My Steve Was Mistaken for a Demon God

The last sentence of the introduction, "I don't eat beef," expresses the central idea of ​​the book.

It's okay. I just want to end this subspace explosion plot as soon as possible, sort out the social background and so on, and don't go straight to the big plot from the beginning.

The perspective is too confusing. The protagonist is not very big in this novel, and the perspective is messy. There are five or six main perspectives in this novel. It's really confusing.

The writing is very messy, and the writing doesn't seem to be about any of the protagonists, but is trying to describe a fantasy world. Does the author want to write about the protagonist's experience, or does he want to write a collection of fantasy world stories? But like I said, it doesn't look like a novel, but a collection of scattered stories.

It's so confusing that it feels like jumping through the pages.

It is written like a group portrait, each picture is not good, only two or three pictures are written for big things, and there is no connection between each event. What is the protagonist doing in the last second, and the next second switches to the perspective of the supporting character to describe the world view. It reads like opening a dozen novels, and then stitching the first three chapters of each novel together. It is very fragmented.

I insisted on reading Chapter 33. I felt dizzy while reading. I didn't understand the main idea or where the protagonist was. My perspective kept changing. @_@

The writing is too messy, with a hammer here and a stick here and there. Can you read it yourself?

Is this a group portrait? Why does the protagonist have no sense of existence?

Don't be too fragmented when writing a novel. It's so laborious and hypnotic to watch.