All-Player Game: From Founding a Clan to Building a Natural God Realm

The author wrote a lot at first, but you didn't explain the reasons at all. How do I know why the protagonist wants to build a family? What are the benefits of building this family, and what is his inner driving force? Including talking about character cards and all kinds of things right from the beginning. It is never explained, and it is assumed that we readers all know it. Anyway, the more we read, the more excited we become. If it doesn't work, the author should think about it carefully and repost it if it's time to do so.

After reading it for a long time, I don't understand at all what kind of garbage you wrote about the three golden pieces here? The donkey's words are completely different from the horse's, and nothing is explained clearly. The power system and the world are all written in a mess, which is worse than a running account.

After writing so many chapters, I found that you never quite match your own skill list to form a skill chain! Why bother if you have to wait until something is missing? If you have a golden finger, it will not work well. You will always write with a hammer here and a hammer here and there. There are many scenes, but what is the use? There is no obvious improvement to one's own strength. The same goes for families. There is no one who arranges for relatives to perform their own duties. They all work in a swarm. Thinking that one by one, such a family can become a natural kingdom, it is really a pig's foot. A good subject is written like this without any planning. It's really yours 👍👍

What are the poisonous points? Or you can't tell the poisonous points, because you don't know what the author wants to write. The order is the order in which the protagonist gets it, but there is no explanation of the background of the NPC, and the setting is not written. I don't even know what I wrote O_o, best friend 2 has been sprayed like this, how dare you?

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Is there anything similar to the setting of this book? It's not enough.

There are no settings at all. Just watching him level up is the same as playing. You don't think it's an online game. Key online games have data. Your character has no experience points. Just watch him level up there. It feels so awkward...

The writing is quite good, and it gets better and better. The author's thinking is very out-of-the-box, unconstrained and unconventional. However, the first few chapters are too jumpy and have a sense of a pop-conscious novel. Many readers can't understand it, and naturally they can't stand it (mainly in the first few chapters). You want to deal with it first, then suppress it, but the plot setting itself has some flaws. But the further you read, the more attractive it becomes. It is not as procedural as many other books. Highly recommend this book!

Very novel and imaginative setting, good

It's a bit confusing to read. There are many settings that the author knows about but didn't write them down for us to see.