Dragon Raja: Lu Mingfei's Dream Conquest Guide

This level of youth romance is not written by a novice.

It's very literary, and the writing style is okay, but there are too few refreshing points, and the fairy world part is not explained clearly. I can see that the author is trying his best to describe the relaxing atmosphere in the fairy world, but I still feel that Lu Mingfei has a lot of things in his heart. He has not changed, which makes people just want to skip it. In fact, this The setting is very good, but in the fairy world and reality, there is no small climax or anything that can make readers feel warmth or positive emotions when Lu Mingfei has not grown up. There is only frustration and anger, which will cause readers to be unable to continue reading. It only represents my personal opinion. Either reduce Lu Mingfei's bad feeling or do a good job of cp. The emotional scenes don't make people's hearts beat. I support Chu Xia in not tearing them apart, but they don't have that kind of sweet feeling. The Dragon Clan fandom is either fun or not. Just talking about sugar, in the dramatic conflict, I feel that Lu Mingfei is just an introduction. I feel so uncomfortable. He has always been like this, or he can always be like this, so let Su Xiaoqiang have the feeling of always supporting Lu Mingfei, which makes people feel that someone is insisting. It definitely supports Lu Mingfei. The text was also written like this in Jiangnan at that time, but other people would have descriptions of other aspects besides Lu Mingfei's bad appearance, such as luxury goods and all kinds of bad jokes, which would alleviate the depressing feeling. The author is also writing bad jokes, but I don't want to laugh when I look at them, which makes Lu Mingfei more angry and even disgusting. I also opened a book in a certain tomato, and only a few hundred people read it, so I know it is not easy to create, but I hope the author will read what I said. I wish the author better and better.

How do you manage to sleep at your age?

I can't understand this kind of article. You have a murderous intention when you are armed with a sharp weapon. Human nature is evil. When you can easily control the destiny of others, it is difficult to control your own heart. Let alone being weak 😰 It's not bad even if you don't penetrate the world.

I pay tribute to another Lu Mingfei who fell on the road of destiny. This Lu Mingfei failed to enter the gate of Kassel after all. His ordinary life was spent from nine to nine, with daily necessities. As for helicopters and men in black? He smiled and said: "It's just a daydream when I was young."

It's draggy and rushed, the rhythm is broken, the dream is too long and cliche, I want to skip it and find that it's not finished until the latest chapter. After all, everyone is here to see the Dragon Clan fandom, just like everyone comes to eat Cantonese food and you serve boiled beef.

Generally speaking, posts that do not involve personal attacks will not be deleted or banned. There was an intermittent post that seemed like a 🐴 plot and I immediately deleted it and permanently banned it. I hope that the brothers who clicked in will leave a little dignity for this book. I don't think I write disgusting things on purpose, and I accept everyone's suggestions. And criticism, if you can't stand the radio wave, please get together and relax, and keep your morals. Even if you really can't help but scold me, please just scold me, don't bring your family with you. I'll forgive you if I offend you. I'll kowtow to everyone here first, and please be a little more civilized.

My evaluation is The author doesn't quite understand what's so cool about this book It's not about love It's not about Xianxia It's about what Lu Mingfei will look like when he comes back from the world of Xianxia Let those who he couldn't ask for before see how handsome Lu Mingfei is And the author writes What is Lu Mingfei like? The second male lead in a romantic drama Although I am strong and handsome, but that's not right, I didn't find what I really need In other words, reading this book, I felt like I was missing something Write more, Meng Xin's first book is like this

Follow what you want and follow. You can't just follow someone else's ideas and become a taxi. There are so many different directions and you can't listen to them all. Of course, you have to read the reviews from time to time to adjust the direction. As a result, I can't see the dream and the reality. If you suddenly tear up the outline, isn't that putting the cart before the horse?

The dream is too long, too long to be a dream, or, in other words, too urgent, too urgent for people to eat and spit out. In fact, the concept of this book is very suitable to my taste. I have always wanted to see a book about why "Return Lu Mingfei" is Return Lu Mingfei. This book does it, but it is not good enough. It is cliched, blunt, and even a bit pretentious. I feel that you just use dreams too much as a tool to change Lu Mingfei. It can be said that there are some problems with the method and form. On the one hand, there is a big gap between the dream chapter and the main plot. This should not be a story with dreams as the carrier. It can completely become a world, or a silhouette of a period of time, making this plot look like the experience after time travel and before the main plot, rather than an interlude stuck in the middle of the plot. On the other hand, the dream chapter itself has many problems. If we continue to proceed step by step as in the previous period, write this plot longer and more detailed, shape everyone more fully, and have more foreshadowing and patience, it will make Lu Mingfei's growth look more realistic. I know that you, the author, feel that there is no room for development and that readers are impatient to point fingers, but in fact, some of us readers also don't know which part to read. The current situation is that the real-life chapter attracts readers' attention, while the dream chapter is about the growth of the characters. The functional differences and the length that are difficult to combine make people impetuous. Of course, I still feel that I am lucky to be able to see this "origin of return". I hope that I can deal with the relationship with the present world in the future. The more I write, the better.