Overthrow Qin

I think which of the laws the author complained about are inappropriate: 1. The laws enacted by the ancients were also based on the humanistic environment at that time. We don't know it clearly, so it is inappropriate to complain about these. 2. The male protagonist complains that he understands the structure of the political system. After all, he wants to rebel, but he always talks about a certain article of Qin Law, which shows that the pattern is too small.

So far, I haven't seen the protagonist surpass Liu Bang.

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At first it was logical to destroy the Qin Dynasty through military politics, but then the author began to kneel down and lick historical celebrities without any brain. This can only show ignorance, and the novel is meaningless. If he does not believe in the generals he has trained, he kneels down and licks historical celebrities. Does the author have any brains? Celebrities in history are also trained, and times make heroes. Celebrities in history may not be able to grow without the opportunities they had at that time, and you have no idea to kneel down and lick historical celebrities. The plot you wrote about the growth of the protagonist and his subordinates is meaningless.

In fact, I don't think the laws of the Qin Dynasty are too excessive, so I have no sense of substitution at all.

I used to be a Qin Chui, but I became sober after learning about Shang Yang's Five Techniques for Controlling the People. One people, weak people, tired people, humiliating people, poor people. How to put it, it feels like the people of this country are treated as enemies to guard against.

The author writes about Wu Guang that it is best not to take the lead in the first uprising. The first person will be shot. Since ancient times, the only person who has succeeded in taking the lead in uprisings is Liu Xiu (not to mention that he was not the real leader, and later borrowed the power of other powerful families). Either act as a counselor honestly and escape if failed, or wait until Liu Xiang and the others take action. There is a high probability that even Liu Bang cannot beat him (Liu Bang is already third, except for Xiang Yu and Han Xin, he can beat him)]

I read the comments and concluded that all of them are geniuses. Back in ancient times, they must have been wise kings through the ages.

Spiritual old Qin people, please stop making trouble. Why is the Qin law not strict? How did the continuous sitting system come about? Served most of his life in the military. Lord Shang himself knew what his laws were. Why did he run out as soon as he heard something was wrong? Run to the Kingdom of Wei. Because Shang Yang knew what Qin's laws were like to deal with him. Five skills to control the people. Continuous sitting system. Plus all kinds of corvee. You are lucky to be alive. The only dynasty that no one remembers. When Liu Bang came in, there was basically no resistance and he was worried that Pei Gong would not be king. The spiritual old Qin people always think that they are the ruling class. You are at most a prisoner building the Great Wall.

That's ridiculous. Xiang Liang and Xiang Yu have the same love as father and son. Even if Xiang Liang is king, does he need to guard against Xiang Yu? Don't say that Xiang Liang still doesn't have a biological son to be his heir. Even if he did, he wouldn't be so eager to suppress him. In those days, the death of children was too common. The answer has been given in the history of Xiang Liang's ability to be the heir. Except for Xiang Yu, others basically did not have that ability. Historically, when Xiang Liang died, Xiang Yu successfully took over the power and no one else objected. In order to weaken the combination of Xiang Liang and Xiang Yu, it's really difficult for the author to come up with such nonsense logic.

In view of the fact that some people have been posting comments and causing harassment recently, we will increase the fan value limit 😟 There is nothing we can do, everyone. Just because it didn't go his way, I kept posting on a small account. I don't know if it's because of my colleagues or because I was born to be an internet emperor.

Think about it carefully. The protagonist and Chen Sheng revolted from Daze Township, and then the protagonist went north alone to attack Zhao and regain Yan. Finally, when Zhang Han destroyed Chen Sheng and fought against Xiang Liang, he invaded Guanzhong and destroyed Qin. Finally, Xiang and Qi were destroyed. In the middle, Han Xin, who was on guard for Xiang Yu, was kidnapped before Xiang was destroyed, and sent to the north to gain merit. Then, while the protagonist was destroying Xiang, he was forcibly sent to be the general to destroy Qi. . . If I were Yuan Cong, the protagonist, fighting all the way from the uprising of hundreds of people to the end, I would be worse than Han Xin who intervened in the ending. . . I don't believe that the two of them didn't have an affair It's almost like the opponent voted for a regiment commander before the three major battles, and he was determined to be the number one marshal in 1955. Do you think it is reasonable? Is it reliable?

