I Have Overcome My Calamity and Ascended to Immortality

Come on, author, it's a great book with lots of details.

It feels very messy, or in other words, it gives people the impression that they are thinking of where they are written. The system feels very big, but when you look at the details, it feels like there is nothing. Especially the strength and performance in the system are very contradictory. There are certain aspects of Blood Sea that I feel are quite powerful, but the author doesn't seem to mean that he is not powerful, so he changed a lot of maps in just a few dozen pages. But none of them can be fully expressed

The protagonist's character is deliberately silly and sweet.

There is a place in the second chapter where several chapter reviews suddenly disappeared. It must have been swallowed when I was revising and polishing them. I would like to say sorry to the brothers here.

Let's talk about the advantages first: the characters and background settings are very good, the writing style is also good, and the text is very comfortable to read However, 1. The text still cannot withstand scrutiny, and some places are not smooth. 2. The plot design is worrying, it does not achieve a fascinating effect and has no ups and downs. It's a bit tasteless. But the setting of this book is very good, I still try to read it

It's a bit old-fashioned, but it's best to be creative. We've all come to the starting point, why don't we get enlightened? For example, write the witch to death, and don't care too much about the relationship between the sexes, just accept what is useful.

The plot is too simple and lacks any real content?

It's very well written, keep it up

I won't correct any typos. They are found in almost every chapter. It's outrageous.

The first one! The author has finished writing "Don't be a eunuch".

It's a bit complicated and the events are a bit unclear_(:з∠)_

As soon as you leave the house, you are in a situation where you are not sure whether you will live or die. Your classmates are making fun of your life for revenge. If you don't return it, your cultivation as an immortal will be in vain. I want to know if the person named Zhuang is dead?

Come on, author, the book is pretty good. I haven't seen Susu fight the white-robed witch yet.

The author has invested in you, and the requirements are not high, as long as it can be published and completed.

The background of this book is actually very similar to Ming Zun

Now I no longer like watching Yuan Ying transform into a god, but I like Yuan Shen or Dongtian later.

It's about to be put on the shelves after a round of testing the waters, come on

The male protagonist's name is similar to that of the male protagonist from Xianye next door

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Borrowing my precious treasure, I recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and clever, and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies", which is hilarious...