Survival: Age of Chaos

. . . . If you can't develop well by yourself, you have to arrange for a woman

It's too fast, the plot develops too fast, and you know the secrets of the world before you have figured out anything. What will happen next? Will it be the same fantasy development as the previous book?

......... Too difficult

Brother, are you so casual about writing a book?

Why does the fox come out and purr every time the protagonist finishes something? The more you look at it, the more it looks like a beast-controlling style.

Why do survival stories have to have a heroine? It's really baffling. The author doesn't read comments. If you have to write this kind of subtraction, the genre of survival stories is not suitable for having a heroine. The most attractive thing about survival stories is that the protagonist develops his own power, collects various resources, solves various mysteries, explores and survives, and thinks about love and love in a place where he can die at any time. Isn't the heroine just a pure drag?

Came from the treehouse. Vote for a monthly ticket😁

Just write according to your own ideas. Just read the comments. It will be difficult to finish writing after reading too many negative comments. Come on

To sum up: it will fly in the early stage. Too many pets scheduled. Everyone is a good person. The enemy's combat effectiveness is too low. Recommendation to the author: Don't rush to update yet! ! ! 1. Play Terraria, Don't Starve, Fallout 4, Borderlands 1, Resident Evil 6, Far Cry - New Dawn. 2. Combat: Don't arrange too many unpredictable things, such as giant dragonflies, little whites, etc., Because you don't know if you can grasp them, and you haven't written clearly what kind of pets they are? Battle pet? Food? Transportation? Can we understand their origins and uses? Do they have to be conquered and used, or can they be eaten? Without the intake of fat and sugar a person would die quickly. Don't be unable to walk when you see a woman. Everyone doesn't like dog licking. There is no law to kill her. Don't try to conquer all monsters. It's more fun to take risks and kill monsters to get the treasure. Bringing a bunch of monsters to fight monsters is an abnormal development. There are too few benefits for other people. You alone account for 99% of the benefits. Only your team has pets. Only you have better things. Others can be eliminated directly. Wouldn't it be better for you to survive alone. 3. Team: If there are too many people, it is not survival, but confrontation. There are too few types of monsters and too few monster attributes, which are unclear and boring to everyone. Since there is a system, it is better to use entries to mark the attributes and skill levels of the monsters. Instead of marking directly, those that have not been encountered will not be marked, the mark levels and danger levels encountered, and those killed will be marked with all attributes, skills, etc., Just like the monster illustration in the game. The benefits and risks during the journey are not proportional. There are too few places where you can take risks. For example, the dinosaur hatchery should be like a dungeon instead of a place where you can get the benefits alone. All the benefits are taken by you alone and in a team. What is the point of survival? 4. Brainstorming: Too little. Since it is prehistory, anything can appear. Why is it limited to things that have appeared before? Can't it be your imagination? Such as primitive people and prehistoric civilized cities. Superpower civilization inheritance! Just like a dungeon that everyone can grind, if you get the first kill and others get some leftovers, right? 5. Inspiration: When you have no inspiration, go out for a walk, or sit down and play games to find inspiration from the surroundings of life, or find an old man to set up a dragon gate array and let the old man tell old stories from the past. Don't write rigidly, just like today I met a chicken and it clucked at me, and tomorrow I met a cat and it meowed meow meow meow meow. 6. Survival mode: Survival is separated from other things. Survival in the wilderness starts with daily necessities. Without a sense of crisis, it is not survival, but a vacation. If you want to survive in battle, there will be fewer neutral creatures, and you won't need too much hunting time. In mixed survival, you need to control the speed. Don't hunt monsters for half a year. It's better to have no food. A lot of what I wrote is unclear. How many chapters have you discovered Xiaobaishui? I introduced a mountain with a cave. I felt that I could climb to the top of the mountain. It felt like it was a forced wisdom. Who would climb a cave without profit? Just for the sake of adventure?

I just want the protagonist to be neither the Holy Mother nor the Holy Father, act like an ordinary person, respect the fate of others, and let go of the complex of saving others. Of course, it would be better if the protagonist is a lone ranger (there can be a female protagonist, of course the IQ must be online). As for the labor problem caused by farming, there will always be a way to solve it, right? Robots, slaves (must be restrained, otherwise it will be a poisonous point for some people, and the memory will have to be cleared)

I also read Little Tree House. I didn't understand why this book had such poor performance at first. After reading dozens of chapters, I kind of understood it. It was written so fluently that my emotions didn't fluctuate at all after reading it. The subject matter was not very popular in the first place, so it seemed even more unpopular. I hope the author will write his next book in the realm of fairy tales and fantasy. At least more people can understand it. The most important thing is to arouse the readers' emotions and make people interested in reading.

The previous book was well written, please give this one a thumbs up😌

I watched it for free and it feels like the content of this book is similar.

It feels very interesting, but it's a pity😭

No, why did you stop? It came from the cabin.