My Attractions Lead to Journey to the West

The subject matter is a good one. It's a pity that the author is not good enough. The parts started to fall apart near the time it was put on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, I couldn't read a bit.

Do you understand?

In fact, I have read a lot of myths about Journey to the West and Prehistoric Times. How can I say that the world has never had the way of heaven, luck, or system. Is it possible that these things only appeared after the ancestor Hongjun? Is it possible that the world is nothingness? Is it possible that innate things are themselves a concept, just like the code has the first code, and then there are countless operations that form the basis of the world, and ancestor Hongjun is this operator. Innate was still a form at the beginning, it was a concept, but as time passed by and supplemented, the concept of it also continued to improve and evolve, from a solid state to a basic code, from tangible to intangible.

The protagonist obtained the origin of the great sage, practiced the great celestial arts, and then went to find a place to learn Chinese martial arts.

The writing is okay, but the setting is flawed. A bunch of great supernatural powers who started out as golden immortals and are the most quasi-sage were actually fooled by a mortal with a set of props worth tens of thousands and hundreds of thousands. If the rhetoric were changed and a few more reasonable patches were added, the rationality would be much better than it is now!

Immortal Zhenyuan can't even see the difference between the protagonist and Sun Wukong

The essence of this book is that except for the protagonist, all the immortals, Buddhas and gods are fools, and the key point is that they are also a lot of poison. At the beginning, the semi-saint-like existence of the ancestor of the Earthly Immortal was written as mentally retarded. Later, the settings were added and it was said that Sun Wukong helped cover it up. OK, no problem, we don't care why Sun Wukong is so awesome. Immediately afterwards, let the six-eared macaque become the clone of Sun Wukong, OK, no problem, we don't care about the order. Then I changed the settings of the Pathless Land and gave Sun Wukong a special privilege to be able to use magic. OK, no problem. But when you know that Sun Wukong or the six-eared macaque can use magic, you run to play truth or dare with others? 🧠If it's broken, send it up yourself? Every truth you say is not just all kinds of bullshit, but you also look arrogant. Whether it is Sun Wukong or the six-eared macaque, they are all god-like templates, asking you to act like a monkey? Or maybe I plan to make two more settings later to make up for it...

The work is of high quality and above, and the storyline is reasonable and interesting. Even if there are some unreasonable parts, it is a setting problem.

The front and back were not written by one person or a group of people. The big difference can be seen at a glance, and the original shape was revealed before it was released to the public.

I resisted in the first two hundred chapters, after all, the idea was good, but when I saw the protagonist still had his parents and sister, he finally got poisoned and died; in the first two hundred chapters, his family did not appear once. With a close network of family members and relatives, an ordinary person has extraordinary power. When he first made a huge sum of money, he did not think about improving the family environment. It's so disgusting. There's beef on top, but when you eat it, you find a pile at the bottom of the bowl💩.

The writing is okay, but the protagonist's intelligence and clear eyes are really unbearable.

Shi, I hate the Fengshen worldview and conspiracy theories the most, and the writing style is also mediocre, and it's a complete novice.

From the initial surprise to Solan's tastelessness later on, it all shows that this book is a failure. The protagonist came into contact with Zhen Yuanzi, Qingfeng Mingyue, the innate earth god, and Sun Wukong who was trapped under the Wuzhi Mountain through the land of no law, and then obtained the ginseng fruit, the innate earth god, and the top skills. It's obviously such a great start... But what the protagonist did on Blue Star's side is simply speechless. Originally, the main focus should be on expanding the scope of the Lawless Land, but as a result, the author did not distinguish between priorities. He just briefly touched on the Lawless Land, focusing on describing the protagonist practicing his reflexes at the Blue Star training ground. Because of the supernatural powers brought about by the protagonist's sublimation, he was remembered by others. When trouble was caused, the protagonist came to solve it, and then he was frightened by the sniper rifle and ran away.

Another conspiracy theory about Journey to the West...

It is not recommended for old bookworms. The first three chapters of Zhen Yuanzi's meeting with the protagonist are astonishing and surprising again. Deng Deng Deng stepped back in fear! Zhen Yuanzi and Yuanshi Tianzun, who were friends with each other as equals, have such qualities and character in his writings!

Just like the Wu Song novel, it insists on writing about modern times, and the whole story is nondescript, and even has a touch of urban writing from ten years ago, otherwise the results would be much better...

There are a lot of comments in the comment area, and the work is obviously average, and the downward trend is already obvious. He actually kept saying that the ghost was good, and even more so, he directly said the words of a masterpiece. 😅

I really can't read the next ten chapters, they're too silly and cliche... Especially the two women who took the exam were speechless.

Is it good for the protagonist that the attraction is popular? It seems to have only disadvantages! What are the benefits of the protagonist being so eye-catching? From the current point of view, the scenic spots are rented and not private places. Fortunately, there are fewer people and there are more people. It is not a matter of a word for people to take back the scenic spots.

So forcibly creating conflict can easily stop people. You didn't even say you felt like you were reborn after eating it. You think you are still pretending. Being serious about acting is not a self-conscious act. After eating the fruit, your whole body feels refreshed. Doesn't it mean that you lack a clear mind? Gods react to eating ginseng fruit, but mortals are even more sensitive, and their brains think others are tourists (forced plot). This is not a fruit, just like being high, the brain is hallucinogenic That's right, ginseng fruit only talks about extending life, not wisdom.

The writing is very good, the mentally retarded protagonist is really mentally retarded.

A very interesting book, I hope the author will continue to work hard to update it!

It was well written before, but I started to poison it from chapters 57 and 58.

Are you locked up? Could it be that I didn't write it on purpose?