Punishing Jin

Many people feel that the plot is dull. In fact, if one really understands this period of history, Lu Wei will still have great difficulties. In two years, Sima Luo will become the general to conquer the south. If Lu didn't kill him, his work for the past two years would have been in vain, but if he killed Sima Lue, it would be a rebellion! This matter is not easy to resolve. Will the protagonist's father agree to rebel? So the author has to make this matter smoother.

Expand the army, establish base areas, recruit talents, and get wives. This is the current rhythm. The mother character is not likable.

You can learn about the Huacai of the Manchu and Tang Dynasties and the long sword of the late Jin Dynasty and write about the harem

If the protagonist subsequently regains Chengdu and succeeds in fighting the Xiongnu in the north, there will be a chance to unify the world. Going to Youzhou will be better than the south.

I'm missing a breath. The protagonist is not as vivid as the supporting character. He doesn't want to be good, he doesn't dare to be bad, and he doesn't take the initiative. The character of the protagonist is too flat. Either learn from Liu Bei or Cao Cao. Don't be like a supporting character. It's acceptable to be like Lu Bu. The protagonist is a time traveler, and his background is not bad. It doesn't require more subjective initiative. Do more things. Don't be pushed by the historical plot. It's fun to be active, but it's uncomfortable to be passive.

Since Shao Thief entered the late Jin Dynasty, there seem to be more novels written about the late Jin Dynasty.

The procrastination of the narration shows that the protagonist is too forward-thinking and too resourceful to make decisions. I suggest the author to read the book review section for historical novels with good results. Some book reviews summarize very well. Listen to others and have enough to eat. Writing novels nowadays is too complicated. It is very important to find the right style.

I saw the author's comment that if the protagonist was a commoner, he would have sent it, which means that only the son of an aristocratic family could be saved. Ahem, I would like to say that the main reason why the history of the Southern and Northern Dynasties gives people this feeling is that the history during this period is from the perspective of the Southern Dynasties. From the perspective of the Wuhu and the Northern Dynasties, the poor families and common people are really not so miserable. It is just that the process of rise may need to rely on the Hu people and do many things that are not in line with the mainstream view. Historically, the reason why poor families and common people in the Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties found it difficult to get ahead was not because of their family background, but because their knowledge and vision were almost zero. The first step would not work. Travelers have an advantage in these two aspects. Primitive accumulation is not impossible to obtain. In troubled times, if you have the ability, it is not a big deal to pretend to be a member of a noble family

I will never read your book again

The second year of Tai'an😜