Naruto: A Life of Pursuit Starting in Konoha

Don't be fooled by the fact that his Perfect Sage Mode level is still Jonin-level. The key point is that he was already a Jonin to begin with, meaning Perfect Sage Mode didn't bring any improvement; he's just a complete waste.

I have to complain, author, you're a ninja, can't you even do a transformation jutsu? Transforming into a woman would be less likely to be noticed by Jiraiya than stuffing two balloons in your form. This author is truly something else.

Why is the protagonist of this story constantly talking about Jiraiya-sama?

The character development is too petty. Jiraiya actually tried to escape after only ten days of detention, and the Third Hokage even came to the prison to put pressure on the protagonist over such a trivial matter. Furthermore, the plot design where the protagonist threatens and captures Jiraiya by endangering the safety of civilians is also quite weak.

The protagonist lacks intelligence. I don't know if it's the author who lacks intelligence or what? If you don't have the ability, just stay put. What is there? You don't have the ability to try and take advantage of Jiraiya. Even if you wanted to, call the security forces. Besides, you're too young; you're not even old enough to be in office. Your actions are like those of an idiot.

It's somewhat like something written in AI. It's purely based on the thesis defense.

After careful review, I can see that the design does have its merits, including the prison system and the conflict sequences. However, I have to criticize two issues. First, the lack of imagination is baffling. A ninja, let alone a Jonin, is physically dressed as a woman instead of using a transformation jutsu? You're even worse than a 10-year-old Naruto. Second, the writing is visibly weak, making the descriptions and expressions quite awkward to read.

This book should be called: Even as a superhero, I still have to care about what ordinary people think and not become Homelander.

Konoha is a village, a village with extraordinary abilities, but with that ridiculous system in Naruto, it has no legal system whatsoever. People steal top-secret village documents all the time, break into the village chief's office all the time, and occasionally, on a whim, they'll try to assassinate the village chief… Looking at the entire Naruto series, there's not a single deputy position.

No wonder it's a daily poison delivery service, ugh~