Under One Person: Starting from the Three Demon Sects

The writing is pretty good, and there are no major flaws. It's not enough to just update a new book just after it's been released. I'll give you two tickets first to encourage you.

What are the latest chapters about? It's almost hard to tell who is the protagonist.

Read it, didn't like it, couldn't stand the first chapter

Go to Biyou Village to find Ma Xianhong to learn the magic machine and practice it a hundred times, refine the posthumous spiritual treasure and entrust it to the three corpses, and finally become a hundred-meter saint or a nuclear bomb saint 🤓 No matter how weak you are, you are still a saint

Also, don't whitewash your subject matter. It seems that you are in the Chaos-Evil-Law camp. Don't whitewash it 😆

I don't understand why so many people don't want to save Chen Duo. Her main problem is that her survival is poisoned by her own ticking time bomb, as well as the weak personal awareness caused by the extreme upbringing she received since she was a child, as well as the problems caused by a series of restrictions imposed by the state for the sake of stability. It can be seen from the original work that she just wants to live "freely", but she can't get this so-called freedom, so death is her only freedom. Saving mankind and letting it out of trouble is one of the absolutely noble ideals of mankind! Forget it if you don't have the ability. Why not avoid tragedy if you have the ability?

You can add some life skills training. Isn't the physical talent very good?

The plot of the contact with the company was too bad. It felt like you were going to write something but didn't. It was a bit strange that it passed by just watching it 🤫🤫🤫

I always feel that all the so-called people are fools, being played around by Qu Tong. Be it Heavenly Master or the company, they are all a bunch of fools. I just don't know how Qu Tong will appear in the end. I bet that it will definitely end badly under one person. Qu Tong is portrayed as so awesome, but where is his true strength? You can't be more awesome than the Heavenly Master, right? If the strength is rubbish, is it still a big boss? To be honest, what I like most about one person is the concept of aliens. As for the rest, screw it. I'm speechless. What kind of secret has been hidden for so long? How can I become an immortal? Look, one by one, what if I get the eight magical skills and become the king? ? ? ? I don't know what I'm grabbing. A mess. No matter how awesome the protagonist is, he's not as good as Qu Tong, he's just a monkey being toyed with. So what if you kill the people under your command? There are plenty of cannon fodder. Moreover, why couldn't Qu Tong say it? ? ? Aren't companies going after this method of changing people's memories with all their strength? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? It makes me sick

Author, you really don't have a long memory, why do you have to make everyone target the protagonist? What is this? There is absolutely no need to write this

It's weird. I don't like the protagonist's hand-to-hand fighting style. The protagonist has so many skills and only uses Bajiquan to fight.

It looked good at first, until I saw 49, flash people, what is the so-called difficulty in settling down, isn't it just to change it into what you want? It's so miserable, I don't even have a chance to choose.

I have never written a novel, but 24 hours a day, 86,400 seconds, typing three words per second normally, which is about 259,200 words, two thousand words per chapter, about one hundred and twenty-nine chapters a day. Obviously the author should have saved nearly a thousand chapters by now. Of course, I may be wrong. After all, I said at the beginning that I have not written a novel. In addition, the author, you owe us nearly a thousand chapters, remember to pay it back early.

The subject matter is quite good, but the opening is terrible, the protagonist is so bad-tempered, and Tu Junfang still makes such embarrassing remarks, it makes me sick to my stomach.

Go to Lao Lu and learn about the three levels of rebirth, the three levels and three corpses, the three pure things and the three demons, and the way of a saint is among them.

The plot arrangement is so bad, it should be more stable

Why write a plot about Lu Linglong if you don't plan on having a female protagonist? I quite like this character myself. When you wrote this plot, I thought you were going to be the heroine. But then you said you only wrote this and there was no heroine. So why did you write this plot? I could have continued reading even without the heroine, but you wrote a little and then stopped writing, which instantly made me lose the desire to continue reading.

It's boring to practice one's world view to the death and still be no match for a cruise missile. It's like mutants can only be mice in the shadows and never get on the stage.

Is Tai Tai an eunuch? Cutting off both ends every three days is even more disgusting.

I saw that it was about to be released, and then I wrote about something. I found a senior brother, got to know Wang Ye, and it seemed like there was nothing more than these. I wrote a lot of praises but not much dry stuff. The plot, if you think the protagonist's strength has improved, it would be cool, but readers don't have a clear understanding of the protagonist's strength. Based on the author's writing method, it is estimated that the three corpses can be dealt with in two to three hundred pieces.

Finally it's not Trinity Gate anymore😏😏

The killing of three corpses seems so awkward. Why does "killing" have to be removed literally? Just like the great road is ruthless and the supreme forgetfulness, I have these emotions only when I need them, and at the same time, I can let them go when I don't need them. The important thing is never these emotions, but me. Killing three corpses has never been the point, the point is to seek the true self. Then you stopped killing the three corpses and went to negotiate with them out of the desire to seek immortality? The three corpses are your desires. You feed your desires with your desires. Are you still asking for it from me?

A sect that beheaded three corpses, practiced to the end, was filled with pride, looking down on the alien world? Are these three corpses beheaded or not? It's better to change to one that doesn't require such harsh requirements. This kind of xinxing feels like Taoism is not good enough. It is not as good as Ruyi Jin, Ruyi Jin can also reach the sky.

The writing is very good and the skills are good

I sent it like this without posting a single chapter to state that it really ruins my opinion It's a pity. I think the author's logical explanation of becoming an immortal is quite interesting.

Maybe someone else wrote it later, but it was all inverted sentences, which was a drama.