It's so Hard to Be Born

The subject matter is good, but the plot is too outrageous. It's understandable that the protagonist is talking to himself and thinking, but the protagonist is doing sit-ups and doing exercises in his stomach. It's so outrageous that I can't stand it anymore.

Is it okay to do sit-ups and push-ups on the belly? To the point where I can't even see where my mind is at.

This introduction? The newly born Dongxi shatters the darkness

The imagination is okay, the plot is rubbish, and even though he has spiritual thoughts, he can't speak. His mother is also a bitch

Is Pigfoot a fucking fool? This performance is a bit beyond the normal range of IQ, right?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​OUT As a result, you stopped updating the two at noon.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             ,  I love your book, but I'm not Wang Sicong, and I can't afford to be a big boss running the entire server. If it doesn't work, you can arrange for the protagonist to be reincarnated, and the system will take the protagonist with him and start a new one. It's just a woman's belly, but the plot is still there, and you will have new books to recommend.

The previous plot with the main character's mother being abstract is still interesting, and some flaws can be ignored. After it went on the shelves, it was just a pure novice novel. The writing was not strong enough and it looked uncomfortable. The plot was too deliberate.

The heroine next to the classic male protagonist is innocent, silly and sweet. She not only hopes that the evil spirit will change for the better, but also does all sorts of stupid things to create various "fatal incidents" for the protagonist to advance the story, right? There are also punches in the stomach, not only the male protagonist is awesome, but the female protagonist's belly is also not simple. Recently, there have been more and more themes of this kind of templates. Since the infancy of the system, various tasks have been given to the protagonist to train and unlock buffs. Do you use it without any modification? It was changed to start from the fetus, and the task format remained the same. For a moment, I wondered if the author was an AI.

After taking a look at this catalog, my scalp feels numb. Did you know that there is a large-scale drama documentary called "Dragon King's Palace" staged in the pregnant belly?

The plot is okay, but the writing and handling of plot details are terrible.

Invincible all the way before he was born. . I have no desire to watch the following plot anymore

There were too many poison points in the early stage, but it got much better in BenleiFist, and now we are on the right track.

As long as you stop your efforts, you will become a master immediately

The problem is too big. It seems like something is missing in many places. For example, in Tuomeng, even Wu Wenbin didn't write anything when he saw it. Another example is that there is clearly a dialogue between the protagonist and her mother, but it is not written? What's the difference between weird and weird? Why do we say weirdness needs to follow rules? There are no rules written at all?

A talented player just didn't write it well at the beginning, but his destiny was changed. What a good author. There are as many hard-working authors as dogs, and they are everywhere. The gifted type is blessed by God. The result was tragic.