New Era of Later Han Dynasty

As of Chapter 65, there are good points and areas for improvement. Generally speaking, the quality is still on the upper side. It is not a purely enjoyable article. It can be seen that the author has ideas. Most of the people who criticize it feel that it is not enjoyable enough. Naturally, they are not the target users of this book. It is not recommended for those who cannot settle down. If it is a perfect score of 10, I would give this book 7.5 Points. The standard is still online. The wording is more sophisticated. The protagonist repeatedly hesitates and thinks. This is very realistic and well written. It is absolutely impossible to end the Five Generations just by brutal methods. Heroes like Zhao Kuangyin and Chai Rong It took more than ten years to calm down. Even with the blessing of God's perspective in later generations, it can't change too much. You can only take it slowly from the subtle points. The most important thing is not to rush. If you rush, you will make mistakes. If you make mistakes, you will be ruined. Again, it is not recommended for people who cannot settle down or have no basic understanding of the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms.

I finished reading the current chapters in two days, and there are some comments from other people. Although some people say that the plot is not exciting enough, many people read too much fast food text and don't know what a good book is. The protagonist is already walking hard, managing step by step. Politics is about compromise. Each minister has his own position and there will inevitably be many constraints. The author's writing is more realistic and more realistic. For those who want to feel more relaxed, you might as well watch the Three Kingdoms killing all the four parties. The tiger's body shook and the four parties came to attack. Come on, author, there are not many good books about the Five Dynasties, order them all on the shelves!

When I read Chapter 25, I always had an unpleasant feeling. It wasn't until I read the comments below that I felt the same way that I felt. After thinking about it, I realized the whole story. Why everyone is saying that the protagonist is mediocre and the plot is boring. It's because the protagonist dares not do anything. He is hesitant in everything he does. He is afraid of wolves and tigers. The only thing he dares to do in more than 20 chapters is to arrange for the people under him to pretend to be gods and mischief. Historically, Liu Chengyou deceived Yang Bin and other powerful officials into the palace to kill him, and then forced him to rebel against Guo Wei. In fact, there is no difference between Kangxi's killing of Obai and forcing him to rebel against San Francisco. The only difference is that Kangxi won and Liu Chengyou lost. If Kangxi was besieged by Wu Sangui's soldiers in Beijing and was eventually killed in the suburbs of Beijing, he would be in a coma. But compared to the protagonist, who dared not do anything and only wanted to outlast the powerful ministers, he was still much stronger. When Li Yuan was besieged by Wei Daoer outside the city of Taiyuan as a remnant of Taiyuan, Li Shimin broke out of the siege with light cavalry and changed the protagonist. He must have looked forward and backward and finally reported to the Sui court. When Yang Guang fell, his character determined his fate. There was no trace of heroism in the protagonist.

I know what the problem with this book is. The protagonist does not have the military ability to fight a tough battle at all. He has not been able to find trusted generals like Yang Hu and Murong Ke to fight on his behalf. It would be okay for An Wen to be the governor of Bianliang, and Pingtianxia has sent it.

In fact, to put it simply, the audience wants to see you take action. No matter what action you take, it will not affect the overall situation or collapse the overall situation. You will develop little by little and place your cronies, and you will regain your power little by little inside and outside the court. What I'm afraid of is that you are always looking ahead and looking behind you, being suspicious of this and that, and trying to boil those ministers to death. Then what do you think the audience will see if this is the case? Do they really see an ordinary person drifting with the crowd? Isn't it the audience themselves? Don't you all? Most of us are ordinary people, why should we read novels and also read about our own lives? So bland. Although people often comment on novels, the protagonist has no system and no ability. He can only do this if he goes through it. If you go through it, you may not be as good as them. But basic good novels are not really written like this. They are written entirely according to the rhythm of ordinary people. The protagonist in historical novels may be a hero, a traitor, a reckless man, or a murderer who fears nothing and no one. For example, Sima Yi in history did not really win the world by outlasting people to death, and most of them were party members. The author writes this from the perspective of an ordinary person. The protagonist knows history, so he knows the personality trends of some people, so he often suspects this and that. If you read these dozens of chapters, he is completely a jealous king. Ordinary people know that it is really possible to pass through history. I think so, but the author portrays it too much, and the protagonist often compromises and deals with policies. Although it is the current method, the whole character is portrayed in the novel as having no personality charm, making people feel that the protagonist will be like a puppet, and the plot will be dull, even if he is really a puppet. Therefore, I think the rhythm is right, but some aspects need to be polished, and the suspicious activities in the protagonist's heart should be reduced a bit. There is too much written.

