The Beginning of Survival: a Small Tree House

Why should a good survival story arrange a harem plot for the protagonist? Even if you want to arrange it, you can wait until it develops. It has been arranged for the protagonist just after the start of survival. It was really awkward during the interaction. The protagonist rushed to keep up with the start and revealed that he cheated. After finishing it, he didn't believe it. I was really speechless. The most taboo thing in survival stories is that he is not clear with the woman.

In fact, when I first saw that it was a team article, I had no desire to read it, because even if it was a masterpiece of various team types, there would be all kinds of holy behaviors, uneven distribution of team resources, various people who are holding back, or people who are useless at the beginning but not outstanding enough in the later stage. Although it is for the plot, it is very uncomfortable to read this kind of book because the main character is better developed alone and is dragged down by these people. That is why I liked the book Samsara Paradise before. But this book allowed me to see another side of the team, and selling drugs at low prices and at a loss just to save people didn't make me feel the Virgin Mary. I can only say that the author's writing skills and descriptions are quite exquisite, because everyone is worried and will not drag each other down. It is quite comfortable to read. Because I am still a student and really have no ability to reward, and what I read at the beginning was a pirated version, so I can only order it in full to show my respect.

I finished reading this book in one day. Let me talk about my thoughts here. It feels like the author started writing based on the plot of MC. If you want to get rich, you must first plant trees, slowly grow up, and then grow stronger. It feels like a time-travel novel. In fact, this is quite good. Like the colonial costumes I read before, etc., From small groups to large groups, the area gradually becomes larger! Generally speaking, the idea is like this, but the specifics depend on the author's ideas. I feel that the author's ideas are generally good. After all, I am also a person who has written 500,000 novels. I have written so many chapters, and I can grasp the plot of 4 to 5 million! But as for the emotional line, I really feel that the writing here is very confusing, it would be better not to have a female protagonist. I came to create the only female protagonist, but there were too many women behind me. Instead, the female protagonist Fei'er gradually wanted to replace the female protagonist. It was difficult for the two of them to have physical contact, but in order to shape your image, they were deliberately together. Every time the female protagonist actually arrived, the plot felt very stiff! On the contrary, the female supporting role slowly follows the plot every time, and smoothly becomes a part of the plot. It looks very natural, and the emotions gradually come out! Just like Mayfair and wet nurses, etc., But the author seems to be deliberately avoiding this point, not describing too much, and deliberately avoiding this point! I won't go into details at all, let's see what everyone thinks, the important thing should be in the author's writing! It should still be in a stage of development! I think the next step will be the national war, and some world settings will be gradually decrypted. The settings are quite good. Let's see what the author does next. Come on! I'll give you a suggestion. If you really can't write an emotional drama well, I suggest you write a novel without a female protagonist. Just write the female protagonist to death or send her away, and then the male rescues her. On the contrary, it can reveal the main plot line and not make the supporting characters too prominent. However, you can't interfere too much with the author's thinking. If you look at it now, everyone's character is well developed and not mixed together. Fine! Come on!

Let's discuss the book's maturity and feasibility: First, a very realistic chat box and world require a high-tech civilization to launch a sophon onto a high-level civilized planet, and require initial transformation of the low-level civilized planet. It is also necessary to secretly capture some intelligent humans and perform memory erasure with limited memory. This is quite difficult. Author, you are very difficult for higher civilizations. There are also high-level civilizations that absolutely need benefits to realize the things in your novel. Either your fighting methods can be used as a reference for them, or they are conducting experiments on the evolution of lower-level civilizations.

Not bad! By the way, I would like to ask if there is any kind of teamwork in this kind of survival game. I saw some of them were all lone wolves, which seemed uninteresting.

When I see a woman, I get led by the nose

The writing is very nice, but the number of words is too few. I finished reading it in one day. If you have trouble reaching 2 million words or when it is almost finished, please post it to me on Didi. Thank you.

Emmm, what do you say? The exploration and adventure in the early and middle stages are very interesting, but the latter part is basically a combination of the Riddler. If the first part is relaxing, then the second part is very brain-burning. It makes my brain hurt

This is a change of author, right? There is no inner taste anymore. Give me another chance and keep it for now.

In the early stage, as a survival type, it was generally pretty good. Although sometimes I forgot about settings and rewards, but later on it suddenly became scientific! It's not a problem to talk about science. This is the earth a thousand years later, and time travel can be explained reasonably. But please tell me, how can you use the scientific explanation of the 100-fold explosion rate to create matter out of thin air? I won't list the others. Another thing is that aliens, as interstellar civilizations, travel across the universe to fuck you. Later, when Crystal City appears, it will be a showdown. If they really want to fuck you, it is as easy as killing ants. Forget it, I don't know what to say. In short, the post-production is seriously messed up and the settings are messed up.

