
Punish Wei
罚魏
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- Completed
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- 1.0M Words
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- Historical
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- Male
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- Qin-Han & Three Kingdoms
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It can only be said that the authors of historical hegemony novels are somewhat unclear about the issues between men and women. The only things that the heroine of this kind of hegemony novel needs to worry about is whether her identity can help the protagonist and how to marry him reasonably. Later on, just use the template of being a virtuous and having a mistress. It is definitely a stupid operation to write about the development of relationships, such as "Overthrowing the Han", and the appearance rate is touching. To put it bluntly, this kind of hegemony novel has no stage for emotional performances between men and women. Think about it and you will know how these ambitious guys can do this.
In the Three Kingdoms era, there was no problem with wives. They could be snatched by war, widows, or anyone else. But my boss, at least from the chapters I read so far, your husband, Captain Hu, is not kind to you. He started having an affair before you even got married. Isn't he really a bit poisonous? This is really disgusting to read. Some people say that copying poems is disgusting, but I think it's okay. Although you changed it to look different, I can accept it, but I can't accept this kind of ingratitude. You are grateful in front of you, but you are flirting with someone else's wife behind your back.
Not to mention other things, since I want to write a historical article, I have to be more rigorous. Various names, products, officialdom, systems, adults, sesame cakes, and cakes are all too poisonous.
During the Cao Pi era, the nine-level Zhongzheng system was implemented. If you write a protagonist with a commoner background, are you making trouble?
I really can't accept that my wife is a married woman, and there is still such a big difference in age. Goodbye.
Liu Zhong felt that the character creation was a failure, and he died of poison when he saw the marriage proposal. Just like a naughty boy waiting to be fed, he dares to grab the male protagonist without being a life-or-death acquaintance or equal in status. I know the author wants his role to be played later in the plot, but the protagonist doesn't know that! How could such a fool who only knew how to show his temper treat him like a real brother? If he were to be a private soldier, I would be worried that he would take advantage of the male protagonist and miss work because of some trivial matter, allowing the assassin to seize the defense gap and kill the protagonist. The author should just throw this guy into the trap camp! As a confidant, things will go wrong sooner or later based on logical concepts.
I sent it and read more than fifty chapters. The author's writing style is sophisticated, but everything is detailed and everything is written. The plot is procrastinating, there is no positive feedback, and the main line is unclear. I read it for a long time and I didn't know what to write. Stealing a cow can also write more than ten chapters. The key point is that the cow does not bring feedback to the readers. It can neither promote the position nor bring the criminal to justice. It has no positive meaning and cannot advance the plot. You write yours and I will read mine. After stealing cattle and drinking water, he went to join the army for a few chapters. This is also outrageous. It has no content at all. It is all about popularizing science. The words and sentences are so awkward that it made my head grow bigger. The key point of popularizing science is useless. It has nothing to do with the current plot. Popularizing science makes me feel lonely. Fifteen years ago this book would have received a perfect score of 100 points, but now it has a perfect score of 300 points. 100 Points is completely unreadable and unsatisfactory.
The poems selected are not suitable for the occasion, and are inconsistent with the protagonist's own experience, age, status, etc. They are pretentious and artificial, making it awkward to read. It is recommended to choose some poems with simple vocabulary, spirituality and freshness. For example, "What I Saw in a Book on a Boat Night" When the moon is dark, I can see fishing lanterns, but there is only a single light of firefly. ,
I can't understand it According to this development, if the protagonist wants to become emperor, he can only imitate Sima Yi How to overcome the shortcomings of unfairly winning the country 😰😰😰 Defect and then fight back? How many people will die? Are there still so many people in the Central Plains who can die?
After being poisoned by Neo-Confucianism, scholars began to care about wives. Before being poisoned by Neo-Confucianism, who would care about wives? Many of us now have the lingering influence of the poison of Neo-Confucianism. They care so much about wives. The law clearly allows the freedom of divorce and remarriage. Why are so many people still concerned about wives? The poison of Neo-Confucianism is really harmful.
Has the author written about the 1908 Warlords?
Here's a suggestion: It's not impossible to make the protagonist's script more difficult, but it's deceptive to have to make the protagonist's halo shine at the last moment to pass the level. Once in Huainan, once in Hanzhong, I hope there won't be a third time.
Many old writers copied Gong's writing style, and copied things mechanically and inappropriately, which not only lowered the grade of the original poems but also made them extremely embarrassing.
