You Promised to Only Create Dharma, How Come You Became the Taoist Ancestor?

It's very similar to Lin Yuan's "The Enlightenment of the Heavens". Of course, the author has said it before and borrowed it from it. I hope the plot content is different, otherwise I will only read the free chapters and stop reading after reading it. Because if it is similar, then it is better to continue reading that book. Although that book is very bad, at least it has a lot of updated words, so I look forward to a different ending. But don't, don't, borrowing from enlightenment and preaching in the first part, and other novels with incredible enlightenment in the later part, it will be like a hodgepodge of several books, that will be even more annoying.

??? Isn't this your own problem? Just a little bit a day, enough for who to watch? Stop talking nonsense, the faster the speed, the chasing rate will increase!

The proposed change in the shaping of the protagonist in these two pages may be caused by the family forcing him to join the army, but compared with similar works, this kind of character is inherently inferior! The protagonist is portrayed in this way, giving people a feeling of selfishness and pettiness. From the perspective of perception, a Taoist with three styles is not lovable. You must know that preaching is a great point, but as a result, when it is written like this, there is a feeling of reluctance! It's okay if you haven't read similar articles, but once you have read similar articles, the difference shouldn't be too obvious! There are also internal fights within the family and the forced joining of the army. It always feels like a family fight in a female video 😅! In the book with incredible understanding, the protagonist's pressure comes from outside, the school, and the school and the government compensate the protagonist's family members! And this family gives people the impression that they adopted the protagonist just to protect their family from disasters. The family members all have a fussy, petty attitude inside and out!

It's okay, as long as you can face up to your mistakes in writing, that's good enough. Think of this book as a practice. Based on the size of the reading, you can see which chapters have the biggest problems and learn lessons. Try to write an outline for a new book first. It is very difficult to write a book without an outline. Then in your free time, you can read more books of the same type that you want to write. Look for works by novices, veteran authors, and great authors. Take a look at the differences between different authors in the same type of novels, learn from experience, and appropriately bubble up in the author group and reader group. Ask for advice. There are still some big guys in these groups who are willing to help newbies.

If you can't continue writing, stop writing. Take the time to think about new books. Your writing attitude is very good, unlike a certain father-in-law Xu who just disappears when he wants to cut it, without even saying a word to the readers.

Before and after Chapter 29, why do you still need to accept the invitation, miscellaneous, and need to explain things that you have given up long ago? After leaving home, I also need to describe the reactions of family members. Why do I have to pretend to make them regret it? I don't understand it. According to normal people's logic, the original owner will be criticized for his behavior as the protagonist. The two parties you created in this way are stingy. It is obviously a normal separation, but they have to cross their arms. This could have been downplayed, but it is disgusting. The mentality of the protagonist is very nondescript. If you continue to break up, you will be subject to chaos, which is around chapter 29. What we are watching is the plot of time travel. Why are there so many realistic descriptions in the early stage? What we are watching is a double vision, not a family dispute.

Is that okay? Author, the mules in the production team don't dare to take a break.

Update soon! It's so well written and suits my taste very well.

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