Who Said Bad Women Have to Become Good?

It's a mess, with no ideas and no writing.

Hurry up and put it on the shelves for updates.

Reminds me of "I was trapped by a demon" a few years ago, I like this type. However, the beginning of this game is a bit convoluted, with the reincarnation and possession of clones, etc. The flower work is considered complete, so it is quite easy to screen users. It's better to start simple, author, come on! In addition, I really vomited Chang'an Changsheng. .

No man, why can't I even read novels? I really don't want to use my brain to read novels😭😭😭😡

I don't know if anyone will read it, but I'll write it first. First of all, this book does not have a single female protagonist, so if you mind, please decide whether to watch it. The author will not describe the non-core heroine extensively, and the role of the supporting actress will be limited to a certain level. The author will supplement the character cards according to the writing progress. Secondly, the heroines in this book all have their own "evil" qualities, but there will be no purely anti-human settings. In game terms, neutral "evil" at best. Then, due to the continuous improvement of the outline, the author may make certain corrections to the previous plot, including the modification of some sentences, character arcs, plot bugs, narrative rhythm, etc., But the main structure of the chapter will not be changed. (The pace of the first few chapters is a bit slow, and we are currently trying to find ways to fix and optimize it.) Finally, if you are interested in this book, I hope you can support the new author. Whether it is recommendation votes, follow-up reading, comments, investments, or monthly votes, it is a great support for the author! It is very important to read new books! If you want to keep reading and read it in one go, I hope you can easily turn to the last page in a few seconds every time there is an update. This will not affect your reading! Thank you!

After reading a few chapters, there are no problems with the writing and characterization. The main problems are: The first one is that the plot is too Riddler-like. Of course the master Shirogane can do this, but the most important thing for a new author is to make money first and not starve to death before he can have the motivation to write. Chapters 20 and 30 do not feel like the plot is progressing at all. Before one puzzle is solved, another puzzle comes up, just like several bottles of drinks with different flavors. Before one is finished, several bottles are mixed together... And there is also a disadvantage. Several lines are mixed together. The first part will make the plot too riddle, and writing the later part will lead to too much effort in the previous part and nothing to write... Actually, there is no need to rush. It will be better if one line is advanced to the end and the other line is drawn out. , We can generally understand that the fun part of this book is that the harem and the identity of the protagonist are revealed little by little as the plot advances, but now the plot riddle has seriously affected these two points. I hope the author can see it

The author seems to be a newbie, and it really won't be popular with the way you write. Just like Jianlai written by Fenghuo Opera Princes, a lot of people can't stand the story "Lizhu Cave" written earlier. But at least he is famous and has a large number of die-hard fans. But with your writing style, I honestly have no idea what it is about after reading thirty or forty chapters. The Riddler has never been very popular in online novels.

It's all in the fog, it's not that exciting, everything seems weird, but I never take it to heart. I try my best to save people just a few days after practicing. I really don't take my own life seriously.

This person has actually been around for a long time, and there will be a small reversal in the near future. I don't know if you have guessed it.

1. Do you think the plot rhythm of the last ten chapters is acceptable? Wouldn't it be too Riddler? 2. Due to the space problem of the new book issue, I have restrained myself on the details such as environment, psychology, appearance, etc. Without these parts, the book will be confusing, such as the transition will not be smooth. 3. Is the current way of describing combat acceptable? Sometimes I feel that the writing is not satisfying enough and I want to add more, but I am afraid it will be too delayed. I hope readers who see this can give me some suggestions if they have time, thank you all. 😘

I looked at more than 20 pictures, and all of them were the Riddler. There was a lot of foreshadowing, but I didn't solve the puzzle, and I didn't see anything exciting. The more I looked at it, the more depressed I became.

It's really boring to make up the character name with something like "eternal life, peace and security". I hope the author can create one of his own. If that doesn't work, just pick two words from an ancient poem.

Promise me, next time I won't be named after Chang'an, Immortality or something like that. 😂Whether the plot is good or not is one thing, the name of the male protagonist is also a bit confusing

Read it in one day. Everyone has mentioned the problem. There were too many characters at the beginning, and everyone had their own purposes and secrets. It was too confusing. It is gradually revealed later on, and the reading difficulty is no less than that of Lord of Mysteries. There are too many characters, which means that some characters are destined to have too little writing. Even Su Zier has a decisive battle and I still don't know what she wants to do. If anyone knows, please tell me. I won't go back and read it. The purposes and identities of other characters are almost clear. There are also settings such as split souls, ghost gods, and reincarnation. They vary from person to person. I don't think they are poisonous. This book belongs to the harem genre, and the background of the main character feels ridiculously large. I hope the author will pay attention next. Too many characters are really a bit brain-burning. I'll give you two free recommendation votes as encouragement, come on, the author.

The first volume is about the amnesiac protagonist regaining his memory, meeting or reuniting with several bad women, and finally breaking the story. This determines that no matter how much I write in the early stage, it is impossible to cover the entire Xinshui City at once. The first twenty chapters are a mess, but I have tried to be as straightforward and quick-paced as possible in the following chapters. If it still feels like a riddle, it's because I don't have enough writing skills. I think it is not difficult to find some foreshadowings if you pay a little attention, such as the breeze every time the Yunshui Empress appears, such as the little carp and the dragon. These foreshadowings are all for the current transition. Finally, the core of this book is "bad women", which is also the inspiration for writing this book. Except for Shen Xinyao, the female characters who have appeared in the first volume have not yet become "black". The other female characters have their own positions and ideas. If these are not made clear, then this book will definitely collapse. If you think it's a riddle, I hope you can tell me specifically where it is, otherwise I really don't know, so just leave it at that.

The story is okay, but it's a bit too confusing, and the scenes often change suddenly. Then almost all the supporting characters are the Riddler, often digging another hole without any foreshadowing. Another thing is that the entire world view in Volume 1 is so huge. How will it be expanded after the end of Volume 1?

The writing is good, but there are always foreshadowings that I can't understand. The more I read, the more confusing it becomes. It's a pity.

Shennong has been updated to chapter 46, and he is still the Riddler.

To be honest, I can't stand it. I want to imitate the opening of Fenghuo but my writing skills are really weak. One word is confusing.

I can only say that it is too riddle-like. Will it really do well if I write it like this?

After reading it in one afternoon, let me talk about my feelings. About Chapter 50, holes were dug in many places but were not filled in, which made me confused. Slowly filling in the holes later will allow people to understand a little bit, but they are not yet fully understood. During the process of filling the holes, I felt like I was digging holes again, which led to some places that were like riddles. To sum it up, let me see → I can't understand but I want to continue reading → I seem to understand → I can't understand again → I understand (if I understand) Thanks for pushing it after writing more than 80 chapters. If there are only about 50 chapters now, I really can't stand it. The mystery behind the plot is slowly revealed, and the viewing experience will be much better. My personal suggestion is that the plot should be more coherent. It is best to fill the holes quickly or dig fewer holes. Give me two recommendations, come on, don't be a eunuch. There are a few more chapters to come.

After reading this introduction, I feel that this book is not serious.

Did the plot of the second volume develop a little too fast?

What I want is this feeling of being in the fog. It's not interesting to know what the next dozens of chapters will be about after reading one chapter. I feel ashamed to say that I have read a lot of novels, but I really don't have much money to spend. It looks like I'm going to spend it with you.