If you say that the Qin Dynasty is okay or praise the Qin Dynasty, then you must accept the following facts to prove it: 1. You can only say good things about "adults" and not bad things. 2. You are under surveillance all the time. The people who monitor you are your friends, parents, and even children. 3. You can only stay in one place and cannot move around. 4. Accept the implication! 5. There are no iron kitchen knives for cooking at home, or the government cooks uniformly, and then you come over to eat like a pig and work after eating. 6. You are not allowed to whisper or have parties. 7. You can only stay at home after 7 pm and are not allowed to go out. 8. You are not allowed to have parties, drink, or enter entertainment venues. 9. You cannot have your own thoughts or make your own voice. 10. In addition to eating and sleeping, you are working hard to farm and serve the entire empire's ruling class. When you are not fighting, you are just a working pig! During the war, you are the fertilizer for the plants, (no, you are worse than pigs, because pigs only eat and do not work). If you like that kind of life, you can immigrate to the peninsula and experience the daily life of that country where there are only three levels of harshness under the "lawful rule" of the First Emperor!

In ancient times, nomenclature instruments should not be faked and given to others. After some planning, the protagonist turned out to be King Chen Sheng. Doesn't that put yourself under Chen Sheng? The reputation of firing the first shot against Qin was gone. (Although the first rebel is easy to target, will the second one be forgiven? And they are a team, almost a community of destiny, with the same risk, why not fight?)

What rubbish is written? It's a waste of my money.

I hate the kind of plots involving historical figures that collect stamps. It's very embarrassing and just takes it for granted. I have the idea of ​​​​giving up pursuing it.

I think Qin Shihuang is still okay. It's not as bad as you said. Although Qin Shihuang had merits and demerits, he should not be so comprehensively negative and belittling. It is definitely wrong to have merit without merit. After all, there are historical limitations. I think what Qin Shihuang did was pretty good. Qin Hei who disagrees with the above views can come in and debate.

One thing to say, I found that as long as the novels about the destruction of Qin are almost all about criticizing Qin, almost all the novels about Xingqin are about the Qin Dynasty's great contribution In fact, the Qin Dynasty must have had its own sins, otherwise it would not have died in the second generation, but the Qin Dynasty must also have its own It is the first central unified dynasty in any way Those who say Qin is guilty only mention Qin's crimes, as if there is no merit except Qin's guilt. Anyone who says Qin has merit only sees the merits of the Qin Dynasty They all focus on a little magnification

But our Qin Law is kind😀 No problem, Qin Law is kind😋 The rebels are all nobles of the six countries, no one can touch Xianyang😙 Our old Qin people are still attacking😏 The Qin Dynasty's trick is always to face the national disaster together! 😆 The Qin army is coming! The Qin army is coming! 😃 Jiujiu Lao Qin directly attacked the rebel army! 🥳🥳🥳 Support Da Qin! 🥳🥳🥳 Great Qin's second resurgence! 🥳🥳🥳 Rebels, can you withstand the advance of the old Qin people? Duel with a giant deer😎 Chen Sheng and Wu Guang swim in the underworld😜 Hey, Xiang Yu is coming! Be careful with this reckless man😮 Xiang Yu led his troops to destroy the boat 😟 and Liu Bang's troops followed suit 😱😱😱 and the old Qin people made a three-chapter agreement with Liu Bang 😵😵😵 It's hard to say whether the Qin army can leave in this way, or whether the Qin army can withdraw Can it be withdrawn? Can Wang Li Zhanghan come back? It seems like he can't come back😭😭😭😭😭😭 Wow~ Liu Bang's sneak attack in three chapters of the agreement is too terrible😨 Wow😨 Wow😨

