Abyss Walker: from the Ancient Times to Hot Weapons Bullying

Run! Run! This is shit! Hidden shit! Poison point 1, one of the heroines in the basic world [that is, the Tang Dynasty world], Zhao Hongying was married to Song Zhen who wanted to kill the protagonist [replaced the identity of the original protagonist, the original identity was the original eldest brother], and gave birth to a fat daughter. I believe that all readers can still eat Ren Qi, but what if I say that this Ren Qi not only has a deep relationship with the protagonist's original body, but also has a disconnected relationship with Song Zhen [who replaced the protagonist's original eldest brother and always wanted to kill the protagonist]? This is a mouthful of shit. Is it good for everyone? The first heroine from the beginning of the chapter, Zhao Hongying's sister Zhao Hongling, everyone ate very sweetly at first, and then found out that this woman turned out to be a reborn person, and she liked the protagonist who was eating meal replacements! The reason is that her original world was about to be conquered by an extraterrestrial demon, and the original person of that world [not the protagonist, the protagonist is a time traveler, these Song Yang are all parallel world peers of the original person] used his talents to send her to this world. When she first helped the protagonist, she thought that the protagonist was the reincarnation of the protagonist in her world. Later, she found out that this was not the case and cut off contact with the protagonist! It is obvious later that the author either found that fewer and fewer people were watching, or his fragile glass heart was about to be broken by the spray, and the two heroines were hidden in the snow! That's right, he didn't die, and he wasn't retaliated against, he was just hidden in the snow! Do you still like these two cuckolds? This is the first and second poisonous point! This author's title is a complete lie, at least after chapter 181! No exoskeletons, chainswords, or laser guns! From beginning to end in hundreds of chapters, the protagonist gets assault rifles, grenades, machine guns and anti-aircraft guns! Basically, I am learning martial arts from now on! I also like martial arts, but I was attracted by your title and introduction. I would be happier if you two blossomed, but you gave up the gun and took up martial arts, which makes me very unhappy! And when other readers asked when exoskeletons and laser guns would come out, the author himself posted a chapter [Is that martial arts? byd can't even remember the title or introduction of his own book, but I'm convinced too! These are the two most poisonous points. There are other small and medium poisonous points that I won't mention. Everyone, run! I withdrew first. I spent 20 yuan and ate a mouthful of shit. I have to go to recuperate for a few days.

Chapter 181 to Chapter 183, these chapters currently seem to be very poisonous. First of all, from the current point of view, the No. 2 Heroine Zhao Hongying is a loser. She married the eldest brother who wanted to kill the protagonist and gave birth to a baby. This is actually nothing, just ignore her. But the author refused and asked her to send people to kill the protagonist again and again. Okay, then kill him? Then Chapter 181 came out, the protagonist met Zhao Hongying, fired two shots, but was dodged, and felt something was wrong, [but the gun did not fire without the machine gun], so he walked up and pinched someone else's neck, but he didn't kill him. I started to talk, but I couldn't talk, okay, the information has been suppressed, it's acceptable. Where is your talent for drawing cards? Why not use it from the beginning? I argued with this person for a whole two-in-one chapter, and then I used the ability to draw cards, and found out, oh, the opponent has destiny to protect him, and he can't be beaten to death. But what the author wrote here is very retarded. If she really couldn't be killed, did she need to dodge the bullets fired at the beginning? No need for thiophene. If you hide, it means you will still be injured. The author spends a lot of time describing how much information an ordinary person knows about Zhao Hongying, how deep his scheming is, and how painful it is. I am curious about one thing. Yes, destiny can allow her to dodge a bullet, but the burst mode of the automatic rifle in your hand was eaten by you? The rate of fire of the machine gun is compromised by you? Did you eat the grenade? I can accept your claim that she can run if you run too far and stand up, or even if destiny teleports her away directly after the repeating rifle and machine cannon fire, but you chose the most retarded and weakest way of writing. The protagonist talks a few words, then does nothing, draws a card, is suppressed, and is let go. As well as Brother B's destiny ability, I was really drunk. Any ordinary person with some brains [even found it in many book club posts] can understand that if your destiny talent is really as good as you say, why are you still stuck in the Seven Towers? Why should we abide by the rules of the Eight Kings? Wouldn't it be good to directly rise to the 9th Tower and be on equal footing with the Eight Kings? If you don't dare, then it means you are still afraid. If you are afraid, then it means there must be a weakness in this destiny talent. Then the protagonist was frightened and felt suspicious and self-doubtful for a while. The last paragraph questioning Goldfinger and feeling that I shouldn't be so arrogant is well written, but I think I should add a paragraph and I shouldn't be so stupid. I didn't call you proud, but I didn't call you inferior, either? Tmd You can directly kill 9-tower masters in more than a year. Are you afraid of this 7-tower fw? If it doesn't work, why don't we give it another three years of growth and kill it? Do you have to doubt yourself? What else can I say? What else can I say?