The Later Han should not be called Sanzao Dahan! ? The latter Han Dynasty has nothing to do with the first two Han Dynasties! When Wuhu was messing with China, he ruined the reputation of the Han Dynasty! There are all kinds of people! It was all built by barbarians!

This book is really messed up in the description of the war. In order to allow the infantry to retreat smoothly, the cavalry was cut off. As a result, the author wrote that the entire cavalry army was wiped out. There were still more than 5,000 people defending the city and more than 20,000 people attacked the city. The city was captured in three days and less than 3,000 people died. It is really poisonous.

Vote for a monthly ticket to complain. The protagonist has been extremely stupid recently. Although he already knew that the internal officials named Su were spying on the palace and scheming important ministers, he actually didn't have any suspicion about the intelligence network that didn't give him any information. Now a serious emperor would have started to liquidate the entire department. It was obvious that either Li and Liu were useless, or they had been bribed and had no effect at the critical moment. Besides, Shi's murder was a serious political failure, almost as much as Adou's being forced to kill Zhang Fei and Guan Yu when he came to power.

When the plot reaches Dafu, the sex becomes repressed. It's almost unwatchable. The coquettish men and women are still coming back. The fifth generation is more direct when it comes to women. I mainly want to see blood flowing like a river. The change of social customs and systems will take one generation to complete. This aspect is subtle and can't be rushed. The protagonist should focus on the military 🙂

It's good in terms of writing techniques, and the plot of the story set in the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms is attractive enough. However, this book is a historical novel, so it must have strict logic, otherwise the sense of substitution will not be strong. Even if you write about the urban life of the Five Dynasties, as long as it conforms to the historical background, it is still a qualified work, so this is also the conclusion of many historical novels. The reason for this is that the author can no longer deduce it. You can write nonsense but the readers will not buy it. My biggest feeling when I saw the part about the plague is that it was taken too much for granted. The author used famous Chinese medicine to treat the people, but they were not full at the time. Where did he get enough Chinese medicine and alcohol? After spending many chapters describing it, the logic collapsed. Shi Shouxin, a famous general in the Northern Song Dynasty, fought in the south and the north, but ended up working as a spy. I hope the author can do a good study of historical figures and events next time and try to comply with historical logic.

Which of the founding emperors did not conquer the world personally? Liu Bang of the Han Dynasty conquered the world personally, and Li Yuan of the Tang Dynasty did not conquer the world personally. All emperors who could only serve as supreme emperors and could not conquer the world themselves had no real power. It is easy to hand over military power, but difficult to take it back.

