Trapped in the Tomb-Raiding World, I Join Partridge Whistle at Bottle Mountain

Write the world of Ghost Blowing Lantern as a real parallel world. It would be boring if it were written as a fake game world.

Generally speaking, this Faqiu Zhonglang will not feel that there is anything special. It is better than Guanshan Taibao who can write some witchcraft and turn it into a witchcraft article. Wizards who travel in the mountains and still have witchcraft left behind can learn it, or the Taoist Taoist who moves the mountains can turn his skills of life and defeat into articles about raising pets. Insect swarms and other things, follow the route of Gu magic. Xie Ling can also write a group portrait article to develop his power. Mojin Xiaowei is good at finding dragons and divining acupoints. It is difficult to write about Feng Shui, because Feng Shui is not as fast as the ancient fortune tellers' articles. Just looking for dragons and divining acupoints feels boring.

After reading Chapter 16, what can I say, it feels very awkward and inconsistent. First, let's locate the world background style. First of all, let me say that I have never read the original work. I have watched both movies and TV series. I don't know if there is a big difference. As far as my inherent impression is concerned, tomb robbery novels belong to a combination of [low martial arts] ➕ [low mystery] ➕ [fantasy creatures]. His expressiveness is not too fantasy. There is no such level of force value as Zhang Feng Ruishi. Although I have not read the original work, I have read more than a dozen fan novels. The world settings are similar. The difference is that each protagonist's golden finger is different and the intensity is different. However, the enhancement process is also very clear and will not cause controversy. What can I say about this book? The game starts out in a game world, but there is too little description of the game content in the follow-up style. Instead, it feels like traveling through the real world. Except for one panel for the protagonist, there is almost nothing else related to the game. It does not matter if the world is more realistic. You must at least show the protagonist more extraordinary (hanging) to enhance your persuasion. As a result, in the description of the protagonist, there is almost no "game" style. This creates a collision of painting styles that is seriously abrupt. For example, the protagonist's combat power is 50 for a normal person and 70 or 80 for the protagonist. In fact, the strength is not much, but he is like a god of war! There are also skills, such as reaching the sky with the sky, the roar of the palm, and the shattering of organs. If you look at it according to the world view of low martial arts, his style of painting is wrong. If you want to say that he is so strong because of [game skills], it is reasonable. But the author did not clearly say: "This is my game skill, I am so good at it!" It is all up to the readers to make up their own minds, but some people do not agree, which leads to controversy. So overall, the style of painting is not a game, it is 'real' but not real! To be honest, fans who strictly adhere to the original work have read too much, and it is no longer interesting. If you directly come to the game world, I will find it more interesting. Of course, this game world is not about the whole world, but about the protagonist's own concerns, gamifying the world in his eyes.

You don't dare to write, you can't write, it's not easy to write, so you just skip it?

Every time I take action, I have to shout, "The cannon can reach the sky from the ground." It's really embarrassing.

I don't dare to follow this book. It gives me the feeling that it will be unfinished after one hundred to two hundred chapters (if the results are not good, it will only be a few to dozens of chapters). Just like those Dragon Clan fans, after going through the plot in the early stage, they stopped writing and cut the next book after a wave of bad money. The plot is brainless and cool, and the writing is not that novice. It was okay at first, but the more you watch, the less interesting it becomes.

Don't talk about anything else, just an introduction. You only write four of the five professions. Are you insulting the reader's intelligence?

It's very exaggerated, it's hard and cool, it's awkward

Good guy, you're such a great serving player, you've exaggerated.

I blew it so hard, it looked so embarrassing