Zongwang: as a Shaman, I Want to Convince People with Virtue

The first person is not very good, and Zongwang reminds you that you should also pay attention to the punctuation marks in character dialogue, which can improve the reading experience.

The author feels that the China Open you wrote is very different from the one written by Baldhead.                                                                       There is no plot to write in a fake dungeon. In the early stage, you can focus on improving your strength, and in the middle and later stages, you can focus on writing the plot in the real world. There is no need to start writing so many plots in the first dungeon. There's nothing exciting about it, and you don't need to write about so many trivial things in the real world. Which ordinary person would bother with those trivial matters if they have extraordinary opportunities? The inspiration you have for writing these copies at the beginning might as well be saved for writing more exciting stories in the middle and later stages.

Unify the first-person and third-person pronouns of the protagonist

No wonder the popularity is not high, what kind of system wizard is there 😒😒 What the hell is it doing to revive spiritual energy and make everyone extraordinary 😒😒 A Western copy written by the Eastern department 😒😒

Wu Zhu is not a witch. Wu Zhu's profession is to sacrifice, and Wu is the earliest god. Wu Zhu can be understood as the current temple blessing. Their skills mainly invite gods to offer sacrifices. In ancient countries, there were only two major events: sacrifice and war. Wu Zhu is still very impressive, but to be honest, Wu Zhu still needs to be advanced, otherwise there will be no reputation in the comprehensive network. Above the Wu Zhu is the land, and above it is the mountain god, the county god, the city god, the city god, and the city god.

It's not easy to write "The One Who Hurts Autumn" well.

If possible, fix the skill cost and don't use a fluctuating range value. I saw Chapter 4, the protagonist's own spirit is 8 + the sacrifice to the great commander is 2, a total of 10 points. The protagonist first used Tai She 3, and then sent three wild deeds to the wolf. In the third chapter, I spent 2 points to summon the wolf. Here I subconsciously brought in the wolf, which is 6 points, so I spent 9 points directly. Then the protagonist used Inspire 3, which directly exceeded 2 points of spirit. Then I thought the wild deed might be 1 point per head. To be honest, if it doesn't work, you can also write down the amount consumed.

The actual look and feel is average, neither better nor worse.

Are there any novels about witches like the ancient "Song of Witches"?

Character template, name; gender; age; general appearance and personality; occupation; talent; background; special points; remarks

Can the author clarify first person and third person?

Career ideas come from this. Welcome to discuss

The protagonist's name is very similar to mine, Li Xing (xin) Miao😂😂😂

Come on, I suggest the protagonist be in the first person. Is he from the Chu Kingdom?