Punish Jin

The book can be written in a profound way, but the pace is a bit slow.

Many people feel that the plot is dull. In fact, if one really understands this period of history, Lu Wei will still have great difficulties. In two years, Sima Luo will become the general to conquer the south. If Lu didn't kill him, his work for the past two years would have been in vain, but if he killed Sima Lue, it would be a rebellion! This matter is not easy to resolve. Will the protagonist's father agree to rebel? So the author has to make this matter smoother.

Expand the army, establish base areas, recruit talents, and get wives. This is the current rhythm. The mother character is not likable.

You can learn about the Huacai of the Manchu and Tang Dynasties and the long sword of the late Jin Dynasty and write about the harem

If the protagonist subsequently regains Chengdu and succeeds in fighting the Xiongnu in the north, there will be a chance to unify the world. Going to Youzhou will be better than the south.

Since Shao Thief entered the late Jin Dynasty, there seem to be more novels written about the late Jin Dynasty.

I'm missing a breath. The protagonist is not as vivid as the supporting character. He doesn't want to be good, he doesn't dare to be bad, and he doesn't take the initiative. The character of the protagonist is too flat. Either learn from Liu Bei or Cao Cao. Don't be like a supporting character. It's acceptable to be like Lu Bu. The protagonist is a time traveler, and his background is not bad. It doesn't require more subjective initiative. Do more things. Don't be pushed by the historical plot. It's fun to be active, but it's uncomfortable to be passive.

I saw the author's comment that if the protagonist was a commoner, he would have sent it, which means that only the son of an aristocratic family could be saved. Ahem, I would like to say that the main reason why the history of the Southern and Northern Dynasties gives people this feeling is that the history during this period is from the perspective of the Southern Dynasties. From the perspective of the Wuhu and the Northern Dynasties, the poor families and common people are really not so miserable. It is just that the process of rise may need to rely on the Hu people and do many things that are not in line with the mainstream view. Historically, the reason why poor families and common people in the Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties found it difficult to get ahead was not because of their family background, but because their knowledge and vision were almost zero. The first step would not work. Travelers have an advantage in these two aspects. Primitive accumulation is not impossible to obtain. In troubled times, if you have the ability, it is not a big deal to pretend to be a member of a noble family

The procrastination of the narration shows that the protagonist is too forward-thinking and too resourceful to make decisions. I suggest the author to read the book review section for historical novels with good results. Some book reviews summarize very well. Listen to others and have enough to eat. Writing novels nowadays is too complicated. It is very important to find the right style.

I will never read your book again

The second year of Tai'an😜

I don't like it, why do you always write about the rats from Jiangdong? Are they all written badly? The Sui, Tang, Song and Yuan Dynasties are not from the south to the Ming Dynasty. It's because the Yuan Dynasty and the Qing Dynasty were destroyed because of corruption. Can you respect the background and era? There is a horse, and the emperor is really convinced.

Has the appearance of a platinum great god🙂

I feel like I'm going to rush out! The author's pacing is completely off track! It is recommended to check out Mike's rhythm

I have read more than 30 chapters, with no priority, main line arrangement, uncertain strategy, not getting into the big plot, just wasting time on a few trivial things, the writing level is immature, but the text is okay

Recently, there have been more novels about the Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties. The historical genre has gone through a trough and is about to start to revive again.

Is it a mess? Why is it the end of the chapter?

Qing Mimi didn't call me when she opened the book, bad review. Fortunately, I still remember that the book will open in March or April 😏

Pin it to the top and wait for updates. Take a look at Punishing Wei when you have time.

The writing is very good, but for now I personally feel that the protagonist's role is a bit small, focusing on the description of the group portraits. Regarding this book, I still have the desire to read it!

There is progress, good-looking, love to watch 🙂

Come on. The previous book punished Wei and had a rushed ending, I hope this one is better. There are many authors writing about the history of the late Jin Dynasty. Come on, author, you will be motivated when you are under pressure.

Come on, author, please update faster.

Can you update five chapters when they are released tomorrow? Author, how many manuscripts do you have left?

To be honest, the author is very good at writing novels about the Republic of China, but his writing about ancient novels is average.

I can't get out now. Please update soon.

Isn't the author on the shelves yet? ? I'm also going to give you a first order data 🙂

If your popularity is not that good, please ask editors or other authors to help promote it.

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