Overall, it's okay. It doesn't matter if the protagonist takes it slow, but there are still some places or details that I think can be improved. 1. First of all, does the author want to be alone and write for fun, or does it treat it as a commercial activity and write books to make money? For the former, you can do whatever you want. For the latter, I think it is better to abide by it and attract more readers, instead of being the emperor of the comment section, the king of tough words, and full of aggression. Let's not talk about the quarrels in the book review section. In the paragraph reviews of the book, someone said that the relationship between the author and the author was not considered properly. The author attacked there and later admitted this in another person's comment. To put it bluntly, I just felt that the person at the beginning was offensive and told the author that this was not okay, but fortunately he admitted it without these things later. 2. Continuing from the previous point, let's take the example of Chang Siguan. The author seems to like to play something like "mecha deus ex machina" or, "Take a look again." I always write nothing at the front, but suddenly insert it at the back. The same is true for the plot of "History of Killing". Whether it is the incompetence of Li Liu's intelligence agency or how to deal with Su's small actions to destroy the political environment, the author said in the book review area, "Look at the back." I really want to complain, the author, are you a famous internet author? This is really similar to the idea of ​​​​squeezing out golden fingers in order to write better in the later stage - I always feel that readers will continue to follow it no matter what, without considering whether some readers will simply stop reading. 3. I would like to mention my thoughts on the basis of respecting the plot design of the author. For example, here in Chang Si, from the time Guo Zhang blamed Chang to finally taking over Chang's military power, the news of Guo Zang's responsibility and even Guo's leadership in the first place can support the relationship between the two. (Perhaps the person who reminded me had not yet posted a comment at that time) But later on, I just revised and added one or two character dialogues or psychological descriptions. The author loves to describe the psychological swings of characters but does not write them. Secondly, here is the political struggle caused by the incompetence of the intelligence agencies and Su's small actions. I don't know if the author thinks there are too many readers or something. I personally feel that there are a lot of ways to make amends, instead of just ignoring these two parts of the plot when they are fully aware of Su's little actions and the intelligence agency's incompetence. Even if we want to maintain the scene shown in the book, there are still many places to express the protagonist. For example, when you realize that Li and Liu are hiding information about Su, you can take action to summon Liu to test, you can secretly send the old man from Hebei or other people, or you can test the people under Li's agency. As simple as it is, it is the protagonist's thoughts and ideas about the situation and how to solve it, and Su's is the same. Instead of having more than a dozen chapters related to related issues, just hide it. If a reader complains about this, let me see what I can do later. What can I say? 3. I am speechless about the author's plot. In my opinion, the overall plot and handling method of history are: first, the main contradiction has not yet been solved, and second, the intensification of the contradiction is Zheng Bo and Duan Yuyan's method. It's like you know that dogs love Akaashi, and Akaashi will cause intense conflicts at this stage, and then you connive with others to put 💩 in front of 🐶, and when you see Akaashi, you pretend to say, although I know you were designed, but you are Akaashi and I have to punish you🙄whay can i say. What's even more speechless is that after the punishment, no good substitute was found.

Lightning protection, the first person in the harem to accept a married woman

So far, the intelligence agency designed by the author has not played any role beforehand. It has always acted stupidly after the fact, which I have known for a long time. I want to see how it will develop this time?

Those who don't know think that the protagonist, like Liu Yu, personally mounts a battle and sweeps across thousands of miles. At first glance, he asks his generals to go on the battle. Isn't it the same as the remnants of the First Emperor Fen VI?

The channel of the Later Han Dynasty has been occupied by the ancestors of the Han Dynasty. It is basically difficult for latecomers to surpass them without ruthless work and writing skills. This is the first-mover advantage.

The writing is good, and Liu Chengyou's name is quite nice😁

After all, I paid for the subscription, but I just commented, "This is going the old way of the Song Dynasty," and then deleted it? Humor

In the comment section, I said how well written Han Shizu was. I read dozens of chapters, and every chapter made me feel paralyzed and stressed. It's a rubbish book.

The protagonist is a bit ink. There is no need to give the Geng family any role. She quickly accepted the Fu family and arranged a childbirth plot to make her the queen. The protagonist also needs a marriage, so a queen with status can suppress other married concubines.

