In the Era of Beast Control, I Developed a Star-Breaking Beast

Come on, give the protagonist more room and time to improve, and don't happen to encounter enemies who are superior to you every time

What's there to say? A talent that outsiders think is useless, a backward family, a useless starting pet, the most unpopular profession, really full of buffs, a standard useless start, I can only say that the times have passed 😅

The pace is too slow. After more than fifty chapters, I started to open the wild dungeon. Then the protagonist's contract will probably last two to three hundred chapters. No wonder no one watched or commented on it.

According to this trend, you may not be able to raise this explosive star beast until you are ready, or you may become a eunuch halfway through.

It's so grinding. The instant kill battle requires two chapters and some off-field commentary. There is very little written about how to improve one's strength, and a lot of pitfalls have been dug. The routines are not afraid of getting old, but if you use the old routines continuously, you will still be convinced and it will be difficult to get used to it.

I bet again that the plot is bland,

The plot is pretty flat. It has been more than a hundred chapters. The protagonist has not yet evolved into a beast, and there is no comparison to show the progress of his strength. He can beat people of the same grade in one move, and the protagonist's progress speed is not outstanding. I feel that the author can strengthen these aspects.

A common problem among new authors is that they like to write clichéd plots, but they can't write them well.

As an old bookworm of Yuju style, I have some immature suggestions. The routines of Yuju-ryu novels are actually fixed, and the only ones that can stand out are those that bring freshness to readers and provide more excitement. In layman's terms, the game in this book is the function of learning skills plus proficiency and a castrated version of the evolutionary route, which is so traditional that it can no longer be traditional. Compare it to "After Cheating, I Became the Strongest Beast Controller". Just in terms of the function settings of the plug-in, it brought a lot of freshness, fresh and refined. There is also a novel called "Who taught you how to control beasts like this", which is also a novel about skill transfer + proficiency + castration evolution route plug-in. It stands out because of the intense sense of evolution. In addition to beast control, "Wild Survival" has a unique and complete plot route. "Not the Evil God" and "Miss Witch" simply follow the light novel route. Even though Shu Huang, an author of Yuzhu-style novels that is not very exciting and prefers daily life, was forced to write a book, he also relied on multiple completed books to accumulate popularity and reputation (although I don't like to read them at all). In other words, Yuju-ryu Xianghuo needs to be both exciting and new. Now let's look at the problems with this book. In addition to the plot being the same old researcher preparation and the plug-ins not being anything new, there are also many problems with the pacing. The Wild Trial arranged a story about the Rat King with unknown meaning. You may want to say that this is a foreshadowing for the future, but due to the strength of the protagonist at the time, the protagonist's role in this story was very small. This is a fatal mistake in the early plot arrangement of the beast-control style. The foreshadowing is not buried like this. You can only rely on a few sentences to hint that there is such a black hand, instead of forcing the protagonist to go offline. Next, the more traditional Baby Cup is not played. Of course, the protagonist's hanging requirements are not as high as the Baby Cup, but the Baby Cup is an old routine that provides a lot of fun points in combat. As a result, the author did not arrange a baby cup, but instead wrote a more clichéd pretentious slap in the face. This is the protagonist's first PVP description. It only appeared around Chapter 70. The monster elf has the same level as the protagonist's numerical value, and he actually fought against each other. There was no instant kill, which ruined the excitement. And this plot could not be finished in one chapter. When I saw this, I was so angry that I deleted the book. I am willing to write this long review because of the writing style at the beginning of this book. But the results in books can only be obtained by hard work, and water cannot come out.

Author, give up. The subject matter and storyline are all acceptable, but your hydrological chronicle writing method is not acceptable. After reading 70 chapters so far, I haven't seen any climax plot. It's too bland.

In today's taming beast style, the first taming beast is either a monkey or a panda, and it slipped away.

This achievement is natural. All the supporting characters have no brains and only have one layer of thinking. The protagonist stands in God's perspective and reaches the sky, so there is only half an extra layer. Summary: The score is based on the word count of the subject matter.

I think it's pretty good and suits my taste quite well. Keep up the good work, author, I feel it is no worse than the pet novels listed above. Don't let it be a bad ending, don't let it be a bad ending, come on, author.

I feel that the author's writing style is very good and there is nothing poisonous about it. The golden finger only gives the protagonist a chance to become stronger, unlike many protagonists in today's novels who are essentially puppets of the system, or who are so useless that they don't make good use of the golden finger.

By the way, one more suggestion. You can consider changing the title or introduction of the book. It looks too much like a studio clone. Maybe many old bookworms won't click in to read it.

Tomorrow is Tuesday, a very crucial day. Whether you can be included in the second round of recommendations depends on tomorrow's follow-up reading. Please give me a follow-up reading tomorrow! (Three Rings) If it doesn't make it to the second round of recommendations this week, this book will almost be a death sentence in the editor's eyes, and I'm not sure I can continue writing it...

The book I read so far is well written, but the updates are too slow. Update soon! ! ! !