Naruto: It Begins with Meeting Kaguya Otsutsuki
木叶：从遇见大筒木辉夜开始
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- Light Novel
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- ACG Fanfiction
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Speaking of Naruto, there are two notorious filial sons: Hagoromo, the Sage of Six Paths, and Itachi Uchiha, the weasel-like villain. One killed his brother and mother; if Kaguya hadn't been immortal, he would have definitely achieved the feat of matricide. Even if he hadn't succeeded, he was imprisoned for a thousand years, only briefly allowed some rest before being locked up again.
Let's just kill Jiraiya and Naruto directly; they're too much of a hindrance, and we can even wipe out Konoha. Since they're with Kaguya, let's recycle their chakra, develop technology and natural energy—an excellent choice. And if we sleep with Kaguya, even better.
Ever since the male protagonist tested Kaguya, the viewing experience has deteriorated significantly. He's become greasy and his childish antics remind me of Momonosuke from One Piece.
The protagonist of this book is a genuine alternate version of Kaguya, not the kind of character who is possessed by Kaguya and then suppresses her.
In summary: The male protagonist is Kaguya's Teletubbies.
If you do it this way, nobody will read it anymore. What's the point of focusing on the supporting characters instead of the main characters? There are plenty of other novels that don't need your writing.
After reading 120 chapters, to be honest, I was completely baffled. Does this book even need a protagonist like you?
It's quite bizarre, to say the least. The protagonist's personality and interactions with Kaguya are described too little, while the other characters' storylines are too extensive, making it impossible for me to empathize with the protagonist. Kaguya's emotions are somewhat traceable, but the protagonist's emotions seem more like Stockholm syndrome or a pretense due to pressure from Kaguya.
This is ridiculously bad. The Ash Bones can't instantly kill the Raikage? You're kidding me! Even Obito with Six Paths power would die! I'm out.
When Wuying discovered that the protagonist had a white eye and wasn't a caged bird, why didn't she just take him down instead of treating him?