Some of the important people were Yelu Talie "At the beginning of Yingli, he was promoted to the king of Nanyuan. He paid taxes and servitude, encouraged people to cultivate crops, and converted his tribe into people, and his household registration was prosperous." "Talie always used the army, and he was honest about rewards and punishments, and won the hearts of the soldiers. Hedong was weak, so he would not do it. Among those who merged with the Zhou and Song Dynasties, Tarlie was unscrupulous in his administration and had no reputation among the people. At that time, Yelvwuzhi lived in the North Courtyard and Tarlie lived in the South Courtyard. They both had political achievements and were regarded as "the kings who enriched the people." Liao History Volume 77. Biography of Yelu Talie I feel that he actually cares about the Central Plains "In the winter of October of the first year of Yingli, Xiao Yiji sent General Xi and fifty thousand Liao soldiers to join the Northern Han Dynasty to attack the Zhou Dynasty. The Lord of the Northern Han Dynasty sent two soldiers from the Northern Han Dynasty Wan attacked Jinzhou and set up strongholds on three sides, attacking day and night. Zhou's patrol envoy Wang Wangang and his commanders Shi Yanchao and He Huigong came to resist. Zhou Taizu agreed to join forces with Wang Jun on Zezhou Road to rescue him. In December, when King Zhou arrived in Jinzhou, our troops fought against the Northern Han soldiers, so they returned. "In the ninth month of the second year of Yingli, our troops attacked Jizhou, but were rejected by the Zhou soldiers." Zhou Taizu was overjoyed and sent an envoy to summon troops. The Emperor sent Wu Ding Jiedu's envoy Yang Gun to march ten thousand troops to Jinyang. The Lord of the Northern Han Dynasty sent 30,000 troops to join our army in Luzhou. Jiedu's envoy Li Jun rebelled and was defeated. In the fifth month, the Lord of Zhou went from Luzhou to Jinyang and marched his flag around the city for forty miles. Wu Ding Jiedu sent Yang Gun back. The emperor was angry at his failure and imprisoned him. Zhou sent Fu Yanqing to garrison Xin and Daijian. After the attack, our troops withdrew to protect Xinkou, but Yanqing and others advanced lightly, but were defeated by our troops. There were many casualties. Yanqing led his troops back to Jinyang." Khitan National Chronicle Volume 5 Another example is the fourth year of Qingli "Yelu dilu, whose courtesy name is Yangyin, is after the king of Chu, Meng's father. He has a straightforward nature and a lot of physical strength. Chage made a rebellion. When dilu heard about it, he went to see King Shou'an and said generously: "I would like to get hundreds of elite soldiers to defeat the bandits. "Wang Jiaqi was loyal. Mu Zong came to the throne and served as the envoy of the North Courtyard. He said that Feihu Road was narrow and ordered the enemy to be wide. Next year, he sent troops to support Hedong and arrived in Taiyuan. He met with the King of Han in Gaoping and attacked the Zhou army. After defeating them, they still surrendered. The Biography of Yelu Dilu Comparing it with the Biography of Yelu Talie next door "The Zhou people invaded the Han Dynasty, and Talie Dutong was the commander of the Southwest Army to help them. The Zhou Dynasty had already conquered several cities in Taiyuan, and the Han people did not dare to After hearing the arrival of Ta Lie's troops, the Lord of Zhou sent Guo Congyi, Shang Jun and other elite cavalry to resist in Xinkou. Tar Lie defeated them and captured his general Shi Yanchao. The Zhou army escaped and recovered the captured city. When the Han leader died, the Song army came to attack, and ordered Ta Lie to be the commander of the army and send all the Tao soldiers to save him. After leaving Yanmen, the Song spy retreated. "The next day, the emperor saw it and said: "This is what Shibi said." The emperor asked Han Jianu: "Who has been the wise leader since the founding of our country?" Han Jianu asked Mu Zong. The emperor said strangely: "Mu Zong is addicted to alcohol, moody and angry, and treats people like grass. How can you be a virtuous person?" The Han family slave said to him: "Although Mu Zong was tyrannical, he spared corvee and despised taxes, and people enjoyed their lives. In Mu Zong's life, innocent people were killed, and the dead were never injured in Qiu Mountain today. Therefore, I regard Mu Zong as a virtuous person." The emperor was silent. History of the Liao Dynasty, Biography No. 33: Biography of the Slaves of the Xiao Han Family

These are troubled times. You have soldiers in your hands. Do the local officials dare to go against you? This is not the end of the dynasty.