The first and middle stages of the novel were very interesting, and the survival adventure of collecting supplies was really fun to watch. But later on, the focus changed when the districts competed for hegemony. The adventure and survival parts were obviously reduced. I kept writing all kinds of intrigues, and this is a survival novel. If you say that a few explorers get together, it is acceptable, but you will have to get together in the entire district later. Come on, what kind of adventure survival is this? The supplies in the back have also dried up. There are tens of thousands of various supplies. This obviously does not meet the definition of survival. As a result, the subsequent plot becomes very bland. I don't want to read it immediately. I still like this kind of novel about adventure survival and collecting supplies, but this kind of novel is easy to collapse when a lot of people get together.

Every time I see the heroine Li Wenxi's name being called without her surname, it easily makes me think of Leonardo da Vinci, good Vinci😂

I just finished reading it. At present, compared with the previous wilderness survival articles, it has its own characteristics, which makes me, an old bookworm, willing to pursue it. But as other book friends said, there is a big difference between a lone wolf and a team. When writing about team survival, in shaping each character image, if one is not handled well, it will easily lower the overall level, which is related to the later level. Make persistent efforts

I ran away in Chapter 8. This kind of writing is copied from each other. The typical performance is a lucky heroine, a rich female supporting character, and an unlucky and mentally retarded pig's trotters.

What I think is bad is that one is Lou Fei'er and the other is the little rich woman who has sex with her. She is always nervous no matter what the protagonist does. How well written it was before, ugh

To be honest, the only reason I couldn't stand reading this book was because of the author's name? Coco (Red Panda) Mimi (Leopard) Silver King (Wolf King) Bat (Ah Fu) Aifei (Pangolin) These are all dog names. No one really thinks that such a name can retain readers. No, no.

Dear readers, Coco is a red panda, not a giant panda!

After reading three hundred and one chapters, I really couldn't read any more. The male protagonist is really like a "nouveau riche", with "external appearance" but no "connotation". Even during the process of reading, I felt that the male protagonist Ji Chaoyang was more suitable to be the male protagonist. Lei Yi: No idea. After reading so many chapters, I really feel that the male protagonist is very childish. There is a contract, but the contract is very casual. Except that Mimi was chosen in the current environment, the rest is like as long as it is a mutation, I want to contract, and I don't think about anything else. Lei Er: Not responsible. This is also an important reason why I can't stand it. I made a contract with Ma, an important person with abilities. As mentioned in the previous sentence, he will attack the opponent when he is hurt. However, when the giant python brought the person to the point of death, there was no reaction... Anyway, there are a lot of tricks, so everyone can take advantage of them.

It's written in a mess. It's clear that the top reward in the first event is only for the protagonist to have a mobile watch screen. In subsequent events, you can also chat and trade with the protagonist in the wild.

Did you see many people running away after seeing Chapter 9?

After opening the chat channel, the plot with Li Wenxi was really retarded

The backend is too messy, especially the confrontation between the mastermind and the protagonist. There are no side tasks interspersed in the middle. From the difficult start at the beginning, to the constant delivery of materials to the protagonist in the end, which is all kinds of fattening up the protagonist. There was also a period of struggle in the book, trying to attribute the materials and props, and it completely collapsed in the end.

The plot is very good, the logic is reasonable, and it is more attractive to read. However, the character creation is not good, especially the female characters are either love-minded or naive. You are trying to survive, not to travel. Not only do such people not die, but they are among the top ten. It is fine to say that it is because there are too many people in the area. Why are there only a few hundred people left to die in the outer area? The top few masters are as innocent as children. It feels like these are just tool people set up to facilitate the protagonist.

Forget about being a female at the beginning. The protagonist has resources and various information. Why not make good use of it on the trading platform? The protagonist keeps saying that other people's blue items are traded privately. Can't you put your own blue items on it to exchange blue items with others? It also feels like the protagonist is not trying to survive, but like he is playing a game. He does everything calmly. The IQ of the protagonist means that the author is in the background, otherwise he will die. The focus of this kind of novel is survival adventure and trading. If you don't think about making good use of the trading platform to gain resources, you just want to mess around.

It's outrageous, being restrained by a slave, obeying a slave's words, how come you see a woman can't walk, right? You just cut the man with a knife, it's really like a lunatic. Sometimes you act like a little kid and ask stupid questions. When others tell you, you say you don't trust me. Why are you so unsure of yourself? What are you afraid of?

There are so many bits and pieces. Does it feel humorous? I really can't stand it anymore.

Damn, after reading ten chapters, it turned out to be a love story. How can I survive? I keep having voice chats, video chats, and gifts with women. The plug-in makes me want to scold my mother.

It's fine in the beginning, but in the end, in order to promote the plot, the protagonist's intelligence is forcibly reduced, which is as outrageous as running the dice and failing again and again.

I listen to books, and the main character is so weird. He has to yell dozens of times during a chapter, and he has to yell once after a few paragraphs. It makes me uncomfortable to listen to it.

The setting is good, but it's just too basic. The male protagonist's pretense is not smooth enough. He doesn't look as good as the second male lead. It's not exciting enough.