle to open a way for Ritsuka in a desperate situation, and finally "fades" and enters the next spiral reincarnation. The above is my personal opinion. After all, the fandom is the protagonist's story. Finally, I wish the author better and better results in this book. (Ps: Since the protagonist has unconsciously seen the history of mankind, give him clairvoyance, otherwise the protagonist will be very awkward and neither good nor bad. After all, the first chapter is a character performance similar to a prophet. It is better to continue)

How should I put it? The protagonist's goals and endings in each small stage have a paradoxical feeling. The ending is still the same ending with the protagonist and without the protagonist. Also, at the beginning, I thought the promise with The Lion King was a big breakout point in the future, but the reunion was too easy and made me feel illusory. Summary: Your purpose in writing fan fiction is not to change something. I might as well read the original work.

Monster Monk

No? Then what kind of nonsense did FZ write? After working for a long time but didn't get the third method? Really, FA, do you want to drink more water?

Let's meet for free for a limited time 😊

I always like to drag my feet, and how many days do I want to write about what happened in one night? The protagonist doesn't want to be the protagonist less and less, and instead looks like a villain who is very promiscuous, has the advantage, and constantly gives opportunities.

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Less original and more original.

It worked fine at the beginning, but it didn't work well when I saw fz The descriptive text looked decent, but in the back the protagonist was like a headless fly. He didn't know what to do, so he just followed the original work and mixed it up. After a long time of mixing, nothing was accomplished. If you want to fight, you need to find a decent reason. For example, you said you wanted to take Sieg away, and then you forced a fight. After fighting for a long time, you won and then said you wouldn't take him away. It's like a deep well. In short, it's weird, and it's confusing to watch It's a bit tasteless