Mortal: Starting from Becoming Linghu Ancestor

You will know that you must be a eunuch if your fellow mortals do not grab the Heavenly Vase. If you are greedy for life and afraid of death, your path to immortality will be cut off.

I found that people who write about ordinary people like to write about Han Li. They always want to be brothers with him and protect him like a holy mother. As a result, his grades are so bad, which proves that there is no good end for being a dog licker. Look at the Mahayana book. They don't write much about Han Li. They just take advantage of others' good grades. Think about it yourself.

I don't feel that the golden finger of the protagonist is of any use. In the original work, the ancestor Linghu is in the middle stage of Yuanying. When the protagonist Han Lili appears, he is still in the middle stage of Yuanying. What's the use? Will hundreds of years be in vain? In the past few hundred years, you can write about other adventures and the like, instead of going through it all at once. The protagonist's cultivation level has not increased at all. If there is a golden finger, at least it should be the peak in the late Yuan Yue. What's the use of writing like this? I might as well read the original work. I ran too fast all at once, or is it still the peak in the mid-term? It's better not to wash the gold finger. I haven't seen any changes. The plot is too bland. Within a few hundred years, I can write about adventures and travels.

The author commits the common problem of all irritating authors, that is, "hard" suppressing his strength, which is very, very, very disgusting for most readers. In many fighting scenes, you can easily crush the character and then show off, but you don't, so you have to fight with someone who is very good at it, and they are in the same realm. Both are weak, but the latter is already weak, and you strengthen him to make him even more disgusting. You must change this disgusting habit. If you hadn't been open-minded and teachable, I believe that most readers would not be interested in you at all.

The author is a pure newbie. To be honest, I am actually quite surprised by this result, so I would like to thank everyone who reads the book, especially those who support me. Because I am a newbie, the writing style is naturally not very good, and the plot was also a bit toxic in the early stages. However, after seeing everyone's suggestions, I slowly made corrections and improved later on. In addition, this book will definitely be written until it is put on the shelves or even after it is put on the shelves. If the results are good, I will work hard to update it. I hope you will read more and if possible, make an initial subscription. After all, it only costs a dime.

What name is not easy to use? It is not a joke. Low-level jokes really affect the interest of reading.

Do not use Han Li to develop the sect, no longer cultivate a Yuanying monk, and most importantly, use the store to seduce Xiang Zhili. Even if you get to Yuan Dynasty, Xiang Zhili will not dare to fight you. He is afraid of death.

The setting of this novel is very good, why should I change it? I don't like the bottom layer being upgraded little by little. I have read too many of these books as a 10-year-old bookworm. Now I have basically lost interest in reading Qidian novels. I just skipped them to read. Many novels have good settings, but it is a pity that they are unfinished or have too many eunuchs at the end.

How rubbish are you? You have the spiritual consciousness of the Queen of Yuan Dynasty, and you also work part-time as a physical practitioner? Are you also Yuan Zhong? Is there a Yuanzhong helper? You are such a piece of rubbish if you can't win a Nascent Soul in the early stage.

There are a lot of interesting points, but also a lot of poisonous points. But what worries me the most is, why do you have to wait for Han Li for everything? Do you have to wait for Han Li to enter the Xutian Palace before following him? From the middle stage of Yuanying to the middle stage of Yuanying in hundreds of years? Just to mess with the original work?

Do you know why there are so many fanfics about Mortals Cultivating Immortality? It's because anime is popular. If you don't eat the traffic password, who will see if it goes to the spiritual world?

I don't understand why so many novel writers want to live forever after traveling through time. Who have been pursuing immortality throughout the ages? Can ordinary people have the same pursuits as them? Just like Jack Ma who dislikes money and has no interest in money, and Liu Qiangdong who is face-blind, of course they will not pursue things they already own. You see, they were not pursuing things they are not interested in now a few decades ago. . This book pursues immortality from the very beginning, and as an ordinary person, it is completely incomprehensible.

It's a very good book. I like the setting and the plot arrangement. I can obviously continue to write a good follow-up. If I have to start a new book immediately, it will not only ruin the character, but it will also be difficult for the new book to attract too many old customers. If there is one eunuch, there will be two.

It's really incredible, the mortals are almost wiped out. Now Ancestor Linghu has to travel across the heavens to live an ignoble existence.

I think the eunuch doesn't go far and the plot isn't exciting enough. Mortal Cultivation of Immortality is about resources first and skills and magic weapons second. The third is that men all know what needs are. This is the joy of immortality

First of all, there is a clear bug in the original work. In the early stage, it was said that one could enter, but later it was said that one could not enter. In the end, Han Li and others were able to enter again. Secondly, regarding the ancient monks, it was impossible not to allow the Yuanhou monks to enter when they first built it. After all, it was completely unnecessary. Xutian Temple is a place where demons are sealed. Even if the ancient monks leave, it is impossible for the human world to quickly become lonely. It is absolutely impossible for the monks of the Yuan Dynasty to be so difficult. Even the star palace has god-changing monks, so there is no reason why the empress Yuan cannot enter. Then you can take a look at the screenshot below, which tells whether the great monk can enter in the later stage.

