The End of Cultivation: I Have a Tree of Immortality

It was a great concept, but the author wasted it. After dozens of chapters, the tree only gave us one book and one talisman. The key point is that the protagonist of the book doesn't even cultivate. What's the use of that? The cheat ability that can't work immediately could have been developed later. Releasing it so early made people think the protagonist could cultivate it and acquire some means to fight against the supernatural, but instead, he just imagined it and didn't dare to practice. The first fruit could have brought about a small climax. Even providing some formations that can conceal the base so that the strange entities cannot discover it would be fine. At least it would be equivalent to creating a safe zone, giving them an advantage compared to other independent cultivators or even cultivators from major sects. Alternatively, giving you a spell to create spiritual fields would be better than going to some stream and using traditional cultivation methods to create one. If you can create one, why can't others? Another thing is the talisman, which doesn't play a crucial role. It's frustrating that it can only identify strange things. If you encounter a strange person asking for directions, they might inexplicably say that the road is under your feet and you can escape. It's too simplistic. As for that tree, knowing full well that it could bear good things, dozens of chapters have passed, and knowing that someone was selling strange items and that they were effective, it seems that it was only then that it belatedly remembered to consciously exchange them. It's like you're constantly piquing the reader's interest, just getting to the point, and then immediately jumping to the next setting. Author, you really wasted one good opportunity after another. If you had simply given Guozi some basic abilities at the beginning, abilities that could immediately solve the immediate predicament, you could have created several climaxes.

It's still about daily cultivation and rambling about management. The sense of urgency created by the opening mystery is completely gone, and the cheat ability doesn't directly contribute to survival. Some people in the comments section said they were thinking of waiting and seeing if there would be any adjustments, but the author still insisted on going his own way. Never mind, I'll delete it.

In other words, even the protagonist deserves to be schemed against.

I've written about ten chapters, it seems like I've written something, but it also seems like I haven't written anything at all.

The author overlooked so many things. They've already broken out of the mountains, yet they're not hurrying to develop the population before the mortals are subjugated. Instead, they're dawdling around with all this nonsense about seclusion and other tedious details. I'm really annoyed by it.

There are too many loopholes. You leaked the information about spirit stones to others first, without even taking a few yourself, trusting others' hearts, and not sending out some people to protect yourself. Didn't you consider the consequences of their betrayal? At least you could have spread the news. But they turned around and brought in allies, and you didn't dare to speak openly, then leaked the news about the Foundation Establishment Heavenly Profound Fruit to them again. They just slapped you on the left cheek, and you offered up the right. At least you should have tried to smooth things over, signed a contract, made a vow, or something. Nothing! You chose to hurt them without any bottom line. In this chaotic world, everyone around you is killing each other, yet you still have no shrewdness. You would have been silenced 800 times over. They have Foundation Establishment cultivators, they have trump cards, and they have the power of a united front. Why didn't they just join forces and wipe you out? They'd have nothing to lose anyway.

How to make a book feel lifeless? Just look at how the author interprets it.

You've seen two pictures, right? Why does the mystery disappear once you enter the Ten Thousand Mountains? It's not explained clearly.

Everyone is welcome to share their thoughts in the comments section. The author will respond to every comment, but please refrain from discussing matters unrelated to the book.

This book is addictive; you don't need to throw away the cheat system, right?