Old fan
I haven't read your book for many years I remember back then I was the owner of Minnan Yuke Post Bar
I have been paying attention to all the readers' comments and comments and answering them as much as possible. It is true that there are many flaws in the novel, which is also a short-sighted disease that I have suffered from since I haven't written an online article for a long time. During this time, I also gradually followed the works of other great masters, and compared and carefully analyzed the chapter problems. These will be my valuable experiences. Whether punishing Wei succeeds or not (there is a high probability that it will not succeed 😜), I will try my best to write a million words. I have to lament that the landscape of online writing today is completely different from that of ten years ago, and readers' aesthetics, knowledge reserves, and interests have been geometrically upgraded. This is a really good thing. A few days ago, a man from eastern Zhejiang passed by. I looked through his books and he said: Good readers make good authors. The reason why I have been working in the past ten years is that my writing has a deliberate design. The hole buried in the front will definitely have to be filled in later. It's my fault, so there will be a big event involving the Martian novel later. There is no way to avoid it, we can only push it down. But I believe things will get better after this incident passes. I'm still not familiar with some of the rules of Qidian. For example, if this book crashes, do I need to re-open it under a different pen name? If so, it is indeed a bit embarrassing 😭 Thanks again to readers for their support. It is difficult to be consistent in reality, so we created a virtual life. Readers are welcome to express their opinions. Come and help me grow 🤭😚🤭
You started playing Madonna, isn't it too early to screen readers? 😥
At the end of the Wei Dynasty, there were aristocratic families all over the world. I feel like if you don't become a warlord. The position is unstable. Unless they were all chopped off like Huang Chao. Just overthrow the order and start over. Just look at Dong Zhuo in the late Han Dynasty. He generously awarded rewards to win over the nobles. Others still want to turn against him and kill him. I think he is just a sidekick. As a result, he failed in the end. Not to mention the nine-level Zhongzheng system in the late Wei Dynasty. That is really a high-grade Wuhan family and a low-grade Wushi family. What's more, the protagonist is not even from a humble family. Unlike the warriors of the Five Dynasties period, they could not break the rule of the noble clans. Then he shouted, "The Emperor's soldiers and horses are strong, and he should do it." Arouse ambition in others. Only when the world is in chaos will there be a chance. Moreover, the aristocratic family members are very fat.
Long time no see, Southern Fujian University
Minnan Fool Guest, long time no see, I suddenly searched for you on Baidu and found this new book. I remember interacting with you when I was reading Warlords, and I gave you advice when I finished writing Three Kingdoms. More than ten years have passed, and I have grown from a little kid to a grown man. I miss you very much. . .
I've just read Chapter 80, and I personally think it's quite good as far as free chapters are concerned. The character creation is very sophisticated, and the author's writing skills must be that of a veteran. And what's interesting is that the author issues avoidance instructions right at the beginning of the toxic chapter. But it's strange that it's not popular. I think this book is actually quite interesting.
I read it several times intermittently before reaching chapter 80. I really can't stand this captain's wife. This is the Three Kingdoms, not a virtual time and space. A woman in her thirties in troubled times can have grandchildren if she hurry up. She can call herself an old woman. You are still playing with ambiguity here. My head hurts. I'll read it again when I'm short of books.
The author took a detour some time ago, but now he has corrected it. What status is the protagonist's first wife considering to find a noble woman?
Reborn in the late Qing Dynasty, if you want to be a warlord, should you vote for Yuan or Sun, should you go to the north or to the south? Yuan Datou: The growing military group will give me all the benefits of being a dog. When I pass away, I will compete in the Beiyang. Sun Dapao: Positive and progressive political concepts, the revolution will have bright prospects at the beginning. If I die, comrade, work hard North: Politics+ Conservatives+ External interference↑ Jiangnan: Economics+ Radicals+ Intra-party struggle↑
Regardless of anything else, the author's attitude is indeed good 😌
Brother, will you update it today? 😜, don't worry about those stuck in the comments 😁, they are too picky, except for talking, they have no 🐶der in their stomachs, they will only use their own fixed thinking, purely to criticize, the writing is indeed good, a rare good historical article.
The writing is okay, why is there no recommendation? I saw it from the place where I listen to books and do tasks.
Yuke's book is still good, I read the latest chapter in three days. Like the original book from the warlord period of the Republic of China, it is worth reading. In this book, if the protagonist does not offer three strategies, but takes advantage of time travel and directly offers four strategies, in addition to the three strategies in the book, he also dedicates the original route in history to Cao Shuang, walking his own path, leaving the leader with no way to go. Moreover, the policies should not be divided into top, middle and bottom, just one, two, three and four. Do not distinguish between good and bad. They just list the advantages and disadvantages of each route. Which one is better and which one is worse is left to the leader to choose. Furthermore, preventive ideas are proposed based on the disadvantages of each route. Then Cao Shuang will not be defeated?
The authors of Qidian are all loyal officials of the Han Dynasty. They either punished Wei or were loyal to the Han Dynasty, probably because Wu was not worthy 😏
Belongs to the type that refuses to change despite repeated admonitions
The book review has said so much, it is poisonous here, but the author does not change it, and he writes as he should. Is the editor in charge of the author a bad guy, so he does not scold the author and still allows him to continue writing? What's the prospect of just writing like this? I'm so addicted just by reading it. It's useless no matter what I write.
I recommend Aztec's Immortal, which is well written.
It's a bit too poisonous. The several conflicts the author wrote were too intellectual. The protagonist did not do any follow-up after witnessing the rape and stopped it. Li Qian was forced to create a drama to make things difficult for the protagonist out of jealousy. It was so ridiculous that he died of poison.