It becomes more and more poisonous as it goes on, and in the later stages the protagonist feels that he has been outwitted.

I have read all the chapters so far, and my overall evaluation is hard to describe. The theme of the abyss/world confrontation is good, but the protagonist's intermittent brain twitches and intellectual decline are simply an insult to the reader's IQ, and the reader's brain is pressed to the ground and rubbed. Book friends who haven't read it yet can read the free chapters first, which are pretty good, and then subscribe to read Chapters 180-183 of Toxic to see if you can endure it. The above summarizes the opinions of most book friends, please subscribe with caution.

Let's take a look. From the author's latest paragraph, it can be seen that the author still wants to get rid of the tradition of fantasy without reason. The main character is also doing a pretty good job. Come on, can you do more? I'll enjoy it if you burst out with a few.

I haven't read it yet, and I'm not qualified to comment on the content, but I know that the author must have written better than me, a coward who works behind closed doors and dare not go out to show his eyes. What should I comment on? As soon as I saw the introduction, I broke my guard Since I was a child, I have not been good at academics. In class, my mind is full of fantasies. At that time, I imagined a huge worldview composed of tens of thousands of works. The protagonists in my fantasy, one after another, regardless of casualties, will use all kinds of methods including Taoism, magic, arcana, thaumaturgy, alchemy, alchemy, enchantment, and talismans God created humans, artificial humans, natural humans, halflings, half-orcs, elemental humans, transborn humans, immortals, etc. The chaotic races such as the Skull Man, the Round-Skull Man, the Innocent Man, the Semi-legal Man, and the Green Dwarf unite into one country. The heroes of each race use their lives as firewood and survival as oil to light up the endless refining fire and establish a super civilization that spans races and forms of life and death. Then what's wrong with my story? Then let's talk about why these chaotic races meet together. To put it simply, it was a lunatic who woke up Azathoth. This beast shattered many universes, and the gods and saints in the victim universes, the ancient powers, sacrificed themselves just like the introduction in this book to find a home for these innocent suffering lives. At present, I Call it the Home Sector. The density of habitable planets is extremely high. The protagonist's world is a Gaia planet called Tonghe. No matter it is undead, elemental creatures or humans, they can live very comfortably. Then a character similar to Qin Shihuang unified the planet, unified the Sector, and then destroyed Azathoth. Hey, other people, not to mention starting, have already won medals in international competitions, but I have just tied up my shoelaces for this story that I have planned for several years. Of course I gave up writing a long time ago. Although my writing is barely up to the starting point average level, and I practice posting on forums every day, I believe that only 3D animation can allow me to give the magnificent story in my heart to the public and fulfill my childlike innocence. I have also left short fan articles in other books, but they are just my humble works, and they can be regarded as footprints left on the road to pursuing my dreams.

