Becoming a Weapon Master, Starting as a Witcher

The writing is okay, but I suggest you don't overwhelm the protagonist. Just feel good if you want to feel good. Don't let the protagonist be awesome but unhappy at the same time. This will make readers feel uncomfortable. Obviously the protagonist looks very awesome and his skill level goes up, but in the end, the mirror master curses to reduce the gas. Luck, the Elf Charm was controlled for fifteen seconds, and when it came to the Bloody Baron, it was still difficult for the Chosen One guarding the gate. Although it was solved, it would make people feel that the protagonist is obviously very good, but all kinds of little Karami can step on it. If Su Xiaoquan was killed

I think the author can revise the introduction. It is obviously a fan novel of The Witcher 3, but the introduction does not show any relationship with the original game. It is a bit baffling and mystical. I think some readers clicked here because they like witchers, but they were persuaded to leave after seeing your introduction.

The writing is good, but the protagonist is too biased and unhappy, and has the latest talent. The negative state is too serious. The protagonist had better make up his mind as soon as possible and find reasons to overcome the shortcomings of his growth.

It feels strange to have a sudden change in temperament. It is understandable to be hard-hearted, but it is not right for the protagonist not to realize that he has a problem. It would be better to use skills to disguise himself as his original self after discovering that there is a problem.

In the plot of Plague Banshee, why does the main character suddenly lose his emotions and change into a bear school? I can't figure it out. Do you have to change the protagonist's character to turn him into a bastard?

Personally, I feel that the tone of this book took a sharp turn from the beginning of the promotion. The protagonist suddenly changed. He was a little uncomfortable and wanted to keep it. Wait and see if the protagonist will change back later 😥

Ever since I learned that a witcher was killed by a pitchfork, I knew that the witcher was a weakling. I don't know why some people still say that the witcher is strong. Let me talk about the fighting style of the weakling witcher. After the trial of green grass, the poison resistance point is raised, and they drink various highly stimulant drugs (the poison is too much for ordinary people to drink). Apply poison (sword oil or something) before starting to fight monsters. When you meet a farmer with a pitchfork, you don't dare to fart. Otherwise, you don't dare to retaliate no matter how much he is scolded. You can brag no matter what you say. Even the peasants who are not poisoned can't beat them. Why would anyone have the nerve to brag about it? Demon hunters, haha, even if the people from the west brag about it themselves, you will also start making noises.

The writing is good, at least I can read it smoothly, but the character of the protagonist and some subplots are not handled well.

My family couldn't stand it any longer. I clicked on the website today and saw that only 500 book friends had clicked on it. 😭 I just thought: is there something wrong with the title of the book? There must be many other things that I haven't noticed. If you have any suggestions, you are welcome to teach me. If there are any areas that I am not satisfied with, I will find ways to improve them. ✊

Are you lucky enough to be hated by the true god at the beginning? The author is a disgusting reader🤢