Red Mist Agent

At the beginning, it was said that everyone was in danger and didn't care about the passing of life. But now everyone is obviously impulsive and irritable. Regardless of their identity, all NPCs talk like brainless light novel diodes. There is only one character label left in character creation. No matter whether the situation is appropriate or not, they stick to this label to speak. The plot setting of this work is quite novel, and the suspenseful part is quite exciting. Unfortunately, the writing style is too dramatic. I jumped from a supernatural horror novel to an urban dragon Aotian. It is really inconsistent with the atmosphere that the author is trying to create. Come on, author.

This kind of novel doesn't have a female protagonist to drive the plot, and it's easy to get tired and abandon the book in the middle and later stages. This is basically the case after reading it.

Su Geng, it is recommended to have a meal once every meal 😄

The setting is nice, but the author's writing style is really immature and full of poisonous points.

When you should be nervous, you are very relaxed. When you should explain the situation concisely and comprehensively, you talk nonsense. When life and death are in danger, your words and actions are like flirting. The characters' speech and behavior are very inconsistent with the plot situations. When reading, you will mistakenly feel that the characters in the play are playing a scripted killing game and know that nothing will happen to them.

As soon as the supporting characters appeared in the first three chapters and they were all women, I knew they were 💩

I can't understand it, it's a mess, and the main character is a psychopath. The theme is somewhat similar to Red Moon, but the protagonist is not in the same state as the protagonist of Red Moon, he is in a very psychotic state. All in all, it doesn't suit me very well. It depends on personal feeling.

The introduction says that there is no female protagonist, and then at the beginning of his meow, there are two women who will be the protagonists in the future. It is outrageous. If there is no female protagonist, why don't we have fewer female protagonists (; 1_1), you can just say that the protagonist is a eunuch, you can't have female protagonists, no matter how many women there are, I don't have any problem with it.

These various settings are quite good, such as the protagonist's parents, 999 opportunities, and agents. However, I wish the plot was richer, because it felt like each plot ended quickly and was not full enough. The dialogue feels a bit awkward, I wish it was more logical. This girl Su, please don't be the heroine, it's too outrageous. (The above are purely personal thoughts)

By the way, I clearly said at the beginning not to fall in love with others, so how could a profession like celebrities that sells emotional value be allowed to exist?

The world view is grand, with reasoning plot and exciting

The writing is still very good, the logic and ethics are very clear, I hope it won't cause the eunuch's appendix

The setting is good, but there are a lot of flaws in the logic.

First, express your attitude. After voting for the recommendation, you can see that the author is quite serious and his attitude deserves recognition. At present, it seems that the story has a relatively complete framework and system, which is worthy of recognition. But there are definitely shortcomings. Logic is a problem that runs throughout, including the logic of character actions, the logic of plot advancement, etc. The plot is simply far-fetched. This is a problem in the connection between the outline and the copy. There is a good outline, but the author fails to smoothly connect the nodes in the outline, which leads to a somewhat stiff connection between the copy and the copy. In addition, the logic and motivations of the characters' actions are a bit unclear, and the characters' facial makeup is a bit serious. This is not a flaw, but the impression is very poor. It can only be said that it is caused by the author's insufficient writing skills, which requires more internalization and accumulation. Then there are more detailed issues, dialogue, character, etc. This is the difference between old authors and new authors. In fact, many old authors use the same thing for several books, but if they use it well, the impression will be very good. I have said a lot of criticism, but I still recognize the author's attitude and enthusiasm. If it is published, I will continue to support it. I hope the author can continue to improve his writing skills and give everyone better articles.

Why does the male protagonist have to sign an employment relationship with the police station? In the previous article, he hid from the official because of his parents. Not to mention investigating the case of his parents. I remember you said in the previous article that the male protagonist accepted Zhang Cheng's cooperation task on his mobile phone. This also means that Zhang Cheng has the obligation to share the relevant case information. This is not to set up the male protagonist and then slap him to death in full view of the public...

Danger has come, but the protagonist is still thinking wildly and getting distracted.

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Why does Qidian always recommend eunuch books and clothes to me?