There is no need to read it after more than 120 chapters. The title of the book is Hot Weapons. Afterwards, hot weapons are of little use and become the main force of cold weapons Then the world should be destroyed. The protagonist in the whole world only wants to save the world, and the others all want to enslave others, Then all the gods acted like fools and formed a resistance army to become slave leaders. Just 10 years ago, the Eight Kings rose up. According to the protagonist's cheating performance, the first tower was not as good as Xiang Yu in history. As a result, he was ruled by eight slave owners as soon as he appeared... The main character's brother is extremely valuable (according to the heroine and the previous description, the most expensive in the world right now is the Eight Kings, but the protagonist's brother is not like the Eight Kings, his family has been wiped out), and then his Song family was wiped out... A bunch of people wanted to kill his brother, but he was like a fool, he didn't react at all... The heroine and the protagonist have only been separated for half a year. They participate every 7 days, 6 months, 24 times, which should be far less than this number. After all, it takes time to find someone to become the tower master, but it seems that she has been promoted to the top in less than half a year. The rest should be because the organization refuses to be promoted. The protagonist can be killed at any time in half a year, but the protagonist has the power to send someone...

The protagonist should stop talking about going home all the time. We readers are really not interested in this. Can the protagonist go home in the end? No one cares at all, so there is no need to repeat this.

This book was okay in the early stage, but terrible in the later stage I am often wronged, but I still have to think about others and prove that I have a few bowls of fans in my belly. I can't understand why I have to add drama to the little fairy surnamed Zhao. It is true that someone comes to kill you, it is true that they wronged you, then they are enemies. How simple. Forgiving her is a matter of God. Your task is to send her to see God last year. In the later stages, the more I watched, the more frustrated I became. Invincibility was gone, hot weapons were gone, and the protagonist was often bullied by others. It was absolutely terrible.

I found that reading more books makes me become more mature. After reading Chapter 92, Pig's Feet and Sister Hong met, I felt something was wrong. It's a bit like a small head controlling a big head. The author's buttocks replaced the head. I felt it after reading the comments. I'm glad I didn't subscribe all at once. Although 40 is not much, subscribing in history will still disgust people. Leave an eye open and run away.

One reviewer said it well: the author clearly should have carefully crafted the plot, but instead spent pen and ink describing some inexplicable supporting characters, some supporting characters that have no effect on advancing the plot. As a result, the plot relies entirely on the author to forcefully promote the development, and there is no smoothness at all! ! What a waste of subject matter

The writing was good before chapter 150, but not so good after that. Do the heavens and otherworldly worlds need you guns and weapons? No other world has it, only you have it. In ancient times, there were no problems. Are you still doing this in the world of heavens? You are the only one in the world who has hot weapons? Is there no other world?

No, buddy, this Green Tea has sent people to kill the protagonist, why are you still giving up the heroine card? Is the protagonist so licking a dog? Is the author so licky?

It's too verbose, and you make a lot of messy settings to trick yourself. Later, you will have to write a lot of arrogance and have to deal with it yourself. The strength levels are in a mess. To put it simply, the little sword fairy is level 15, and the pig's foot can be killed with one shot at level 1. What's the use of level 15? So what does it take to improve strength? Ordinary abyss walkers increase their strength by upgrading their physique? Your protagonist can draw cards, and everyone else can play with weapons? You have been recruited so many times in 5 years at level 15 and were killed by rifles. You can save the world even though your force value is not as high as the low martial arts world 😅

Question, there are more than 900 practitioners in existence, and the forces that appeared in the chapter about setting up stalls are >15, so I guess there are actually at least 20 organizations. How many people are there in each organization? How to organize the organizational structure when there are an average of 45 people in each organization. So how did some people engage in slavery? The protagonist has already killed 3 or 4 Walkers in Chapter 40. When I saw the total number of people, I thought that 3 or 4 major forces would be good, but there are actually more than 20. Is such a small number of practitioners enough? If you do this, no one will be able to make a difference.