At the beginning of the game, Nascent Soul was separated from the wall, which made Han Paopao envious...

Mortal world view: When the world first opened, there were only various true spirits born from chaos. Because their bodies contained rich chaos origins (true spirit origins), they were allowed by the great path, had no catastrophes, and had a long lifespan, generally about a million years. Various true spirits reproduced and gave birth to many hybrid ancient beasts and mortal beasts. Ancient beasts and mortal beasts cultivated and monster beasts were born. After hundreds of millions of years of evolution, the human race was born. In order to pursue immortality, the first batch of humans began to explore and practice and developed a system of cultivation to become immortals: Qi training, foundation building, elixir formation, Nascent Soul transformation, spiritual training, integration, Mahayana and immortality. Those who succeeded later surpassed all kinds of true spirits of heaven and earth, and then continued to explore new realms on the basis of becoming immortals: true immortals, golden immortals, Taiyi, Daluo, and Taozu. Later, in order to create a habitat for human beings to cultivate immortality and to cultivate immortality faster, they began to massacre various ancient beasts and true spirits to speed up immortality cultivation. In order to avoid annihilation, various tribes were forced to study and imitate the human race's immortality system, and came up with the most important link (turning into human form, you can practice according to the human race's immortality system more quickly; if you want to become an immortal, you must break the pill and become an infant like the human race). Some demonic beasts, ancient beasts and true spirits used this to become Taoist ancestors, preserving part of their blood for the beasts. However, at this time, the human race completely occupied a dominant position with its powerful reproduction and immortality abilities, and then developed and colonized various subordinate interfaces to collect resources. The beasts could only be forced to survive in the undeveloped areas of the human race (barbaric lands). Therefore, all the interfaces under the Immortal World are basically human-based, with the exception of one interface group - the Xiaonanzhou Group. Due to the civil war in the fairy world, this interface was separated from the control of the fairy world for millions of years. Because the human race was relatively vulnerable to various monsters before becoming immortals, the group in the Xiaonanzhou realm was almost extinct. Seeing the plight of the human race, an immortal who was knocked down from the mortal world by accident set up a super formation in the most remote corner of the spiritual world, protected the remaining human race and his own spiritual pet clan (named the demon clan), and left behind the Golden Palace and Jade Book. The human and demon tribes had a place to live, and began to develop and colonize their own subordinate interfaces to collect resources. Therefore, our protagonist-Han Li was born.

Regarding the timeline, there will be a transition of dozens of chapters, and Han Tianzun will not appear until later. It is at that time that the real "climax" of this article is reached. Because I am a new author, my writing is not very good, and my plot control ability is far inferior to that of my predecessors, but I will try my best to complete the writing of this book. Of course there will definitely be things that are not done well, so this post exists. In addition, thank you all for following up and voting. This is really important to me. If you have time, please be sure to follow up on the daily updates. Thank you.

Personally, I feel that the calculation of lifespan in mortals is incorrect, because the lifespan you have already lived is the previous one, and has nothing to do with the lifespan you will get in the future. There is no superposition. If you have already lived a hundred years, and your lifespan has been increased by 500 years after taking the pill, then in addition to the 100 years you have already lived, you can still live the 500 years added by taking the pill.

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After reading your acceptance speech, I personally feel that you don't need to care about other people's opinions. Write what you want to write. It will be hard to agree with others. If you care too much, what you write will be unreadable.

The pace is so fast, I feel like 600,000 words is enough to ascend to the fairy world 😰

Should the author first try to settle down the content of this book and continue writing? There are still many ways to write in the spiritual world, such as combining Mahayana to other continents, and copies of Ma Liang, True Spirit, etc. Rushing to finish the book is not the best option. When planning your new book, you can spend more time thinking about the details of the content, the protagonist positioning of the Golden Finger opening, etc. How many years has it been since Mortal was finished, and it is not a good choice to write a mortal fanfic. Many books start with the protagonist Qixuanmen, the same old route, starting from the Qi training period. The appeal is really not strong enough, and there is no unique style. It is not exciting enough, not invincible enough, and it is too weak. No one likes to read this part.

Does anyone want to read the story of Lei Yunzi? I recommend the book "Mortals Cultivation to Immortality: Lei Yunzi Step by Step to Immortality". The old boy in Han Li's mouth, the story of Lei Yunzi starting from the spiritual world and ascending to the immortal world. Lei Yunzi: "This old boy Han Li ascended to the immortal world, can't he leave me nothing?"

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For example, you can comment on the exercises, tricks, magic weapons, and adventures, and the author will adopt them as appropriate.

The author's writing is very good. Everyone is welcome to read "Mortal Demon Eats the Sky"