I specially subscribed to a chapter to comment. I am a professional old reader. I have been reading for more than 20 years and I still prefer the author. I also read the previous version of General Qin. Author, your book has some problems, some of which were exposed in General Qin, and this book has more problems. Combining the two books, the author seems to like writing about wars and has a good understanding of the history of Qin and Han Dynasties. Questions: 1. Writing power. War accounts for the vast majority of the book, but due to the lack of writing power, it seems to give people a very dry and boring feeling 2. Too much war space. Maybe it's because you like it or are good at it, but you, the author, like to write about war very much. You either don't cover the system, internal affairs, politics and other fields, or you finish it in two chapters. I saw several long comments in the comment section mentioned this. In fact, most of the fun points of fictional historical novels come from the "realization" of the experience of the time travellers. Regarding the design of the system and social reform, if targeted system design can be carried out based on the social reality of the time, then there simply won't be too much fun. Almost all of the current excellent fictional historical novels have reasonably designed plots. But this is precisely your weak point as the author. You focus solely on writing about war. If you can make it 55 pages long, I believe you will be surprised 3. It will be more fun. There are too many ideas on how to deal with some key plot points. It seems that the author wants to come up with new ideas, and some climaxes and exciting points have been omitted, which may even have the opposite effect. It seems that it is deliberately pursuing readers to say "Wow, 666, it can still be like this!". For example, the main character's son in General Qin is named Zhao Che. This name should either be changed to something ordinary, or it could be like Zhao Shiming and Zhao Di, who clearly hints that he wants to be the emperor... As a result, the writing turned out to be a twist in the finale, and the feedback from readers was pretty good, wasn't it? I think it's good too. , Almost made me cry... There are many other similar plots, and the author was confident, but at the beginning of the book, the reader was hit in the head and was confused. 4. The treatment of historical celebrities, especially war celebrities, and especially Han Xin. Or because of the war, the author had to make the protagonist an invincible commander! Then a huge problem arises, which is especially obvious in this book. For famous generals, they will naturally suppress their abilities and become robots that can only execute the protagonist's decisions, losing their own characteristics in history; while for less famous generals, they will unconsciously improve their abilities to become qualified execution robots. Regarding Han Xin, why I singled him out is because he is the only commander-in-chief, which completely coincides with the protagonist's positioning! I believe the author is also very troubled about how to design Han Xin's plot in the book. Take General Qin as an example, the protagonist is simply another Han Xin on the battlefield! As for this book, due to the highly overlapping characteristics of Han Xin and the protagonist, I feel that the handling of Han Xin is almost "wrong" in terms of plot design, and it has reached the point where I don't know where to put it... Haha... Looking at the second point, the best way to deal with it is to change the protagonist Zhu Yuanzhang In the early stage, the protagonist personally led the troops, and in the second half of the war, Han Xin was handed over to command the troops. The protagonist later engaged in the design and reform of politics, law, internal affairs, society, and economy, but the author was too weak in this part... Sincerely speaking, I look forward to the author's next book, and the next one will be more exciting.

Fusu's surname is Fu, Huhai's surname is Hu, and Ziying's surname is Zi.

Never write to support the Han Dynasty. Take a closer look at the emperors of the Han Dynasty. In fact, they were all like that, a bunch of egoists. And mean and unkind. The corruption of the old dynasty cannot be changed by a single minister, and there has never been any reform that can change the emperor. Only the time-travelers themselves dare to do this. The so-called Sanxing Han Dynasty is to turn the old Liu family into a family for generations, and the others will just be like cows and horses. What's the point of traveling like this?

Although there are many complaints, the author does not have to listen to those opinions. Just continue writing according to your own ideas. I think the more complaints you make, the better the writing is. Those books with 0 comments are embarrassing.

What are you explaining? I just left without reading. I thought it was updated. I don't even have the ability to think logically. I'm just reading a historical article.

Direction 1: Historical routes of Wu Chen and Han Guang. The benefits are huge, crossing the Yellow River north, occupying Hebei, and surrendering to the Yan Dynasty. The advantage is that Hebei is a vast territory with abundant people, and the Yan Dynasty can form elite cavalry and recruit famous generals Li Zuoche, Zhang Er, and Chen Yu. The danger is extremely high, and it is necessary to face the siege of the main force of the Qin army by Zhang Han and Wang Li at the same time, that is, the Battle of Julu. And how Wu Guang was not from Zhao, how to reorganize the local powerful and the army. Direction 2: Original historical Wuguang route. The advantage of besieging Xingyang is that it can obtain Aocang's grain and Xingyang's arsenal, and directly block Zhang Handan's eastbound road. The danger is great, and siege requires a war of attrition. Failure to win quickly will lead to the original historical crisis. Direction three: original Zhou Wen route. Only the male protagonist of Shuangwen can win, break through Hangu, go straight to Xianyang, directly attack Lishan, and release the prisoners first. The most difficult one is to use a mob to fight against Lieutenant Qin's forbidden army. Direction 4: Consolidate Chu's homeland to the east and use Chen Sheng as a target to attract the Qin army. After Chen Sheng died, he supported King Huai and commanded the world to recruit some of the talents of Liu Bang and Xiang Yu. Joined forces with Xiang Liang, waited for his death, and followed Liu Bang's old path to enter the Pass. Relatively easy, but the Xiang family will seize power.

I really like reading historical hegemony articles, but unfortunately there are not many written now, and even fewer good ones! I quite like the author's writing style, and I have been reading it since the last book. This book tells the story of the late Qin Dynasty, and the protagonist is Wu Guang (one of the protagonists in history who called out princes, generals, and Ning Youhu). The history of this period is quite difficult to write. It requires a lot of historical data to be consulted, and there are relatively few novels to draw from. It tests the author's literary skills and historical knowledge. Come on, author! !

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From the pursuit of General Qin all the way, we can see the author's great love and dedication for writing 👍👍 The amount of knowledge reserve is also 666 🤭🤭 I wish the author greatly "the roc rises with the wind in one day and soars ninety thousand miles" 😡😡 Come on💪

The progress of my plot is still too slow.