I have read them all so far, and overall they are pretty good. Currently I am a little confused about the behavior of Zhao Hongying and the protagonist in the latest chapter. Let's see what the author writes later. Zhao Hongying must write to death. Three waves of people were sent to kill the protagonist. Later, she said that the wave was not sent by her. Did she believe the protagonist? And the destiny effect is a bit unnatural. The destiny should be the ability of the protagonist's brother Song Zhen. He should be the savior raised in this world, the son of destiny. It can also be used by a spouse, and the effect can interfere with the unknown mental characteristics of the protagonist even the gods panel cannot detect. The intensity is so outrageous. As for the speculation behind the plot, Song Zhen is not pretending to be Song Lide, right? She also married Zhao Hongying, otherwise the latest chapter describes how Zhao Hongying could have that kind of pain. Based on the pro-sexual desire caused by the previous invasion of the abyss, then Song Lide may be the owner of the disgusting thing that is afraid of, and everything can be connected. Song Lide is from the Abyss. Song Zhen may really be the savior introduced by the world, but his father found out and directly replaced him. He can also use his abilityDestiny to better penetrate into the world.

The last few chapters have a strong flavor of female videos

I can write a real god who dodges Gatlin left and right, and it's a new world, and I use the relationship between the old world to set up a real server.

Please change the name of your book to "From the Ancient Times When Halberds Bully", you would take out your halberd when you see someone, and use Gatling to attack them. Did Gatlin let it go?

Putting this sentence in other novels, I would only say "right". But in a novel with this title, it is really disappointing. Modern weapons become less useful as you get further into the book, so I suppressed them hard. I have been trying to improve his physical talent and playing with him to defeat Fang Tian Hua Ji. Hitting King Yan's artillery seemed to have a great effect. In the end, Fang Tian drew his halberd and used his ultimate melee attack, otherwise King Yan would have run away. In this world, the higher the physique, the stronger. I started to compile martial arts secrets and practice martial arts.

Chapter 180 starts to continuously feed💩, me👀you🐴.

In addition In addition, your protagonist has repeatedly said in the first dozens of chapters that his ideal is to go home as soon as possible. Why did you suddenly decide to be the savior? Are you that familiar with the natives? Have you fallen for just one young lady? Are you tired of thinking about Shu? Thankless tease😆

You're trying to sell dog meat on a sheep's head, using hot weapons to attract readers, but then you end up playing with a halberd? 🤔

Zhao Hongying arranged for someone to kill the protagonist. If Zhao Hongying is not killed in the follow-up, this novel will be garbage.

Let's talk about the plot first. The overall plot is okay, and the copy design is also okay. If you only look at the plot, this book is still good. Let's talk about the next two poisonous points. (The following content contains some spoilers) The first sister is Zhao Hongying. In the author's setting, each parallel world has the protagonist Song Yang, and then there is the childhood sweetheart Zhao Hongying, and there is Zhao Hongling. Song Yang in the Tang Dynasty died before the protagonist traveled through time. He died from his adoptive father and so-called brother. Then the protagonist traveled through time. Zhao Hongying believed that it was the protagonist's willingness that led to Song Yang's death, and then sent someone to kill the protagonist. This was fine and not considered a poisonous point. The problem is that the author arranged for Zhao Hongying from Tang Dynasty to marry the protagonist's enemy and have a child? ? ? Author, you arranged Zhao Hongying as the heroine, and the result is NTR, right? The second one is the sister in Sisters. There is a copy of Invasion of the Abyss. Everything was fine at first, but the atmosphere of ambiguity gradually increased, but later they revealed their secrets, and the author said: The previous ambiguity disappeared, and there was no follow-up. ? ? Then let me ask you, why did you write so much emphasis on words and ink? Originally, sisters were a bonus, but what the hell was written in the end.

I feel like it's a waste of money to subscribe... If you don't want to read it, the subject matter is good. The plot... Looks like curry, ugh

The plot behind it is not good to watch, I don't even need the golden finger, the world jumps around, I don't understand 🙂

Thermal weapons gained a small advantage in the early stage, but were useless later on. They were dodged by bullets when they entered the martial arts world.

Paid ones are poisonous... I can't stand it anymore after seeing Destiny. The destiny of a broken world... Actually suppressed a cheat that was stronger than it

The first two chapters are okay. Later, when I meet Sister Hong, the protagonist seems to suddenly start licking her. The author also starts to add characters like crazy. At the beginning, the protagonist said that he wants to go home. In the second chapter, he suddenly feels like a holy mother. Then Sister Hong uses the power of bondage again. It's a bit boring. I'll leave it for now.