It's very refreshing to watch, and there is one point I think is well written. The male protagonist gradually progresses from being helpless and being dragged down by the torrent of history, struggling to do things, and being checked and balanced everywhere, to gradually establishing prestige and majesty. The image of a gradually mature emperor has been established. The next step to settle down will definitely be to conquer the Sixteen States of Yanyun and establish a unified dynasty. The plot is very well written and very immersive, as if you can travel by yourself. There are a few immature suggestions: 1. We all know what the Northern Song Dynasty was like, with top culture and education but lack of martial arts. The current style of play must be stable and overriding to end the troubled times. However, in the process of gradually getting stronger, can some of the weaknesses of the Northern Song Dynasty be made up for? 2. Promote the progress of the times in a timely manner, which does not mean that it must be a whole steam engine or something, which would be very inconsistent. But there are some technological advancements, and projects that benefit the people can be advanced in a timely manner. I think the early stage of epidemic prevention is very good. Promoting the progress of the times with points and aspects can deepen the sense of immersion. Otherwise, what are we doing in time travel? If we are completely like the ancients, we might as well read the Zizhi Tongjian. Of course, it is a small step and a step-by-step process. For example, after the war is over and the internal affairs are sorted out, we can advance slowly. 3. Personally, I think it is possible to expand the harem, not to mention whether it is possible to collect and collect the big and small ones. I am not saying that it is like a stallion, but it is not like a saint. People who look at history are all men, and they are too desireless and unattractive. I want to have only two in the harem, and it has been 10 years. It is not normal. Of course, it is just an appropriate increase. For example, during non-war periods, collecting about 6/7 beauties of different styles can increase the fun. The above is for reference only. I paid for the monthly pass. I don't have much spare money, otherwise I would give away rewards. I really like this work. As a senior reader of Qidian, I appreciate historical articles with depth and plot, and I hope to continue to do so.

I don't see any trace of modern people.

To play this way, should we also give some sweeteners, for example, if we pay more taxes, we can get extra points in scientific examinations, support the wealthy gentry, and participate in part of the state-controlled salt, iron, oil, and rice transactions==, and kill those who refuse to accept it. Another thing is to completely eliminate the disadvantages of exclusive respect for Confucianism, and all scholars from hundreds of schools of thought can participate in the imperial examination.

Come on, I haven't seen a novel with such literary depth in a long time.

This will only cost over one million at most and it will be over.

It looks pretty good so far. The Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms are different from other dynasties. This is an era of moral decline. If you want to re-establish a unified dynasty, in addition to strong soldiers and horses, you also have to change the culture of emphasizing military force over literature for many years. Sometimes it is understandable that Song Dynasty is no longer weak. This is an inevitable choice.

Can you add ellipses every time when transitioning? Don't you think it's too abrupt if they go by and come back again?

The garrison method (also known as the garrison method) is a core military system established by Song Taizu Zhao Kuangyin in the early years of the Northern Song Dynasty on the advice of Prime Minister Zhao Pu. 1. Core Purpose Completely solve the historical problems of segregation of vassal towns and exclusive power of military commanders since the late Tang and Five Dynasties, and ensure centralization of power through system design. - Soldiers are impermanent, commanders are impermanent, and commanders are impermanent: Prevent generals and soldiers from forming a strong personal affiliation. - Strong branches and weak branches: The elite imperial army (Central Army) is stationed in the capital and local areas, rotating internally and externally to check each other. 2. Main contents 1. Army rotation - the Central Forbidden Army (under the jurisdiction of the three yamen) is sent to various places for garrison in turns and rotates regularly. -Term of office: 3 years in general areas, 2 years in Guangxi, and half a year in Shaanxi border areas. - Classification: The mainland is called "Tunzhu" (under the jurisdiction of local officials); the border defense is called "Garrison" (under the jurisdiction of the military general). 2. Separation of soldiers and generals - When the troops move, they will not move: The army rotates to garrison, but the generals who command the troops do not move with the army and are temporarily appointed by the court. - Family members do not accompany the camp: During the garrison, family members of soldiers stayed in the capital as disguised "hostages" to prevent rebellion.